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Description contest entry for the crystal empire!

category: creativity contest

again sorry for the sloppy job on the background

im gonna go with a bit-creepy-entry starring the mane 6 (rainbow dash not included) dressed up as the negative elements for nightmare night, why are the costumes look so hoofin' real you ask?

with a little help from twilight's magic of course.


so anyways

pinkie pie as the negative laughter: discord

rarity as the negative generosity: nightmare moon

fluttershy as the negative kindness: king sombra

applejack as the negative honesty: crysalyss

and twilight sparkle as the negative magic: demon sunset shimmer

in this arc. rainbow dash failed to perform the sonic rainboom in their fillyhood days and died in a horrible accident.

so...

filly applejack was unhappy in manehattan so she ran away and tried to return to ponyville on her own. without the rainbow guiding her, she got so terribly lost and ventured to the changeling hive. now she is the commanding soldier in crysallys' hive. now they're plotting to overthrow celestia and take over all of equestria. i know she kinda looks like a zerg, heh. Β HIVEJACK


filly fluttershy got stranded in the ground, nopony knew that she was down there, then night fell. the dark, spooky night noises and everfree forest creatures scared her off and she kept running endlessly for her dear life. then she later on learned that the shadows were not foes but allies, the shadow sombra saw potential in her and took over her body. now imagine fluttershy attacking like a wolfo from the legends of zelda, with diamond hard armor and the deadly strategy of a weeping angel *shudders*. Crystals have overgrown on her body and what she is now is just an empty shell. SHYSTAL


unable to discover her destiny, filly rarity returned home in vain. she was a blankflank for so many years until that night of the 1000th summer sun celebration. twilight didnt become celestia's pupil thus celestia was the one who battled nightmare moon and defeated her. her remains lingered in the everfree forest calling forth souls in vain. rarity answered that call and together they merged and... sory i'm kinda making this up as i go along and im all out of ideas for NIGHTMARITY


anywho, failing celestia's entrance exam, filly twilight fled in shame. running away from the academy, her family, and canterlot forever. as years passed shame grew into hate and hate grew into anger. she spent years learning all that she could about the dark arts until she discovered the elements or harmony. with the influence of darkness, the elements of harmony turned to the darkside for some fresh chocolate chip cookies. twilight intends to use this power to end celestia's rein (and also revenge) and rule all of equestria with tyranny. DAELIT


finally theres sweet little pinkamena. the rock farm that she worked on just got an order for garden rocks for canterlot, so the family traveled to the kingdom for delivery and you all know where i'm going with this... pinkamena found discords statue. discord influenced her. blah blah blah so he managed to persuade pinkamena to become the vessel for chaos. DRAKAMENA.

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Comments: 170

Brandon-Vortex In reply to ??? [2015-10-18 13:30:27 +0000 UTC]

crap should have read that part

but holy crap Dash died, since well Rainbow Dash was the key for opening the each of mane six destiny which end up didnt happen

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endaria2021 In reply to Brandon-Vortex [2015-10-18 17:37:58 +0000 UTC]

yeah but don't worry i missed that part to for a while.Β 

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Princess-Giuly-Frost [2015-09-17 20:44:38 +0000 UTC]

This is so cool

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OrigamialStar101 In reply to ??? [2015-09-12 13:00:48 +0000 UTC]

Creepy

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emtav [2015-09-12 09:29:17 +0000 UTC]

Tirek and Rainbow Dash. They could be opposites elements. Tirek betrayed his friend while RD's element is loyalty.

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DarthWill3 [2015-09-12 03:59:20 +0000 UTC]

very impressive!

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Benthehyena [2015-09-05 14:38:40 +0000 UTC]

OH SHIT PINKIE...

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ponymaker55693 In reply to ??? [2015-08-13 19:32:41 +0000 UTC]

WOAH AWESOME PICTURE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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CAT-ATACK [2015-08-08 11:49:59 +0000 UTC]

Rainbow died as a filly??? No problem!!! The R-Dash 5000 is the next best thing!!!

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shardstar3 In reply to CAT-ATACK [2015-09-07 21:42:37 +0000 UTC]

CRUSH KILL DESTROY SWAG

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AlphaShadowKrby In reply to ??? [2015-04-25 01:24:26 +0000 UTC]

No eyelashes?

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randomemaster360 In reply to ??? [2014-10-31 20:14:25 +0000 UTC]

While looking at this, just listen to this:m.youtube.com/watch?v=a3mMSxt0…
This is epic non the less, I love all your takes on what have happened if things might have went in a completely different way.

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xilenobody143 In reply to randomemaster360 [2014-11-03 18:45:06 +0000 UTC]

wow the soundtrack really does match up, kinda uncanny and cool
thanks btwΒ Β 

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randomemaster360 In reply to xilenobody143 [2014-11-05 08:59:40 +0000 UTC]

Indeed it does, especially at the beginning.
And no problem for that.

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RessurectedNightmare [2014-10-26 22:26:45 +0000 UTC]

You have inspired me to create my own Negaverse.

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Ask-Buizel2Floatsel [2014-10-04 22:20:55 +0000 UTC]

....... I'll get the shot gun and maybe a Gatling gun

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NuvaPrime In reply to ??? [2014-09-01 08:31:46 +0000 UTC]

Freaky

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yellowpikmin88 In reply to ??? [2014-06-18 18:51:03 +0000 UTC]

THA HORRAAAAR!!!!

