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Yo, quick note, this is her updated look-xxmellisarobotnikxx.deviantart…__________________________________________________
Full Name: Danielle Leon Marcilina
Nicknames: Dani, Dan-Dan, Dani-lion (like the flower, referred to by Aiden), Ghost Girl, Stripes
Age of Death: appears to be 12-14
Ethnicity/Race/Species: Brazilian Mexican, Ghost
DOB: September 21, 19??
DOD: May 18, 19??
Place of Birth: N/A
Place of Death: Unnamed woods
Gender: Female
Sexual/Romantic Identity: Asexual, Hetero-romantic (Straight)
Status: Single-ish (she's not really up for shipping, crack shipping...maybe)
Height: 4'9
Weight: Would say around 95 lbs since she didn't eat for about 3 days
Skin Tone: Used to be tan, now is a a paler version
Eyes: (Past) Brown, (Now in updated version) Orange, Light Green when powers are being used
Hair: Shortish, Messy and Scruffy, Dark Brown
Likes: Pastries, hide and seek, being in the woods, plant life, animals, quiet places, music boxes, most animals
Dislikes: Being alone, those with dark intentions, loud people, hunters, too much blood/gore, guns, big cities (their too crowded for her)
Cause of Death: Bullet to the chest and blood loss
Triggers: Almost any type of gun, the sound of a gunshot, the mere mention of "Him", sometimes "Him's" real name, very cramped spaces, being touched in certain areas, her hands getting tied or bounded by something
Weakness:
-gunshots will cause her to have a panic attack
-being alone for way too long will cause her to break down
-sleeping will sometimes cause her to have nightmares of "Him"
-trust issues can cause her to attack without warning
-blind eye
(in progress)
Powers/Special Abilities:
-plant/nature manipulation
-communication with most animals
-invisibility (she rarely use it)
-levitation (again she almost never uses this, so for now she can levitate small things)
-slight possession
Family:
·Father-Patricio Leon
·Mother-Katrina Marcilina
·Stepmother-Janet Stewart
·Older Brother-Anthony Leon Marcilina
·Younger Sister-Lucillia Leon Marcilina
·Pet Dog-Milo (she considers her pets as family)
·(Newish) Pet Cat-Scratch
Personality:
Before the incident- Outgoing, upbeat, protective, adventurous, friendly, childish, can be a little full of herself, stubborn at times
After the incident- Cautious, pretty quite, still is childish, awkward, shy when it comes to meeting new people, curious, was pretty aggressive
Quick Summary/Back story:
Danielle was a pretty normal kid. Healthy family, great friends and pretty good grades in school. She never really asked for much, she was fine with what she had. After a day of "boring" school had ended, Danielle headed for her bus but was stopped by her best friend's, Katherine, brother, Derek, she basically grew up with them and she saw them as her own family. She asked what he was doing here and why he looked kinda bummed out, he then said that he was here to pick her up and that he and his girlfriend are having some problems, Danielle wondered what kinda problems he had with his partner and wasn't very sure if she should go with him. He noticed that she seemed to be in thought, he then said that she doesn't have to worry about anything and that it's fine, he had asked her father if he could pick her up and he said yes. She found it rather odd that her dad would just let her go with someone other than him or her stepmother but she just shrugged it off and got in the car. After a few minutes, Danielle got a strange feeling that something was very wrong but...why? Why would she feel like something was out of place like something terrible would happen. Deep in thought, she looked out the car window and kept thinking of why this felt really off. Her thoughts were then interrupted when she noticed that Derek stopped the car and they were near the woods. She asked why they were here and what their doing here, he then chuckled and moved closer to her, too close. Confused and slightly anxious, she asked once again, trying to hide the nervousness in her words. With a strange smile, Derek ignored the question and started to compliment Danielle and her features from her hair to her personality to her...body. She didn't understand what was going on until it struck her. Chucking nervously, Danielle said she could walk home and was about to open the car door but Derek stopped her by grabbing her arm, she struggled, trying to get out of his grip by doing everything to prevent him to do what he was planning. Danielle then struck Derek in the face, resulting a visible red-purplish bruise to appear on his face. He growled at her and the grip on her tighten, causing her to cry in pain. She tried to hit him again but this time he blocked it. Growing impatient, Derek began with his dark intentions...
