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Published: 2005-04-04 12:54:52 +0000 UTC; Views: 38; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 0
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Like a vase without a rose,I sit on the bed without my clothes,
And like a little girl without her teddy,
I’m lying with him not feeling ready.
But if I don’t he says he’ll go,
And I don’t want that so I can’t say no,
He says he loves me, don’t I love him?
And I do, so I guess I’ll give in.
But here deep down, something’s wrong,
Something- someone’s saying not to go on.
So now I’m laying here feeling cold,
Wondering if I should just do as I’m told.
I don’t feel ready, it doesn’t feel right,
But I don’t want him to leave me alone at night.
So what do I do? What could I possibly say?
To make him accept it, but want to stay?
Comments: 19
xpythonx In reply to uzzie2003 [2005-04-04 13:04:53 +0000 UTC]
Ah I do love you Uz, you always like my stuff but now I'm afraid you have to die...will it be death by fork
...or will it be death by the attack of the flying tomatoes
? Hmmm...tricky...lol
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devioustreachery [2005-04-04 12:57:34 +0000 UTC]
i really like this poem.. beautifully written.. and heartfelt.. and i felt like thta at one point in time.. if i am correct as to what u are referring too... i love it tho...
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xpythonx In reply to devioustreachery [2005-04-04 13:05:51 +0000 UTC]
I believe you are, and thanks so much for commenting
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devioustreachery In reply to xpythonx [2005-04-04 13:22:42 +0000 UTC]
would u like me to.... ?
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devioustreachery In reply to xpythonx [2005-04-04 13:22:21 +0000 UTC]
would u like me to say what i think about it....
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devioustreachery In reply to xpythonx [2005-04-04 14:59:16 +0000 UTC]
just tell that person if they love u.. they will respect the way u feel.. and they wont push u to do something that u arent ready to do.. if they love u they will give u time..
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xpythonx In reply to devioustreachery [2005-04-04 15:48:06 +0000 UTC]
Must remember *writes on forehead* Merci!
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devioustreachery In reply to xpythonx [2005-04-04 15:58:30 +0000 UTC]
haha.. dont let anyone make u do something u dont want to do.. ull end up with flashbacks...
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