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EDIT: The following text contains major spoilers for the current draft of Wings of Fire: Revenant. A lot of this will be changed in the rewrite (most notably a lot of the dialogue will be scrapped and redone) but I felt it was still fair to include a spoiler warning.
You can start reading Revenant here:
Part One:
Night had fallen by the time they reached the Claws of the Clouds Mountains, and the storm was beginning to reach full strength. Thin veins of lightning appeared in flashes of blinding light, as if invisible talons had reached down to slash open the sky. Great blue-gray clouds rolled in, thunder growling restlessly in their bellies. The mountain range stood in sharp relief against the horizon, each flash illuminating the peaks like rows upon rows of jagged teeth.
Peacemaker felt the chain looped around his wrist give a powerful jerk as Kinkajou desperately attempted to free herself from the links of metal wrapped tight around her mouth, neck, wrists, and wings.
“Stop that!” Peacemaker snapped, giving his end of the chain a tug so violent it nearly caused her to topple to the ground. She shot him a poisonous glare, clouds of scarlet and black rage dancing among the myriad of other colors parading across her scales.
“Now be still…and don’t worry,” Peacemaker hissed, the edges of his lips drawing up into a sickly smile, “your prince charming will be here soon enough.” With that the young dragon threw back his head and breathed a tower of fire up, up, up into the sky. He turned back to look at her, his blue eyes as cold as the wind which blew in from the Ice Kingdom in the dead of winter. “I think that ought to get his attention, don’t you?”
A growl rumbled in Kinkajou’s throat, but the chain around her mouth prevented her from speaking. Among the other colors dancing across her scales were whorls of pale green fear, purple confusion, pale blue worry, and, most surprisingly, generous blots of dark gray, the color of sadness. Even now, as she glared venomously back at him, he could see an underlying sorrow in her dark green eyes. A sadness which showed even beneath her anger, and a question spoken without works: “Why are you doing this?”
A painful twist seized Peacemaker’s heart, his head clouding with unwanted memories. Kinkajou encouraging his clumsy first attempts at flight. Kinkajou bringing him his favorite fruits when he was sick in bed. Kinkajou eating his sad little burnt pies and relishing every bite. Kinkajou sitting and listening to him talk about the things he knew he could never tell Hope or Moon, because they’d worry too much. He remembered once when he was very young he had suddenly decided he wanted to have color-changing scales like a Rainwing, and so Kinkajou had made up some dye from rainforest berries and let him be whatever color he wanted. When the other Nightwing dragonets made fun of the rainbow scales beneath his wings, Kinkajou had mimicked his colors for at least a month, stating that if anyone made fun of him, they’d have to make fun of her too. His heart ached with the memory of her walking side by side with him, glancing challengingly around at the other dragonets, as if daring them to make a snide comment.
Peacemaker grimaced. What was he doing? This dragon was his friend!
He shook his head fiercely, a whole new set of memories suddenly crashing down on him like ocean waves. No! This was her fault! She had masterminded his enchantment, tricked him, stripped him of his powers, his memories, and even his very identity. She had deceived him, pretending she cared about him, pretending she was his friend, and all in the name of making sure he never learned the truth. Well, he knew the truth now, and he would not be swayed by foolish sentimentality.
Just then a flash of luminescent scales appeared on the horizon, getting closer and closer until an emerald green form materialized from the darkness of the mountains and the storm.
Kinkajou’s scales turned suddenly pale green and white, an amalgamate of terror and distress.
Turtle was close enough now that they could hear his heavy, clumsy wingbeats and see the desperate confusion written all over his face. “Peacemaker, what are you doing?!” he demanded, his eyes fixed to the chains looped around Kinkajou’s body.
“Stay back!” Peacemaker snarled, flaring his wings so that the rainbow scales flashed threateningly. “Don’t come any closer!”
Cautiously, Turtle lighted down on the cliff opposite them. It was uncanny how much the young Seawing looked like his ancient ancestor, Fathom. Fathom, the dragon who had stolen everything from Peacemaker…from Darkstalker. Fathom, the dragon who had been rewarded with the happy ending he had denied his so-called friend.
“Peacemaker, what’s going on? What are you doing with Kinkajou?” He looked as if he wanted to believe this was all some kind of elaborate joke, but the fear in Kinkajou’s eyes told him it wasn’t. The Rainwing was now balancing on her back feet, craning to get a good look at Turtle, as if her stare alone might be able to communicate to him that he should run away and never look back. Turtle looked past Peacemaker at her, his eyes so desperately confused and fearful it was almost pathetic.
His gaze fell back to Peacemaker, back to his altered gaze and poisonous expression, and the realization suddenly came crashing down on the Seawing like an avalanche of ice and stone. “Three moons…you know,” the Seawing breathed.