The next day, everyone was at the kitchen table eating breakfast. Noticing the absent of his daughter, Danielle's father asked where she was, Danielle's sister said that she might be in her room. He then asked her if he could get Danielle, she nodded and went to go get her sister. Once they got to the kitchen, her father noticed she looked...different, she didn't look as upbeat as usual and she had tired, reddish eyes. Concerned, he asked if she was okay and she replied with a simple nod, he asked once again to be sure, she then replied back by saying she was fine and walked out of the room. School was an absolute wreck that day, she couldn't concentrate, she felt like throwing up, she got a headache, and once she saw Katherine, she felt distraught, she couldn't decide if she should tell her or not. Everything was horrible, she wished that none of this ever happened and asked herself why would he do this to her...she trusted him. Her closest friends, Lucas, Katherine and Judith, noticed her strange behavior and asked her family if she was alright, they also noticed how strange she was acting and really didn't know what was wrong with her and they became more worried. Janet, Danielle's stepmother, knocked on Danielle's door and entered, she saw Danielle sitting on her bed, hugging her knees to her chest. Janet sat a few inches away from Danielle and asked if everything was alright, she got no response. She was about to ask her once again but was rudely interrupted by Danielle. Janet tried to speak again but was once again interrupted and told to leave, she was hesitant at first but she then saw how determined Danielle was and knew she couldn't speak with her right now. So unwillingly, she left Danielle and once again she was alone...in her room filled with complete and utter silence. Danielle barely came out of her room, the door was always closed, and when she did come out of her room it would only be or school or the bathroom needs. Everyone tried to help her but she just wouldn't let them, she'd tell them to leave her be or she's fine. Anthony couldn't take it anymore. He barged into Danielle's room and was about to ask what was going on with her but he saw her, sobbing. He went to her and moved strains of hair out of face, he saw a strange mark on her neck. She looked at him, he asked what's wrong, what is going on and he wasn't gonna leave if she didn't tell him the truth. She wasn't sure if should say anything but she just couldn't hold it in any longer and told him everything, crying and hugging him tightly.
The following day, Anthony found "Him", he lunged at him and began attacking him, anger had flooded his mind and he was screaming but no one could really make out what he was saying. A few teachers split them up and dragged them to the office. Hours later, Danielle was heading home from school but as she was walking, she saw "Him". She then speed up her walking, her heart was pounding, rapidly. She was caught by "Him" she began to panic and was going to call out for help but he put his hand over her mouth, to prevent her from screaming. She tried biting his hand but it seemed like it was no use, she did leave another bruise on him, he then dragged her into his car and started the car. He had bound her wrists with a piece of old raggy cloth, so she couldn't escape. But it seem like she could rip the cloth apart with enough strength. During the car ride, she saw that he had a black eye...what happen, did he get in fight? She wasn't worried about him, she was just curious on what had happen to him. He stopped at the exact woods they were at last time. Danielle was frighten to death, fearing what he would do to her this time. He looked at her with such a glare that it could kill thousands and slowly pulled out a gun from under from his chair, her eyes shrunk. "You told, Danielle..." he said in a cold voice, Danielle shook her head, saying she didn't, he grabbed her by her arm "You swore you wouldn't tell anyone...but you lied..." as she struggled to get out of his grip, she noticed that the door was unlocked. Danielle finally tore the piece of cloth that he had tied her wrist with and headbutted "Him" as hard as she could. He let go of her and the instant he let go, she ran out of the car towards the woods. Her head started to hurt horrendously but it was worth it as long as she could get away from "Him". Danielle heard him yelling and gunshots, she kept running not even daring to stop, her breathing was heavy and tears began to from in her eyes. It was beginning to rain and the ground became very slippery. She was having a hard time trying to keep her balance in order to run. As she was running, she turned around just to check how close he was, "Stupid decision that was..." as she turned back around, she crashed into a tree and her vision became blurry. Once she could see where everything was, she tried to run again and hide from "Him". Danielle started to being remembering how everyone wanted or at least tried to help her but she would just shut them out and tell them to stop or she's fine. Her thoughts were once again interrupted when she felt a sharp pain in her leg and she fell to the ground, with a whimper of pain. He slowly walked to her with that crooked smile of his and gun in hand "If only you kept our secret...a secret..." he then aimed the gun at Danielle. At that moment, she wanted to say so many things but all that came out was "N-no...I-please don't..." The last thing she remembered was a big, loud "BANG" sound and everything slowly faded to darkness...
