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Published: 2009-04-11 04:03:49 +0000 UTC; Views: 727; Favourites: 21; Downloads: 25
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So like... OMG! Big difference huh? I knew it would be, I mean just look at the old one compared to this And I changed the landscape too, cuz I liked this better. I have the third page sketched out completely but I still need to scan it in and the second page will be up in a matter of minutes. I'm still thinking about the 4th page because its kind of the breaker in the first three pages. I'm not sure where I want to go with it quite yet but I definitely have an Idea and the first panel is already sketched and the second has the "shapes"

Anyways, Welcome to the land of Karanza... Or what used to be Karanza before the High Power was thrown out. This is a tale of their leaving and searching for a new home, living as rogues and fighting to keep their lives. They barely got away when they were attacked and now on their journey they are finding that it wasn't only a raid, they were all literally out to kill each and every one of them. Thanks to the Lekay Miraz and their once brother pack, Fire mountain, accompanied by several thunder wolves (such as their alpha and their guards), are on the run for the first time in their lives and they find this time, danger may be lurking any and everywhere... This is the tale of these legendary wolves When Darkness Sets.

Not great but a little overview! I'm tired as well lol so I might have rambled, I'll change it later XD :tackle:

Anyways Credits:

Art and Characters all (c) to me
Castel's Tail (c) to
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Comments: 10

Artistic-Castaway [2009-04-11 04:40:11 +0000 UTC]

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Only thing I see is that your rocks are very round. Maybe add some cracks and raw edges to make them more.. rock like. I think that will really help add some more and better texture to the story. Then you can add all the lil rain droplets and all to add to the effects of the whole story.

Still very nice and I love how you changed the color of the text! The sky is also very nice! Very good and well done!!! Keep up the good work and I hope to see some more!!! Now on to see page two!

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XLegacyXDreamsX In reply to Artistic-Castaway [2009-04-11 04:46:51 +0000 UTC]

Yes my rocks tend to be round lol but I'm still learning, I have issues with rocks... T_T I need to figure out how to shape them and then add the stuff, But I will definitely remember that! cuz I'm dealing with a lot of rocks throughout the comic lol

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Artistic-Castaway In reply to XLegacyXDreamsX [2009-04-11 04:56:26 +0000 UTC]

Rocks play a big part in my first and second issue. If you want, I can send you a tutorial link that has helped me for future pages.

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XLegacyXDreamsX In reply to Artistic-Castaway [2009-04-11 06:04:50 +0000 UTC]

Yes I think rocks make a big difference in art and a story it explains almost emotion if they are done right, like power or pain or fear

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HawkfrostsAvenger [2009-04-11 22:02:25 +0000 UTC]

This is new... Your other manga was cool, so this should be. It looks cool!

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XLegacyXDreamsX In reply to HawkfrostsAvenger [2009-04-12 02:13:32 +0000 UTC]

I hated my last one XD it SUCKED and the pages just didnt fit, m really working on this one though

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HawkfrostsAvenger In reply to XLegacyXDreamsX [2009-04-12 19:28:37 +0000 UTC]

I thought it was great, but this one is better.

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XLegacyXDreamsX In reply to HawkfrostsAvenger [2009-04-12 19:38:36 +0000 UTC]

I have to agree

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Artistic-Castaway [2009-04-11 04:37:52 +0000 UTC]

Very nice!!!

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XLegacyXDreamsX In reply to Artistic-Castaway [2009-04-11 04:41:42 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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