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XROSS — insomnia fire first draft
Published: 2005-06-17 04:04:58 +0000 UTC; Views: 154; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 8
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Description and as i lay in bed, fighting a losing battle against consciousness, dreaming of those people whom i hold so dear, i wonder if any one of them is fighting the same battle,




                                                                          dreaming of me.
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Comments: 7

wolfmaid [2005-06-17 18:10:44 +0000 UTC]

1: poems have line breaks
2: EEEEEEEMMMMMMMOOOOOOOOOOO
C:

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XROSS In reply to wolfmaid [2008-10-11 20:34:12 +0000 UTC]

so uhhhhh, i fixed your line break issue. go to my profile and it's my featured deviation.

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XROSS In reply to wolfmaid [2005-06-17 18:28:36 +0000 UTC]

well, it had line breaks, and funky spacing, but daniel made me take it out, because he said that it "took away from the poem"

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sasquatch123456 [2005-06-17 14:19:40 +0000 UTC]

lose the picture. its too hard to follow. the other one was neat because the poem its self wasnt as important, but this one, the accual words are really good. also, its hard to tell what it is unless you know its fire.

other than that, you know my feelings on the poem. and if you dont, I LOVE YOU FOR THIS POEM.

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XROSS In reply to sasquatch123456 [2005-06-17 16:58:12 +0000 UTC]

there, happy?

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mendingheart [2005-06-17 04:16:53 +0000 UTC]

This reminds me of a The Starting Line song, mhm. it's really good though. good job.

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Serpent-Iris [2005-06-17 04:07:54 +0000 UTC]

It's 12:06 at night and I'm really tired so forgive me if my question is completley "out of it", but do the lines in your poem for a picture? If they do, tell me what it is, if it doesn't, that would be cool if it did. Your tired and I'm tired, we're on the same level.

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