(Note: I am not a great writer and this is just a rough draft; possible origin story)
Quotes:
-"The hunter has become the hunted."
-"Even the prey can hunt down their predator... "
-"Can you keep a secret?"
-"Oh, you wanna play hide and seek?...I love that game~"
Facts/Notes:
-she can't stand small spaces (kinda claustrophobic)
-prefers to be outside than being inside
-back then, she would always have on her mother's hair clip
-refers to Derek as "Him" or "He"
-BEN and her tend to argue a lot like siblings
-emotions can sometimes interfere with her ability to control plant life
-her right eye is covered because she's self-conscious of it
-she tends to sleep outside, up in the trees than in a bed
-doesn't know much of the new modern world
-she's slowly losing her memory but some very important memories, she won't forget so easily
-her biological mother died in a car accident when she was just 7 or 8
-tends to stutter a lot at times (like if she's under stress or she's meeting someone new)
-she really doesn't kill much (she's not insane or a psychopath either)
-she will attack or kill if necessary (for ex. she's in danger)
Please tell me what you think of her and her new ref~~
EDIT: I forgot to mention, this is just an remake of my old Dani ref since it didn't look good and I just felt making a new one, this also the reason why she looks like some other creepypastas ocs (black hoodie, brown hair, dirty looking) I made her when not many other ocs looked like this (there were lots of ____ the killer ocs tho)
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Comments: 48
XxMellisaRobotnikxX In reply to TrashyGalaxyz [2016-01-10 23:06:38 +0000 UTC]
oh, well um...not trying to be rude but please don't compare my oc's with others
I mean, don't get me wrong, he looks great! and I get that you didn't know this
this is just a lil friendly reminder~ (:
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TrashyGalaxyz In reply to XxMellisaRobotnikxX [2016-01-10 23:35:30 +0000 UTC]
I was laughing at how they look alike-
How weird they look alike tho-
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NicWest [2015-09-17 04:16:52 +0000 UTC]
Me now: aww she isn't creepy at all! She's rather cute!
Me if I was in the forest and she's aggressive: *getting attacked by dani* BRUH CHIIIIIILL!!! *running*
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XxMellisaRobotnikxX In reply to NicWest [2015-09-18 00:18:57 +0000 UTC]
XDD don't worry she won't attack you unless ya threaten her
and she's less aggressive now but back then eeehh...not so much
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NicWest In reply to XxMellisaRobotnikxX [2015-09-18 00:54:59 +0000 UTC]
Roleplay. Urges. Rising.
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XxMellisaRobotnikxX In reply to NicWest [2015-09-18 01:37:19 +0000 UTC]
hm, you wanna do an rp...?
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NicWest In reply to XxMellisaRobotnikxX [2015-09-18 01:42:49 +0000 UTC]
for some reason i want to roleplay when Dani was aggressive. Ye let's do that. if you want to.
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XxMellisaRobotnikxX In reply to NicWest [2015-09-18 11:56:50 +0000 UTC]
well, sure why not?
but i'll just give you a heads up if Dani is going to be aggressive then
she's also gonna be kinda crazy
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NicWest In reply to XxMellisaRobotnikxX [2015-09-18 20:11:35 +0000 UTC]
somehow i saw that coming.
Nic: *walking through the forest*
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XxMellisaRobotnikxX In reply to NicWest [2015-09-19 00:41:37 +0000 UTC]
oh and could we roleplay by notes by any chance??
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LoveIyEdge [2015-08-05 13:08:05 +0000 UTC]
hhhh I LOVE HER!!!
She Is SO Well Developed In My Opinion And Her Design Too!
