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MeowPic [2009-07-28 22:19:47 +0000 UTC]

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When I saw this deviation in my inbox, it really seemed to catch my eye. What I love about this first of all, is the location. Using a piece of cracked pavement for this shot really brings out your vision of the photo. What I also like, is the body positioning and wardrobe. The way that the arms and legs are set up just look so quirky and interesting, and the clothing is majestic and fits the theme.
Overall this is a good photo, but what really throws it off for me is the surroundings. The shed-like structure and the grass is a bit distracting, so it would be advised to maybe focus more on the pavement, or at least use surroundings that can contribute more to the shot next time. Maybe even positioning the model in the center of the crack would be a bit more effective. Either way, just a couple of things to look out for - but an overall good photo.

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Chaosfive-55 [2009-10-09 01:09:19 +0000 UTC]

Have you noticed how everyone assumes that your character jumped or fell, or is dead in general? Such morbid subjectivity! The girl just likes to lie on the warm sidewalk, like a cat sunning herself! Don't worry, Miss Murphy--I know there's more to your pics than teen tragedy!

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romantic2 [2009-10-03 17:58:28 +0000 UTC]

What's really breathtaking about this one is the contrast between the violence of what we assume has just happened - a young girl dying as her body impacted the pavement - a the serene beauty of the lines of Andi's body and the resigned, placid look on her face.

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jamesodonnellart [2009-07-29 02:43:19 +0000 UTC]

this is why they put the warning labels on the window screens...

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romantic2 [2009-07-27 20:43:53 +0000 UTC]

Yes... it does look like she jumped...

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steven002 [2009-07-27 02:12:14 +0000 UTC]

This appears to be the result of a suicide, or murder. I like the pose. Perhaps a little less cement and more Andi.
Hugs
Steven

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dsing2255 [2009-07-27 00:24:17 +0000 UTC]

Great shot! I love the angle and pose....You chose a great setting too

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