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xviolette16 — TP: Determination

Published: 2011-06-08 00:49:52 +0000 UTC; Views: 845; Favourites: 27; Downloads: 0
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Description Because becoming a good warrior doesn't happen overnight

EDIT:
It does look like Kel now that people mention it...oops? lol

Alanna and Kel © Tamora Pierce
Art by me
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Comments: 9

PandaProtector [2011-06-08 15:07:31 +0000 UTC]

Lovely! I think it could look both like Alanna and Kel. Adding color could make the difference clear although I'm not sure if you plan on doing that.

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xviolette16 In reply to PandaProtector [2011-06-08 18:49:57 +0000 UTC]

Thank you, I thought the same thing though I hadn't really planned on coloring this. Anyways, I'm glad you still liked it.

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Maseiya [2011-06-08 03:44:26 +0000 UTC]

This is fantastic--I actually thought it was Kel in all three panels the first time I looked at this piece, just because I imagine Kel with that hair, and no one else. But your drawing style is very attractive, and I like that you actually drew out a little piece of a story here. I can feel Alanna's determination with the way you drew her. Very nice indeed!

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xviolette16 In reply to Maseiya [2011-06-08 04:06:24 +0000 UTC]

lol yeah I thought of Kel when I finished drawing it lol oops...
Anyways, despite that I'm glad that you still liked it and took your time to review so thank you.

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kunoichimistress [2011-06-08 01:47:48 +0000 UTC]

It's very lovely. I like how the black and white emphasizes the moment. The profile is really good too. I have a tricky time with open-mouthed profiles <3

Now, if you don't mind the critique, at a first glance I thought it was Kel because in the second panel Alanna looks slightly bigger when she's kind of desbribed as being short. However, that passed quickly after I got a better look.

Othee than that though it's very good and I like it a lot

I hope you didn't mind the cirtique.

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xviolette16 In reply to kunoichimistress [2011-06-08 03:05:23 +0000 UTC]

I don't mind the critique at all. I also thought of Kel when I finished drawing the second panel lol oops... I have difficulty with poses >_> but that's what practice is for & I hope to improve

Anyways, I'm glad you still liked it despite that and that you took the time to comment on it so thank you.

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kunoichimistress In reply to xviolette16 [2011-06-08 03:35:16 +0000 UTC]

No problem <3

It's a lovely piece. I'm in love with the profile shot 8D

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xviolette16 In reply to kunoichimistress [2011-06-08 04:09:04 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much! I'm trying to get more comfortable drawing profiles.

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kunoichimistress In reply to xviolette16 [2011-06-08 04:13:32 +0000 UTC]

No problem <3

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