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xpythonx β€” Now That You're Gone.
Published: 2005-03-22 16:54:32 +0000 UTC; Views: 42; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 1
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Description When in the brightened moonlight,
On this endless, silent night,
Through darkness whence comes shadows,
So beautiful a sight.

And in this sacred hour
That I tread upon this ground,
With every step that passes me,
Nothing, not a sound.

In respect and sadness,
I spread what is left of you,
And a silent tear falls to the ground
Gracefully, as I do.

For in your dying hour,
As you lie there next to me,
You whisper one last wish,
And grip my hand bravely.

And as I lose your grip and
The screen shows a line,
I sit there silent, falling,
Still holding your hand in mine.

The pain you felt is over,
But mine must carry on,
Though how I shall bear it,
I know not, now you’re gone.
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Comments: 10

Teh-Luse [2005-03-22 22:47:17 +0000 UTC]

as ive already said.. tis v-good

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xpythonx In reply to Teh-Luse [2005-03-23 13:30:25 +0000 UTC]

*curtseys* merci dear

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CloveSmokeCatharis [2005-03-22 21:26:38 +0000 UTC]

like I said on the bus, brilliant.

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xpythonx In reply to CloveSmokeCatharis [2005-03-22 21:40:54 +0000 UTC]

*curtseys* thank you

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Sharon-Flowers [2005-03-22 17:21:22 +0000 UTC]

I love this poem! Very good.

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xpythonx In reply to Sharon-Flowers [2005-03-22 17:44:59 +0000 UTC]

Thanks so much D

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uzzie2003 [2005-03-22 17:11:19 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful.. so emotional

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xpythonx In reply to uzzie2003 [2005-03-22 17:46:47 +0000 UTC]

Aww I hate you so much Uz

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Mogjitsu [2005-03-22 16:58:46 +0000 UTC]

So emotional, I like the contrast of the fantasy style verses with the more realistic.

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xpythonx In reply to Mogjitsu [2005-03-22 17:44:37 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

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