“Know what?” Peacemaker snapped. “That all of you who called yourself my friends betrayed me? Stole my powers? Stole my memories? Stole my life?! That you pretended to care for me when all along you told me nothing but lies?!”
“But I wasn’t…I didn’t…”
“No, you didn’t. You’re not clever enough for that. But she did,” Peacemaker said, gesturing to Kinkajou with a wave of his tail.
Turtle’s chest heaved with increasing desperation. “But…that…that wasn’t her fault. She had no choice. Darkstalker he….you…you were killing dragons, brainwashing them to follow you…you were going to take over all of Pyrrhia.”
“Oh, so brainwashing is only acceptable when you’re taking down an ultra powerful supervillain, is that it? Are there any other special rules you ‘heroes’ are entitled to?”
“That’s…that’s not…”
“That’s exactly what it is!”
“But…but what else were we supposed to do? You…you didn’t leave us any choice” the Seawing’s voice was shaking so hard he could barely speak.
“You should have done nothing. I had great plans for Pyrrhia. A united kingdom, my tribe restored to full strength, and me as their king, leading them towards all their best possible futures. That’s the future I saw. That’s the future I still see.”
He gave the chain a sharp jerk, and Kinkajou was forced back down onto all fours. “I am fully prepared to make this dragon pay for everything she stole from me…” he paused, a distant roar of thunder breaking the silence, “unless you and I can come to some sort of…understanding.”
Turtle was silent for a long moment “What kind of understanding?”
“You recognize this chain? It’s the one your sister enchanted to send to Queen Thorn’s prisons in the Kingdom of Sand. As long as Kinkajou is bound with it, none of your magic will work on her, and only I know the location of the key. If you try to use your magic to kill me or remove me in any way, then we both fall.” He raised his arm so Turtle could clearly see the chain double wound around his wrist. “And she can’t fly. Only I can free her, so don’t get any bright ideas about trying to outsmart me. We both know you’re not capable of that.”
Turtle looked from Peacemaker to Kinkajou about twenty times in the span of about half a second. “What is it you want?”
“It’s simple. You change me back to the way I was, with all my powers intact, and I won’t kill her.”
Turtle’s gold-flecked eyes widened with horror. “I…I won’t! I can’t!”
“You can. For all your limited imagination and even more limited brain power, you are still an animus. Any spell that has been done can be undone, as you more than proved when you got your powers back.”
“No! I won’t do it!”
“Then you’ll watch the dragon you love die,” Peacemaker hissed, holding a single claw a hair length from Kinkajou’s neck.
“Peacemaker, please! You can’t do this! Kinkajou is your friend!”
“There is no Peacemaker! It’s an enchantment. A prison of flesh and blood. I am Darkstalker and none of you are my friends!”
A bolt of lightning ripped across the sky with a roar that shook the stone beneath their feet. For a brief moment a flash of white light reflected in the tears rolling down the Seawing’s face.
“Make your choice, Turtle. Does she live, or does she die?”
A scene from the climax of my as of yet nonexistent Peacemaker fan fiction, Wings of Fire: Revenant (if you're new here, you can find related pictures in my gallery). Peacemaker gets back his memories of being Darkstalker and kidnaps Kinkajou to use as leverage against Turtle so that he will return him to his original form. Only one dragon can stop him, and she's in a race against the clock to reach him before it's too late. I was really inspired by the climax of Phantom of the Opera (Down Once More), hence the title.
I'm actually really, really proud of how Turtle came out. I've never drawn a full body Seawing before, and I'm really glad that he turned out so well. Rainwings are the hardest tribe for me to draw (don't ask me why, because I don't know) so I'm also happy that Kinkajou didn't end up looking like a total disaster. I had way too much fun with the lighting, just so you know.
No critique desired. Please respect that.
Wings of Fire belongs to Tui T. Sutherland
The art belongs to me, and you are not permitted to steal, trace, copy, reference, or otherwise redistribute it in any way. I also do not want to see this posted on RP sites, Facebook, YouTube, etc. without my permission. That's still art theft.
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Comments: 73
Draftmaker17 In reply to ??? [2023-09-20 04:35:56 +0000 UTC]
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FORTNITEJETSFLIGT [2020-05-11 13:08:08 +0000 UTC]
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worldgovermentleader [2020-01-02 17:31:06 +0000 UTC]
Love the artwork. I think the story is awesome. Great job. The song that I think goes with it is return by NF. You can post the lyrics and song in the description. Link: youtu.be/TkiDouBnDrU
What is perfect? Not me
I've been overworking for weeks
I go home then purchase some things
That I know will not fill my needs
Have a dose of what I've achieved
Then get lonesome and I critique
Who I am and what I believe
Make up standards too high to reach
Untrained animal off the leash
I'm in panic, but yet relieved
Brought your hammock to hang with me?
