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Published: 2009-04-11 04:03:49 +0000 UTC; Views: 727; Favourites: 21; Downloads: 25
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So like... OMG! Big difference huh? I knew it would be, I mean just look at the old one compared to this
Not great but a little overview! I'm tired as well lol so I might have rambled, I'll change it later XD :tackle:
Anyways Credits:
Art and Characters all (c) to me
Castel's Tail
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Comments: 10
Artistic-Castaway [2009-04-11 04:40:11 +0000 UTC]
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Only thing I see is that your rocks are very round. Maybe add some cracks and raw edges to make them more.. rock like. I think that will really help add some more and better texture to the story. Then you can add all the lil rain droplets and all to add to the effects of the whole story.
Still very nice and I love how you changed the color of the text! The sky is also very nice! Very good and well done!!! Keep up the good work and I hope to see some more!!! Now on to see page two!
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XLegacyXDreamsX In reply to Artistic-Castaway [2009-04-11 04:46:51 +0000 UTC]
Yes my rocks tend to be round lol but I'm still learning, I have issues with rocks... T_T I need to figure out how to shape them and then add the stuff, But I will definitely remember that! cuz I'm dealing with a lot of rocks throughout the comic lol
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Artistic-Castaway In reply to XLegacyXDreamsX [2009-04-11 04:56:26 +0000 UTC]
Rocks play a big part in my first and second issue. If you want, I can send you a tutorial link that has helped me for future pages.
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XLegacyXDreamsX In reply to Artistic-Castaway [2009-04-11 06:04:50 +0000 UTC]
Yes I think rocks make a big difference in art and a story it explains almost emotion if they are done right, like power or pain or fear
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HawkfrostsAvenger [2009-04-11 22:02:25 +0000 UTC]
This is new... Your other manga was cool, so this should be. It looks cool!
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XLegacyXDreamsX In reply to HawkfrostsAvenger [2009-04-12 02:13:32 +0000 UTC]
I hated my last one XD it SUCKED and the pages just didnt fit, m really working on this one though
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HawkfrostsAvenger In reply to XLegacyXDreamsX [2009-04-12 19:28:37 +0000 UTC]
I thought it was great, but this one is better.
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XLegacyXDreamsX In reply to HawkfrostsAvenger [2009-04-12 19:38:36 +0000 UTC]
I have to agree
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