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Published: 2004-12-24 12:03:52 +0000 UTC; Views: 69; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 2
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Everyday when I walked that mile to school,I would face nothing, but pain and ridicule.
I would just hide behind my books,
And try to ignore those dirty looks.
Until one day it really got bad,
Something happened that made me go mad.
The only friend I had ever known,
Invited me round to her home,
She sounded like there was something wrong,
Little did I know she would soon be gone.
When I arrived it was almost night,
I looked at her from left to right,
I saw her hanging from a rope,
For her now there was no hope.
I took a knife and cut her down
And on her dress a note was found:
Dig my grave, dig it deep,
Dig my grave from head to feet
On the top, place a dove
And remember this, I died for love
I stood there feeling all alone,
I couldnβt go back to school were my enemies roamed,
So I picked up the nearest chair,
I thought for I while, did I dare?
Then I stepped up and held my breath,
Preparing myself for a painful death.
I wrapped the rope around my throat
And looked back down at the words she wrote.
Then at last I slipped and fell,
Doomed to perish in the pits of hellβ¦
Comments: 13
playfielder [2005-02-07 11:24:10 +0000 UTC]
just read it again, beautiful and excellent, i can see y its a fav
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Teh-Luse [2005-01-21 22:03:43 +0000 UTC]
amazing. but makes me sad about how people don't try to live on after a loss. they just give up.
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xpythonx In reply to Teh-Luse [2005-01-25 15:39:47 +0000 UTC]
if my only friend in the entire world decided 2 end it id go straight after them. wtf is the point in life without them
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Teh-Luse In reply to xpythonx [2005-01-25 17:44:33 +0000 UTC]
i can see the opinion you give. but. don't you believe that in the future that person would make new friends. time is the greatest medicine. the person may always miss their friend, but new friends can be made.
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xpythonx In reply to Teh-Luse [2005-01-25 19:13:35 +0000 UTC]
if at the time uve just lost the only person in the world that matters to u do u really think that they will consider the future and what it holds when they are looking at their best friends limp body lying there
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Teh-Luse In reply to xpythonx [2005-01-25 21:10:17 +0000 UTC]
maybe they won't consider the future at that point, but does everyone make rash decisions.
decissions are serious as ending your life?
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KornsDisturbedLinkin [2004-12-24 21:09:49 +0000 UTC]
you seem to always have such great ending lines...good job.
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xpythonx In reply to KornsDisturbedLinkin [2004-12-25 10:27:07 +0000 UTC]
thanks merry xmas
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xpythonx In reply to uzzie2003 [2004-12-24 12:12:47 +0000 UTC]
Lol thank you very much Uzzie *curtseys....and falls over*
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