Grab a hatchet, cut down your tree
Like a mannequin that can speak
What I have in store is unique
I just mop the floors with MCs
I can't stop until things are clean
I'm an amateur's what you think
So you stand there in disbelief
'Til I dislocate both your feet
That's what happens, you step to me
Not too graphic, but not PG
Lots of action in every scene
I'm kidnapping all of your dreams
Hold 'em hostage and watch 'em scream (ah!)
Rap aside, I am what I advertise
Don't matter how you put it, we live
Then we have to die
You might hate it, but you can't deny
See, everything that I've been doing got me looking like a mastermind
It's so vain, but I vandalize that I do what you fantasizing
Took a vision of my dreams
And then found a better way that I can make it
I've been looking, think I'm really 'bout to maximize it (agh!)
These bullets form in my mind and come out my mouth and (pow, pow, pow)
For anyone out there doubting or acting mouthy (watch, watch, watch)
Forget what you heard about me, I've been astounding (God, God, God)
Something for you thinking you might run circles 'round me
Yeah, ain't this all I ever wanted?
That's a fact, no, that's a lie, no
I'm confused, yeah, I got problems
What's the use? Yeah, let's be honest
Screws are loose, I need 'em tightened
Not amused, yeah, look what I did
Brought you something, hope you like it
So precise, the flow the nicest
So productive, stop your whining
Back in style like I was vinyl
I make songs and they go viral
Something's off if I go idle
"Been so long, " yeah, okay, I know
Take your shoes off, you're in my home
You got fans, but not like I do, yeah
Thankful, I try to be, can't contain what's inside of me
They don't like this side of me 'cause I lack in compliancy
I question what I can see if you're not playing my CD
No expiring, I'll decide when I think it's my time to leave (woo)
Yeah, 'cause they won't retire me, it inspires me to be inspiring
When I'm low I feel like I'm spiraling
Pushing forward, look, I can't ignore it
There ain't no I in team, but drop the T and A
Sometimes, if I'm being honest, feels like it's only me
No defeat, notably, better have it right if you're quoting me
Write my name on your hit list, it might be the last time you wrote something
Rip that cocky smile right off your face for thinking you're close to me
Grab a can of gasoline, light it all over your self-esteem
Selfishly watching y'all helplessly pretend you're on my planet
Shoot you out of the sky like you're punchlines, you are not landing
Gun jamming, reach in your mouth and rip out your tongue after tongue
Lashings, I hand 'em out like pamphlets in church, pastors
Show up to my funeral wearing all black, and what's happening?
I look around and wonder, "Where my fans at?"
Oh Lord, they know me so well, they know I'm not in that casket
Trash bag is prolly buried somewhere full of my ashes
My music's superb, playing with words, play with my nerves
They gon' have a list of issues long as my shirts
Very absurd, very disturbed
Stare at the Earth like, "This is not the place I was birthed"
I'm generic, you sure?
Oh, they think I'm very reserved
'Til I open up on the beat like on my Therapy work
I don't care what you heard, real scary, carry the verse
While I'm wearing my merch', stomping on your arrogant turf
Sit back and observe, nah, I like to actually work
This life's so unpredictable, it just keeps pitching me curves
I take a swing, I hate the things that make me feel like I'm dirt
I've patiently been waiting, please, I think it's time for my turn
My expertise are melodies, they talk to me when I'm hurt
Just let me be, eventually someday they'll see what I'm worth
I cross my Is and dot my Ts, it makes no sense, but I've learned
Normal to you is not to me, the outcast finally returns.
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xVexVamp In reply to worldgovermentleader [2020-01-13 04:42:59 +0000 UTC]
Thanks, I'm glad you like it! And thanks for the song recommendations, I'll check them out.
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darklighteryphon [2019-10-15 17:08:07 +0000 UTC]
Nice, I like that Peacemaker was struggling with he's past life as Darkstalker and he's new one, I also liked that deep down a part of him cares about he's friends but also a part of him hates them for what they did to him.
I also like that what the heroes ( mostly Kinkajou ) did to him is left morally ambiguous because it really wasn't black and white like most people think it was.
I also like the art especially the faces because you can really see the emotions the characters have.
All and all I really like this.
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xVexVamp In reply to darklighteryphon [2019-10-15 22:26:43 +0000 UTC]
Thanks so much, I really appreciate that! That's really what I was going for in this story, especially since I was so dissatisfied with how black and white they tried to make the issue in DoD.
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darklighteryphon In reply to xVexVamp [2019-10-18 07:26:08 +0000 UTC]
Your welcome. Yeah I mean Using magic to change someone's being can be wrong but Darkstalker didn't seem like the type who would just give up just because he was wrong and given the fact he was immortal the only way they could have stopped him was to use he's own powers against him. It was not the first time someone used magic to stop him.
