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The next morning it was still raining heavily, you shivered as the air caressed your arms while you rose from the heavy covers. You stretched the cramped muscles, then getting up to look decent before checking on Antonio. You were sure that you wouldn’t get into much trouble today but why’d you get that disturbed feeling while you walked through the dim, gray hall? You gulped shakily before power walking to the guest room where Antonio lodged for the night. Your chilly hands rapped the wooden door, in response…no answer.

 

Again, you knocked.

 

No answer.

 

“Antonio?”

 

You knocked harder on the pale door once again.

 

Still, no answer.

 

Fear gripped your throbbing heart with its cold, deathly hands. Frantically you wringed the brass knob, as you flung the door open not caring whether you caught him half-dressed or what, just as long as he was alright.

 

He was there alright judging by the lump from under the thick covers, you approached the bed inaudibly with long strides. The room was strangely cold and eerie, you noted. His back was turned towards you, a mess of richly brown colored locks popping from the warm covers.

 

“Antonio?”

 

Your fears were confirmed, why wasn’t he breathing? You pulled back the covers with a desperate yank, your face paled as pale as the once tan arms of the still Spaniard were. Your fingers shakily reached to touch his turned shoulder—it was cold.  And the exposed skin of his neck was a lighter color than his once bronzed skin. Tears flooded your eyes and flowed down your tense features as you turned his body to get a better look.

Antonio was pale, insipid, and showed no signs of breathing. His lively verdant eyes were closed and his pale lips were drawn into a line, as strands of chestnut hair fell from his cold face. You felt yourself choke in your own tears as every unpleasant feeling that ever existed overwhelmed you.

 

“N-no, no!  Not yet! Antonio?!”

 

No matter how many times you shook him or called out his name repetitively, you received no response.

 

You gripped his lifeless body tightly in an embrace; your tears fell on his tranquil face as you regretted many things you haven’t done regarding him. At that moment, if he would never wake, you wanted to end up like him—dead.

 

 

“(Name), (Name)! Chica!”

 

You were shook awake from the nightmare. Instantly, you took a sharp breath whilst salty tears clouded your hazy vision as well as the darkness of your cold bedroom. You could make out a faint outline of a certain Spaniard you had just dreamt terribly of. You were being leant to the brown head board as you regained your breathing slowly, tears never ceasing to fall. You fixed your blurry gaze on your lap under the covers, as you wept silently, burying your exhausted face in your hands.

Familiar hands took your wrists away from your face with care as your shaking arms fell limp at yours sides. One of those hands brushed away tufts of (color) hair from your sweaty forehead while the other tenderly caressed your cheeks, wiping away the tears.

“Estoy aqui. You’re alright.”

 

Antonio reassured softly as he continued to do his ministrations. He was wide-awake the whole night feeling very odd, and then felt the urge to rise as he decided to get a glass of water. He heard soft whimpers from your room as he stumbled through the dark hall and you can guess what happened next. The Spanish male moved in closer to wrap his arms around you.

 

But you were quicker,

 

You suddenly threw yourself on him, wrapping your arms around his firm waist, burying your head on his already warmed chest. He was taken aback but nevertheless he absently brought his hand up to pet your head, smoothing the tangled (color) locks. He was even more astonished at the next words you sobbed in his chest, with a death grip you clutched the back of the borrowed white shirt he wore. And though the sentences were incomprehensible, he heard the answer he yearned for very well, it brought joy and unintended tears to him after he overcame his shock,

 

                                       

“I’m sorry Toni! I really am, p-please…please don’t… I-I do! Yes, I still do love you. I still do, I still do…”



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Comments: 88

supdude111x [2015-12-09 04:39:05 +0000 UTC]

OK. I was all like
HES NOT BEATHING?!! WHY DA FUCK IS HE NOT BREATHING????? PLZ TELL ME IM READING THIS WRONG!!!!! oh... It's a dream... OK.....OK.

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kittyface2048 [2015-02-27 00:05:15 +0000 UTC]

Awesome. You deserve a hug.   

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xXTomoDachiXx In reply to kittyface2048 [2015-02-27 07:42:18 +0000 UTC]

Thank you dear! Yay!

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WolfdogTheKiller [2015-01-04 10:59:30 +0000 UTC]

Omg fab

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KittyYOUKAI5125 [2014-09-27 01:37:14 +0000 UTC]

Wow that was incredible. Almost brought me to tears couple of times. <3

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xXTomoDachiXx In reply to KittyYOUKAI5125 [2014-09-27 08:29:15 +0000 UTC]

aww...bby don't cry! Thank you so much, dear that means a lot to meee~

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asianturnip [2014-08-30 09:13:10 +0000 UTC]

omg, i swear i nearly cried!!! ur so talented!!!