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xilenobody143 In reply to yellowpikmin88 [2014-06-19 14:29:27 +0000 UTC]

awww what a sweet signature

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yellowpikmin88 In reply to xilenobody143 [2014-06-19 14:47:29 +0000 UTC]

but with that said incredibly creative. others have done version where they all become just cold unsociable shells. i.e Rainbow loses her wing and never flies; Fluttershy becomes a feral wild-girl; twilight becomes a miserable kindergarten teacher who takes her anger of failing out on her students; Pinkie never learns to smile, takes over the rock farm and becomes even more devoid of emotion than Maude; Rarity becomes Pinkie's employee and is pushed around all the time; and Applejack becomes practicallyΒ  a female Blueblood. fav.me/d7jn5ec

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AmrasFelagund [2014-06-16 04:04:46 +0000 UTC]

I can easily see Pinkie hopping around on that Ahuizotl tail~

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LunarLightningStrike In reply to ??? [2014-05-27 23:22:38 +0000 UTC]

whoa, crreeepppyyy!!!!!!Β 

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TheGoldenAquarius In reply to ??? [2014-05-23 15:27:25 +0000 UTC]

This is amazingly creepy O_o
I love it) Especially Twi & Rarity)
And Dash... I think after death her soul went to Tartarus, where Tirek persuaded her to team up and get both thenselves revived and take over Equestria blah blah blah and so on)))

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xilenobody143 In reply to TheGoldenAquarius [2014-06-02 12:23:01 +0000 UTC]

THISΒ Β 

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MylesLopez4 In reply to ??? [2014-05-08 20:05:32 +0000 UTC]

Can i correct? If so then its Chrysalis

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Zerada [2014-04-21 08:57:32 +0000 UTC]

Where is Rainbow?

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Dragondash98 In reply to Zerada [2014-05-17 12:20:47 +0000 UTC]

She's dead but from what I hear she may return as a undead enforcer.... if not I think that should happen as she would easily be the most badass of the six.

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Zerada In reply to Dragondash98 [2014-05-17 12:32:51 +0000 UTC]

Okay...

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Dragondash98 In reply to Zerada [2014-05-17 13:29:10 +0000 UTC]

I'll take the astonished look emoticon as you like it.

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Zerada In reply to Dragondash98 [2014-05-17 13:35:01 +0000 UTC]

Ok.

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Dragondash98 In reply to Zerada [2014-05-17 13:39:23 +0000 UTC]

Also trust me I've seen creepier versions of these five and trust me.... they are freaky.

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Zerada In reply to Dragondash98 [2014-05-17 13:50:50 +0000 UTC]

Ok

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MLPdemon422 [2014-04-14 00:14:29 +0000 UTC]

I LOVE THS!!!!!

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xilenobody143 In reply to MLPdemon422 [2014-04-14 05:31:40 +0000 UTC]

i'm glad you did. thanks

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NCbrony [2014-03-31 18:39:04 +0000 UTC]

grade A nightmare fuel everybodyΒ  Β 

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xilenobody143 In reply to NCbrony [2014-04-01 06:10:19 +0000 UTC]

wow never had an A before
*le gasp* a shiny star! yay!

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KivaTheDCWizard [2014-03-19 14:40:57 +0000 UTC]

Many have their version of their failed rainboom scnario.

I have mine, but mine is less dark: kivand6.deviantart.com#/art/ML…

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xilenobody143 In reply to KivaTheDCWizard [2014-03-19 20:38:50 +0000 UTC]

nice one
but this is far from my original plot. i only made these up as i went along to provide random backstories for contest's sake

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StardustLive5 In reply to ??? [2014-03-09 17:41:55 +0000 UTC]

oh now I see why the Rainbow Dash die for causing to fail Sonic Rainboom

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StrandedGeek [2014-01-19 21:50:06 +0000 UTC]

Really nice work,I did something similar myself check it out!

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CandineGirl [2014-01-17 18:22:37 +0000 UTC]

And... Rainbow Dash?

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xilenobody143 In reply to CandineGirl [2014-01-18 11:55:28 +0000 UTC]

er- description

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xilenobody143 In reply to CandineGirl [2014-01-18 11:54:59 +0000 UTC]

le comments

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CandineGirl In reply to xilenobody143 [2014-01-18 22:51:12 +0000 UTC]

Realy.... I don't speak Inglish...

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xilenobody143 In reply to CandineGirl [2014-02-04 03:49:31 +0000 UTC]

sorry. she died, race accident

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CandineGirl In reply to xilenobody143 [2014-02-05 15:52:42 +0000 UTC]

Oh, :c

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xilenobody143 In reply to CandineGirl [2014-02-08 14:26:40 +0000 UTC]

then the sonic rainboom never happened and changed the destiny of the rest of them

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CloudNoFeather [2014-01-14 00:02:12 +0000 UTC]

coo

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xilenobody143 In reply to CloudNoFeather [2014-01-15 14:41:21 +0000 UTC]

thanks, which do you prefer?

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CloudNoFeather In reply to xilenobody143 [2014-01-18 21:14:30 +0000 UTC]

I love twi or rarity the best

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