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xNalax — ive done the best i can

Published: 2009-07-29 05:38:53 +0000 UTC; Views: 3386; Favourites: 93; Downloads: 0
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Description I finally found the perfect song for my life right now
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Second Chance - Shinedown
My eyes are open wide
By the way I made it through the day
I watch the world outside
By the way I'm leaving out today

I just saw Haley's Comet, she waved
Said, "Why are you always running in place?"
Even the man in the moon disappeared
Somewhere in the stratosphere

Tell my mother, tell my father I've done the best I can
To make them realize this is my life, I hope they understand
I'm not angry, I'm just saying
Sometimes goodbye is a second chance

Please don't cry one tear for me
I'm not afraid of what I have to say
This is my one and only voice
So listen close, it's only for today

I just saw Haley's Comet, she waved
Said, "Why are you always running in place?"
Even the man in the moon disappeared
Somewhere in the stratosphere"

Tell my mother, tell my father I've done the best I can
To make them realize this is my life, I hope they understand
I'm not angry, I'm just saying
Sometimes goodbye is a second chance

Here is my chance
This is my chance

Tell my mother, tell my father I've done the best I can
To make them realize this is my life, I hope they understand
I'm not angry, I'm just saying
Sometimes goodbye is a second chance
Sometimes goodbye is a second chance
Sometimes goodbye is a second chance
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OHWAIHELLOTHARIDIDNTSEEYOU.
yesyes, if you can believe it, i dragged my museless ass back on DA and gave you another manip from yours truly. Love it hate it, i dont care. But this got lost 3 times so im tired.

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Comments: 25

perso-melodia [2009-07-29 10:04:18 +0000 UTC]

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This is a lovely piece and is beautiful to look at. You created the scene very well and the idea is inspiring. The positioing on the horse in pretty much perfect and the lighting on the face helps add to the stunning dramatic effect. The mane is beautiful, but I would suggest fixing the tail at the top as it seems to take on a smudged effect and sticks out a little bit from the rest of hair. ^_^ It might just need dodged and burned a little,

Thats the only thing I can think of that needs any altering. I love this piece, well done e.deviantart.net/emoticons/h/h… " width="15" height="13" alt="" title="Heart" />

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xNalax In reply to perso-melodia [2009-07-29 17:36:23 +0000 UTC]

Thanks so much for this critique! I really really appreciate it.

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perso-melodia In reply to xNalax [2009-07-29 19:47:59 +0000 UTC]

thanks

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K4nK4n [2011-09-23 10:18:49 +0000 UTC]

This is a beautiful image!

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suzusgirl [2011-05-05 22:17:41 +0000 UTC]

OMFG

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Shimshims [2009-08-02 00:31:11 +0000 UTC]

This is very beautiful. It just oozes emotion

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xNalax In reply to Shimshims [2009-08-02 02:59:04 +0000 UTC]

8D thank joo!

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hyppopatamoose [2009-07-29 18:30:26 +0000 UTC]

beautiful

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xNalax In reply to hyppopatamoose [2009-07-29 18:34:30 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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Kiwiaa [2009-07-29 15:07:12 +0000 UTC]

Woow I love the lighting ^^ -adore-

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xNalax In reply to Kiwiaa [2009-07-29 17:36:47 +0000 UTC]

Thanks dear.

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skitzefrienicrabbit [2009-07-29 10:33:38 +0000 UTC]

good song and good art

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xNalax In reply to skitzefrienicrabbit [2009-07-29 17:37:23 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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skitzefrienicrabbit In reply to xNalax [2009-07-29 20:16:29 +0000 UTC]

np

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forgotten-phoenix [2009-07-29 07:37:42 +0000 UTC]

Gah, my manes suck compared to yours x.x i adore yours xD and this pic too! o.o

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xNalax In reply to forgotten-phoenix [2009-07-29 17:37:16 +0000 UTC]

aww i've always hated my manes and tails.

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forgotten-phoenix In reply to xNalax [2009-07-29 18:25:12 +0000 UTC]

its pretty tho D: mine.. needs work i must admit. xD

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tysmommy [2009-07-29 07:14:04 +0000 UTC]

perfect. as always.

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xNalax In reply to tysmommy [2009-07-29 17:37:29 +0000 UTC]

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venomxbaby [2009-07-29 05:55:18 +0000 UTC]

this is spectacular!!!! wow.

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xNalax In reply to venomxbaby [2009-07-29 05:55:53 +0000 UTC]

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Swan-Studio [2009-07-29 05:44:03 +0000 UTC]

NAAALLAAA LIVES <3

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xNalax In reply to Swan-Studio [2009-07-29 05:46:12 +0000 UTC]

OMG NO FUCKING WAY. 8D
hrmmm....
my eyes hurteth.
it couldnt be from the screen or anything.
its from the fishbiskits.

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tynomi [2009-07-29 05:42:55 +0000 UTC]

really gorgeous. I love the light strands in the mane and tail

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xNalax In reply to tynomi [2009-07-29 05:44:08 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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