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XxMellisaRobotnikxX In reply to LoveIyEdge [2015-08-06 03:42:40 +0000 UTC]
aahhh thank you very much~ ^^
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Drew-Datboi [2015-07-21 19:43:39 +0000 UTC]
She is so cute!~
Would you mind if I possibly drew her for you one day? (OF coarse you will be credited)
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XxMellisaRobotnikxX In reply to Drew-Datboi [2015-07-21 19:47:59 +0000 UTC]
thanks~
and sure i don't mind, i'd be quite honored o v o
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Drew-Datboi In reply to XxMellisaRobotnikxX [2015-07-21 19:50:55 +0000 UTC]
YES!~
You see I wanted to come up with an OC and hopefully will someday, And I thought how awesome your girl looked and just HAD to draw her.. Once I begin and finish I will show you her and credit you
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XxMellisaRobotnikxX In reply to Drew-Datboi [2015-07-21 20:04:45 +0000 UTC]
i'm sure you'll come up with a great oc~
ahh i wouldn't say she's "awesome", she's pretty okay tho
and i bet i'll love the drawing o v o
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Drew-Datboi In reply to XxMellisaRobotnikxX [2015-07-21 20:06:09 +0000 UTC]
To me she is pretty cool!
At least you showed creativity...
And yeah I will draw her soon... Which version of her do you want me to draw?
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XxMellisaRobotnikxX In reply to Drew-Datboi [2015-07-21 20:27:31 +0000 UTC]
either one is fine but if you really want me to chose then i guess the striped version
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Drew-Datboi In reply to XxMellisaRobotnikxX [2015-07-21 20:31:01 +0000 UTC]
Okay so the re-do I just favorite?
Okay I got it!~
I will start working on it now
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XxMellisaRobotnikxX In reply to Drew-Datboi [2015-07-22 02:03:23 +0000 UTC]
yep that's the one and i can't wait to see it~
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Drew-Datboi In reply to XxMellisaRobotnikxX [2015-07-22 02:21:26 +0000 UTC]
I am working on it still it is cute!~
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XxMellisaRobotnikxX In reply to xXxShadowxBaileyxXx [2015-03-04 00:30:39 +0000 UTC]
Thanks!~
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TheWingedSkeleton [2015-02-28 18:17:41 +0000 UTC]
Looks good!
I love her story and design! ^^
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XxMellisaRobotnikxX In reply to TheWingedSkeleton [2015-02-28 18:43:17 +0000 UTC]
Thank you!~
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TheWingedSkeleton In reply to XxMellisaRobotnikxX [2015-02-28 18:44:15 +0000 UTC]
You're welcome! ^w^
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Flamestar00 [2015-02-26 22:44:43 +0000 UTC]
Would you like some advice? Because I would be happy to help
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XxMellisaRobotnikxX In reply to Flamestar00 [2015-02-26 22:47:33 +0000 UTC]
Yes I would like some~
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Flamestar00 In reply to XxMellisaRobotnikxX [2015-02-26 23:06:58 +0000 UTC]
Sorry if this comes off as harsh.
But she isn't creepy or scary at all.
I understand that you haven't figured out what her back story is and such but if you want me to remember her your going to need to iron out all the clichés first.
Her design although cute, is fairly clichéd. Hoodie, jeans, converse, covered in blood, it has all been seen before.
Please get rid of the blood tears or give a valid reason. It's hugely overdone and I would advise you to avoid it all together.
Her backstory isn't very scary or creepy either. Normal life 'perfection.' If she was going to become a proxy or serial killer she actually needs a motive.
Is she paranormal or what? No explanation whatsoever.
Please to God above do NOT use rape as the shock plot device. It's a very serious subject that shouldn't be used in a context like this.
If she was murdered what is Derek's motivation. He needs one to make this believable.
I think that's it and I hope I didn't offend you! I'm just trying to help you make this a great character and story!
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XxMellisaRobotnikxX In reply to Flamestar00 [2015-02-26 23:48:22 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, I've heard that she isn't very creepy or scary but there are many other characters who aren't scary at all but are actually really good.
I know her design isn't very original but she's an old oc and the first time I put her old ref on DA nobody said anything about her design, so I thought that it was an okay design and stuck with it, that's why I really didn't change anything.
I think I am going to remove the whole blood tears thing, I really don't know why I put that to be honest, I guess I just wanted to make her creepy.
She doesn't have a "perfect" life, it was just an average life, I really didn't mean to make it sound like "Most perfect life ever"
Others keep asking that, when you say "paranormal" you mean like a spirit or a ghost, right?
