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ittle sister of xred-eyey: Umm sorry for the bad grammer...Yeah this is the next page, enjoy!
If I become a comet I will post the next page... hmmm next week.
Charakters=not mine
Fanstory=mine
My comic is inspiratet by this Mystery:
"I am not, I was not.
I will not be.
You mean, I joke? I say to you: No!
I stand obviously before your face,
and when you finally find the mystery solution, then you call me not."
Do you know the mystery solution?
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Comments: 23
RachelLevitte [2010-11-21 06:38:49 +0000 UTC]
isn't the silence the answere of the misterious?
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RachelLevitte In reply to XRed-EyeX [2010-11-21 18:04:20 +0000 UTC]
In your description you make a misterious I mean you said you were inspired on that, and I remember a friend told me a similar misterious in spanish, and the answered was the silence...so I asked you if the answere of your misterious is: "The silence"
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XRed-EyeX In reply to RachelLevitte [2010-11-21 18:22:16 +0000 UTC]
Chris: No. the answer is the Nothingness
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SymphonyAlchemist [2008-04-25 02:02:07 +0000 UTC]
Oh, I don't see why people are so big on grammar and how boring it is. I don't really think it is. :3 Well, then again, I am lenient and nonchalant. But I really like this comic. There's not a a lot of Ben 10 fancomics. And I'm not bored of the comic, I wanna read more!
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Lacili [2008-03-24 04:56:41 +0000 UTC]
I actually really like this. I enjoyed this comic a lot.
I do have a problem with spelling and grammar, but only because I'm an editor [Editors notice these things]
You should find someone willing to alter these and clean them up a little bit more.
Also: I hope these continue.
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XRed-EyeX In reply to Lacili [2008-03-24 11:55:56 +0000 UTC]
little sister of XRed-EyeX: Thank you, and sorry that it took so long I have so much to do for my schoolwork.
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Lacili In reply to XRed-EyeX [2008-03-24 16:31:54 +0000 UTC]
Haha, don't apologise about that. I totally understand. I'm ovewhelmed at school myself.
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XRed-EyeX In reply to Lacili [2008-03-24 16:48:41 +0000 UTC]
little sister of XRed-EyeX: Thank you
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Norcinu [2007-11-01 06:05:43 +0000 UTC]
Er, yeah... Out off all the Naruto in your gallery, there's suddenly a Ben 10 comic? Strange mix.
You may want to get someone to go through the grammar and spelling because it's not too good. Even I could help as it's sometimes a little hard to read.
Like what Robotrules said, Ben10 = Aliens and action. Usually.
But looking forward to the next chapter I guess.
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XRed-EyeX In reply to dead82 [2007-09-30 10:51:00 +0000 UTC]
little ister of XRed-EyeX: My inspiration (my best friend) is gone. ^.^She come back in two weeks.
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XRed-EyeX In reply to Loveylove [2007-07-14 17:14:35 +0000 UTC]
little sister of xred-eyex: Of course it will! Thanks for your comment!
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XRed-EyeX In reply to specialb [2007-07-09 12:00:05 +0000 UTC]
little sister of xred-eyex: Thanks! You a nice persson ^.^ I have summerholiday next week, I mean much time to draw! ^0^
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XRed-EyeX [2007-07-09 03:59:01 +0000 UTC]
little sister of xred-eyeX: Thanks for the Criticism, I will try to put more action on it....
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Robotrules [2007-07-08 18:06:00 +0000 UTC]
Boring!
where's the action on this? You draw good but stories not much.
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