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Xing-2-Lee — Love in a triangle 10
Published: 2008-11-01 20:16:25 +0000 UTC; Views: 14764; Favourites: 139; Downloads: 34
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I was going to update the new page yesterday night, but my internet suddenly can't cannect and I had to go to bed or my mom will freak out, so I only can wait until now to update it, sorry about that guys.Well, to be honest, there's nothing specical in this page, mainly is talking about how Autobots will do to Wasp, and Ultra Mangus said it, they will eliminate all of Wasp's negative records and let him back to Autobots, and now all they have to do is let Wasp stay in their base and wait till tomorrow when some bots from Cybertron come to take him back, and Wasp is willing to back to Autobots, maybe it looks kind the too easy, but that is what I can only think of, forgive me.
By the way, I spend lots of time on Ultra Mangus, this is the first time I ever draw him, and I almost freak out like the first time I draw Optimus, but at least I still draw him out instead of making him looks almost invisible like I did to Optimus. ( got slap )
If I have some spelling error or you have some better idea about the lines, please tell me, I will be very gald with your help, thank you.
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i would change "Yes sir may i ask whats wrong?"
and this is just a preference but "i will send over some bots" i would change that and "they will be there tomorow OR "they could be there tomorrow" until then, keep him with you.
and "Please dont punish Wasp sir, it was my fault not his" "dont worry kid, we wont hurt him."
and "we are sure wasp is innocent by the statment you made earlier about Longarm Prime, or Shockwave being the real spy, and his escape. But he still has to come back. We have to erase his Records, and Fix him"
"does that mean he can come back to the Autobots?"
"Yes sir i do want to go back to the autobots."
Hey it may look like alot to change, but dont get discourage because your story is very understandable, and these will make it a better quality of story for all of you fans. thanks for letting me do this.
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SERIOUSLY, you can stop it now.
I'm glad that you help, but I don't need it anymore, please, just forget about the gramma.
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I know i know im sorry i wrote them alll at once im soo sorry i realy am im soooo sorry okay? ignore the otherones please! or atleast compare the other time stamps to this one im soooo sorry again i had no idea when i first did all of them okay?!
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Great job on this! Yay! Wasp is a good happy bot now. XD
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Sure he is happy.^^
Thanks.XD
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Oh it is not ending yet.XD
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wasp is autobot again! hooray!
and bumblebee's all nice and cute! XD
OK! spelling check!
First panel: it's ultra "magnus" not ultra "mangus"
second panel: "even" or "event"? i think you meant "event"
fourth panel, first bubble: "talk" instead of "talking"
"got" instead of "get"
seventh panel third bubble: "recodrs" is spelled as "records"
eighth pane,l bumblebee's bubble: "so... does that mean Wasp can back to Autobots?"
you forgot to put "come"
"so... does that mean wasp can 'come' back to Autobots?"
and that's it!
(don't worry, this page had a LOT of writing in it, but any smart person reading this can understand everything what you are trying to say, so great job!)
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Oh what a shame to made so much errors, and thank you so much for finding all my errors and correct them for me.>//////<
I will correct them when the next time I update.^^
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Yay for Wasp~!He's finally gonna be a good guy~!
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Yay! Another update! ^-^
Hehehe, the that bot-thing made me laugh out loud. Wasp's expression is priceless XD
I love the way Bumblebee's ears... or antennas... or whatever! move down when he's sad, up when he's happy/excited etc. Kawaii~ <333
Awwww, don't worry, I love the way you draw Magnus! He's cool ^-^ But Optimus is way cooler(In my option)!
Wasp: I want to go back to Autobots.
Me: D'awwwwww >_____<
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Oh I like the Wasp in that panel too, I was exicted when I add "that bot" into that box.XDDD
Yeah actually those are horns, but I want to make they like ears, so cute aren't they? >////<
I think Magnus and Optimus are both really cool.XDDDD
Many people said Wasp is cute in this page.XDDD
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Very cute, indeed~! <33
I saw ^.~
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me: "that bot" pfrt! *snorts*
still nice! I'm glad they're taking Wasp back
what will happen next?
Pilou: awesome!
update soon!
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Thanks to both of you.XDDDDD
Well keeping watching then you will find out what happen next.^^
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For some reason, Wasp is so moe in this picture!
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By the "moe," do you mean 「萌」？
Then sure he is.XDDDDDD
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Yup. I can't type Chinese on my laptop.
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Yay!!! *inserts cheering tape*
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This is great, is Wasp going to ask that he stay on Earth so he can be near Bumblebee? By the way, I hope I don't seem like a bitch for asking this, but are you planning doing more comics based on SLB?
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Well, actually Wasp will only stay there for one night, and that one night is the most important part of the whole story, I can't tell more detail, hope you keep watching.XP
Oh yes, talking about SLB, actually I'm very willing to do more, cause your stories are really good, but to tell the truth, well, I don't want to make it like excuse, but the problem is I'm kind the stuck and I don't have enought time.
See, I'm not a really pro of drawing, the fact is I'm still learning now, all those comic I made, maybe they look really good for you and the other, and maybe that makes people think that I can easily draw it out, but the truth is every single one page of those comic spend me about average of at least 6 hours, it is a shame, but it is also the truth, from planning the panel to add lines, I need 6 hours to do that, some times even more.
And, some of the stories I have no idea how to make it into comic, and also my English sucks, some of the story you worte I can't understand, like the fifth one, Popsicle, till now I still don't know what is "frozen treat."
And talking about times, well, every Friday the first thing I do after go home is draw the comic, I update it right after I finish it, some times I update on Saturday because I couldn't finish it on Friday, and I can't draw more than that cause I do my homework and study on Saturday, and Sunday is family time, I was spending the longest free time, which is Friday, to draw the comic.
Like I said before, I only do my story in weekend, well actually is Friday, and I do SLB in weekday when I have free time, but the thing is I'm a student who have to get a straight A, but I got two Bs in the past 6 weeks, I can't have anymore free time to draw SLB instead of study my homework, or else I won't even have time to do my comic.
I know maybe these all sound like excuses, but I just hope you can understand my situation and forgive me for haven't do anymore of it for such a long time, sorry about that. >"<
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Kawaii! great job, as always oh great xing-san.
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Awwww, thank you.>////<
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question: boy or girl?
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are you a girl or boy?
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thnx, ling-chan. seriously, your art kicks much ass. I especially loved the newest ch of love in a triangle. how much time does each page take you? it must be at least two days or so to get the shading right...
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Oh thank you so much, that will be too much.>/////<
Glad you love it.XD
Well at least 6 hours I will say...
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really?! dang you're good.
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Not at all, I'm still learning.^^
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...hmm. Somehow, looking at your deviations, i find it hard to believe.
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that you're still learning. Ooh, coincidence. i just noticed that you're icon is blurr, and i just wrote him into my story just now.
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Oh you were writting a story? Cool.XD
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I'm about to put up my first ever hard-core transformers animated smex story.
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