I'm aware that rape is a very serious thing, I've had a close encounter with it...
Yes, he did have a motivation for killing her.
Oh no it's fine~
I'm glad that someone wants to help me with this.
I'm not the greatest with character development, so yeah.
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Flamestar00 In reply to XxMellisaRobotnikxX [2015-02-27 01:31:29 +0000 UTC]
That's the fine!
That seems reasonable about the design but it's good your aware of that.
Good because it's a cliché that is waayyy overused.
No it didn't sound like a 'perfect life' but she needs more motivation for being a serial killer, rather than just killing Derek.
Yes that's what paranormal is.
I'm so sorry that it nearly/did happen to you but it just was something I had to point out.
As long as he has a motivation that is plausible that's good
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XxMellisaRobotnikxX In reply to Flamestar00 [2015-02-27 02:51:28 +0000 UTC]
I have removed it~
Oh yeah, that's the thing she's not a serial killer, actually she doesn't kill much.
Then yes, she's paranormal.
Yeah...but I really don't mean to offend anyone who went through it, I swear.
Thank you for your advice~
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Flamestar00 In reply to XxMellisaRobotnikxX [2015-02-27 02:58:55 +0000 UTC]
Cool!
Ok then that's ok just checking.
Cool, glad I cleared that up.
Of course you didn't! I'm just warning you that it might not be a good idea to add that very traumatising subject in a fictional story for shock.
Also why is she blind in one eye?
No problem! Happy to help.
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XxMellisaRobotnikxX In reply to Flamestar00 [2015-02-27 04:20:07 +0000 UTC]
I don't mean to add that for shock, I really don't...
And well you see while she was running away from her "hunter" she ran into a tree, like really hard and sometimes if you're hit on the head by an hard object, you could blind.
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Flamestar00 In reply to XxMellisaRobotnikxX [2015-02-27 04:43:59 +0000 UTC]
If it's in memory of experience then I think it's ok.... I'm not the judge on morality.
That explains it.... I know it's possible don't worry XD
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XxMellisaRobotnikxX In reply to Flamestar00 [2015-02-28 01:34:56 +0000 UTC]
I think some other people will also ask me why she's blind in one eye though and some may not understand
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Flamestar00 In reply to XxMellisaRobotnikxX [2015-02-28 02:55:48 +0000 UTC]
Yeah fair enough XD
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NoirSilent [2015-02-25 20:11:56 +0000 UTC]
Fine, I'll tell you what I think of her.
At first her design is pretty much like any other creepypasta OC girl ( in a strange way most of them have long brown hair, why?) But I guess it's just your design so I can't really tell you something about it, expect the fact that (when she's supposed to be scary) she just isn't scary at all.
Was she just mudered? or did they really ...raped her? (please don't tell me that)
You gotta work on the creepy part.
I don't want to know that she can bake I want to experience horror, spooky stuff you know?
Why does blood come sometimes out of her tears? It's a common creepypasta clichee, and I wouldn't use that because it's so overused.
Is she paranormal now? And when, why? or what is she doing now all the time? hanging out in the woods? what would her father say, does he even miss her?
And why the f*ck is Derek doing such a thing? He needs a good reason to do such a cruel thing to a human beeing.
I think that Derek just did that because of a shocking plot devise, no really reason just to make your character a victim, so she can get paranormal and stuff like this.
You know it's not good when people can see through such things, it makes the whole story kinda...shallow like a plate.
www.youtube.com/watch?v=IwAACy… ;
Watch this video, he explains all the not scary clichees so you can avoid it the next time.
I hope that helped have a good day
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XxMellisaRobotnikxX In reply to NoirSilent [2015-02-25 22:30:01 +0000 UTC]
Alrighty, now you see I made her back in 2013, so yeah she kinda does look like some other CP OC girls and most CP OCs didn't really have brown hair back then and I tried making her hair short but I guess others see her hair long. Oh and could you tell me how she looks like the others, is it because of the hoodie?
The thing is that's just my drawing style, so I can see why you don't see her being scary or creepy. (I'm trying to improve in that...)
No she was not just murdered right away, her story is actually a work in progress so I don't know if I'm gonna keep it this way....and yes I know it's very over used I know and I don't know exactly if I'll remove it.