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John108 [2019-06-04 04:55:20 +0000 UTC]
I love it, PERIOD, It's all that mah fandom spirit could ask for.
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John108 In reply to xVexVamp [2019-06-04 19:24:12 +0000 UTC]
NP! I absolutely love the way you write your fan-fic, and tbh, I was also planning on doing a fan-fic on which Peacemaker gets back his memories of when he was Darkstalker too. (but mine goes a bit different way oof xD) All in all, I just adore this story so much! I hope I can see the whole fan-fic of this one day! <3
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xVexVamp In reply to John108 [2019-06-04 20:13:49 +0000 UTC]
Thanks again! That's very kind of you to say.
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Nightwing66 [2019-01-16 11:52:09 +0000 UTC]
Very nice story! And art
And i just imagine these lines here:
"You given a second chance and a new life! Why throw it away?"
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GLORYFAN101 [2018-11-21 01:31:25 +0000 UTC]
Hi you don't have to say yes to this i'm perfectly fine if you aren't comfortable with it, but do you think you could do a fanfic on Listener?(From the legends book)
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xVexVamp In reply to GLORYFAN101 [2018-11-21 04:27:50 +0000 UTC]
I don't take requests, and don't take commissions for written works, sorry. I'm flattered that you thought to come to me, though.
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GLORYFAN101 [2018-11-15 21:58:47 +0000 UTC]
Ask Tui T. Sutherland too publish this somewhere because this is one of the best works I've ever read, and it definitely deserves to be in a real book
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xVexVamp In reply to GLORYFAN101 [2018-11-16 02:07:20 +0000 UTC]
Aw, thank you so much! That's very kind.
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GLORYFAN101 [2018-11-15 01:12:38 +0000 UTC]
Its so good, please pretty pretty please, can we read the rest, this should be and actual book
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xVexVamp In reply to GLORYFAN101 [2018-11-15 02:16:10 +0000 UTC]
The three parts linked above are all I've written of it, sorry. I knew I wouldn't maintain the motivation to write the whole thing, so I figured I'd skip to the part I was most anxious to get to paper.
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GLORYFAN101 [2018-11-15 01:11:25 +0000 UTC]
TRUTHFINDER WAS THE PRINCIPAL OF THE SCHOOL WHEN DARKSTALKER AND CLEARSIGHT WERE STILL "TOGETHER"> HOW IS CLEARSIGHT TRUTHFINDER> WHATTTTTT?
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xVexVamp In reply to GLORYFAN101 [2018-11-15 02:15:13 +0000 UTC]
Clearsight is reincarnated as Truthseeker not Truthfinder.
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GLORYFAN101 [2018-11-15 01:09:55 +0000 UTC]
wwait, can w plz plz plz see the rest of the story.
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Catherinedrawzzz [2018-09-20 11:45:34 +0000 UTC]
i wish i could draw like that. can someone teach me how and what to use? i would be so grateful
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xVexVamp In reply to Catherinedrawzzz [2018-09-21 03:39:05 +0000 UTC]
Thank you! As cliché as it sounds, the best way to learn how to draw is practice. It took me years to figure out how to make a picture like this, and there's still a lot I have left to learn. Learning and getting better takes time and a lot of effort, so just keep trying and don't get discouraged. For programs, I'd say just begin with a pencil and paper, and once you have the hang of that you can graduate to digital programs. GIMP is a free photoshop alternative that I used for awhile.
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pr0xemity [2018-06-25 18:31:26 +0000 UTC]
I can definitely see how this part was inspired by Phantom. You're an amazing writer and artist!
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TheSandwingGemstone [2018-04-30 15:53:34 +0000 UTC]
Hey may I have permission to make you your very own book
called The Lurch of Dark
*Credit all to you*
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xVexVamp In reply to TheSandwingGemstone [2018-04-30 16:19:18 +0000 UTC]
What do you mean? Like use the concept or the writing? Because I'm sorry, but I'm not comfortable with my work being redistributed.
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IceTitan64 [2018-03-14 01:58:40 +0000 UTC]
This is awesome! Honestly I wish this was apart of the book series because it would make such a better third arc then what we are getting next
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Libraryofcharacters [2017-11-15 22:39:15 +0000 UTC]
OOOOO!!!
i'm interested!
"Wings of fire; Revenant"... That sounds so cool!
you also did a really great job on this picture too!
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xVexVamp In reply to Libraryofcharacters [2017-11-15 22:42:15 +0000 UTC]
Thanks so much! Little trivia here, revenant means "a person who has returned, especially supposedly from the dead".
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