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xXNejiten4everXx โ First Date part 5
Published: 2013-04-27 19:17:02 +0000 UTC; Views: 2003; Favourites: 26; Downloads: 2
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The final part of my mini Nejiten doujinshi, First Date!Neji gets a surprise kiss from Tenten!!!
Cover: [link]
Previous: [link]
I may, in the future, make another one
Art (C) me
Story (C) me
Tenten and Neji Hyuuga (C) Kishimoto Masashi
Feel free to leave a comment, I enjoy answering them
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hehe thanks, glad you think so
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I think it's finaly not a really date but well... If they're happy
Otherwise, to speak more "advice" (if I may dare to claim to give advice), there are a few things that you can improve quickly. For example, more varied viewing angle, you see very often on the same plane (front portrait) is a little shame. If you change from time to time, it will give more life to your doujin!
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Hehe yeah, not a date, but they both seems to enjoy it anyway
I always appriciate advice from others, it only helps me improve
I see your point when it comes to the viewing angles - I am working on my angles
Yeah, maybe I should have colored Tenten's eyes brown, but since most of the doujin was colored in white/black/gray i decided not too
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Daww cute. It's something about seeing my favorite couples hand-holding that I just find adorable. I know Neji can see everytime coming at him with his Byakugan, but I know he didn't see that coming 
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Thanks, glad you think so
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omg this is too cute!
Your style is lovely btw
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Glad you think so!
Awww thanks
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