What exactly do you mean by spooky stuff?
And well the reason he does this to her (I'm not gonna say too much) is because over the years he starts to see her more appealing to him and well in his mind, his relationship with his girlfriend was getting "boring" so he wanted to try "something"....
And I have seen the video and it's actually pretty helpful, so thanks.
Once again, thank you for your help~
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NoirSilent In reply to XxMellisaRobotnikxX [2015-02-26 17:28:40 +0000 UTC]
Well, see your character has no features that I could remember.
I have seen brown haired girls with black clothes alot in this community.
May you should add something special, something that when you see this character you think "Oh its her!"
Maybe you can already think like that but viewer can't cause they don't have this connection to your character like you have.
Everybody can say this, but I tell you this: Even in my drawing style, she would looks rather cute and not like a serious victim or a creepy beeing from a creepypasta. I mean she don't has to be scary, but then her surroundings have to be to make the atmosphere scary.
Spooky stuff means like ahm, think of something you fear the most. Maybe use this as a concept. Or think of something other people fear, like the dark, screaming voices und noises, the death, old buildings deformed creatures. stuff like that.
Give your pasta a something mysterious, an "AHA"-effect so they can experience what your character is going through.
Now it's like "Oh and now this will happen...and then this..." and then the reader gets bored.
The Derek thing is...kinda odd to me. People don't do that because their relationsship gets boring.
If you want a real antagonist in your story he has to be comprehensible.
This whole "My past made me what I'm now" thing is more tragic than scary actually.
you're welcome
If you need any help feel free to ask.
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XxMellisaRobotnikxX In reply to NoirSilent [2015-02-26 20:13:03 +0000 UTC]
I get what you're trying to say but what kind of features like as in facial or clothing??
And I don't exactly know how to create that connection...if it's not a bother could you help me with that?
Oooh alright but in your opinion, what would create an eerie atmosphere like if someone was in her presence they would get nauseous and get sudden chills?
Yeah, that's another thing I'm gonna need help with.
Actually some do, I've heard a couple of stories about that.
How exactly, what should I do??
I'm gonna need alot of help, I hope I'm not being annoying.
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NoirSilent In reply to XxMellisaRobotnikxX [2015-02-27 20:14:44 +0000 UTC]
Well you have to find something by yourself, like scars, beauty spots.
On the clothes, well I would be careful that you don't get to anime like.
So be realistic and individual at the same time, I know this is hard.
Well you should put your view on things that makes you feel observed stalked or even hunted.
A thing or a creature that you can't escape but you can also don't clearly see what it actual is.
the unkown is one of the greatest fears of mankind.
You're not annoying at all, ask so many questions as you want
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XxMellisaRobotnikxX In reply to NoirSilent [2015-02-28 01:32:34 +0000 UTC]
Actually, I have other old designs of her like there was one where she has her hair in a ponytail/braid but I didn't use it because she puts her hair down, in order to cover up a mark on her neck.
I think I will be using the ponytail/braid design for her before "everything" happen. Also, she almost didn't wear her hoodie much but then she did start using it more, so she could cover the other markings.
Like a beast of the dark or a haunted cemetery, something like that??
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NoirSilent In reply to XxMellisaRobotnikxX [2015-02-28 14:49:17 +0000 UTC]
Well, you have to find something that isn't to clichee of course, there a lot of monsters in the cp community.
But if your Oc is not supossed to be scary than something else has to be.
You can also add some characteristic for her, like habits.
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XxMellisaRobotnikxX In reply to NoirSilent [2015-02-28 16:55:07 +0000 UTC]
Well, she's kinda like one of those creepypasta, you know "don't judge a book by it's cover".
Hmm like what kind of habits exactly?....
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NoirSilent In reply to XxMellisaRobotnikxX [2015-02-28 17:58:52 +0000 UTC]
Well show me the pasta itself and I can judge.
Even you have habits, good one or bad ones, your friends have them just start to think and develop your character.
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XxMellisaRobotnikxX In reply to NoirSilent [2015-03-02 19:17:30 +0000 UTC]
Alright, you want me to link you a few or something?
Well she does tends to stutter, is that sort of a habit? Cause if not, I could add a few.
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