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xXTomoDachiXx In reply to asianturnip [2014-08-30 13:22:32 +0000 UTC]

No! Please don't cry! (though I am happy this has an impact ^^) Thank you, dear! You're so nice to me! I hope you have a wonderful day 'cause you sure did brighten up mine

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asianturnip In reply to xXTomoDachiXx [2014-08-31 00:25:12 +0000 UTC]

awwww!!! you're so sweet!! thank you for writing an awesome story, and hav a good day 2^^

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kittykatrocks12 [2014-03-01 01:10:22 +0000 UTC]

Oh Geeze for a minute I really thought he was dead. It made me think of one of my characters who is like another Antonio

 

Great story I almost cried

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xXTomoDachiXx In reply to kittykatrocks12 [2014-03-01 08:03:42 +0000 UTC]

Ohhh! An OC like Toni? Awesome!


Thank you so much, dear <3

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kittykatrocks12 In reply to xXTomoDachiXx [2014-03-02 02:40:39 +0000 UTC]

Yes read this short series and you will know who he is kittykatrocks12.deviantart.com…

 

You're Welcome it is my pleasure

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TerraAreli [2014-02-21 08:17:49 +0000 UTC]

SIlly spaniard i never stopped loving you owo

Oh and suds, sounds awful.

Awesome story the feels they are awesome and awful at the same time QWQ

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xXTomoDachiXx In reply to TerraAreli [2014-02-21 10:06:19 +0000 UTC]

Can't resist the sexy Spaniard, da?


And that makes me most glad, dearie!!

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MistDream454 [2013-10-29 05:59:11 +0000 UTC]

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xXTomoDachiXx In reply to MistDream454 [2013-10-29 06:18:42 +0000 UTC]

Aw. Come here you ~!

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MistDream454 In reply to xXTomoDachiXx [2013-10-30 21:01:00 +0000 UTC]

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furchild1204 [2013-09-14 05:53:09 +0000 UTC]

Three things:
1) I wanted to cry when I thought that he died...
2) that is the cutest Chibi Spain I've ever seen
3) Suds...? Oh,

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xXTomoDachiXx In reply to furchild1204 [2013-09-14 12:23:04 +0000 UTC]

Three things:


1) Lemme hug you~!



2) I can't stop squealing when I saw this blingee.com/blingee/view/11929…


3) SUDS stands for Sudden Unexpected Death Syndrome.. it normally occurs when the victim sleeps.

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furchild1204 In reply to xXTomoDachiXx [2013-09-14 16:12:24 +0000 UTC]

3) well, silly me, I thought that was a reference to my favorite cartoon as a kid.

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xXTomoDachiXx In reply to furchild1204 [2013-09-14 16:28:32 +0000 UTC]

Ve~ thats alright!

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SilverArrow3 [2013-09-08 22:11:18 +0000 UTC]

The instant I read that part...... You completely fooled me into thinking chapter 11 was going to be REALLY sad. EVIL!!!! 

It takes talent to do that. 

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xXTomoDachiXx In reply to SilverArrow3 [2013-09-09 12:41:38 +0000 UTC]

Aw, thank you dear although I was angsty and hurt when I wrote this(and I did plan to make this sad). I would only write a sad story if I wanted the reader to realize something

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SleepyDormouse1 [2013-09-06 00:40:34 +0000 UTC]

I thought he got sick and died You are evil and its about damn time the reader got back with him

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SneakyAlexaBlue24 [2013-09-01 06:09:45 +0000 UTC]

Omg, so I usually never ever fall for those things where it's usually a dream, but I actually did fall for it this time, and it's usually difficult to suprise me that bad. OMG I can't wait to read the next part

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xXTomoDachiXx In reply to SneakyAlexaBlue24 [2013-09-01 12:57:19 +0000 UTC]

Really?!  


Thanks for reading love~! 

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SneakyAlexaBlue24 In reply to xXTomoDachiXx [2013-09-02 01:40:53 +0000 UTC]

Heehee..
"Love" xD

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RusCanFan92 [2013-08-25 21:16:06 +0000 UTC]

You scared me half to death with that!! 

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xXTomoDachiXx In reply to RusCanFan92 [2013-08-26 00:33:58 +0000 UTC]

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RusCanFan92 In reply to xXTomoDachiXx [2013-08-26 03:52:18 +0000 UTC]

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Exorcest [2013-08-23 03:12:45 +0000 UTC]

God don't scare me like that
one more chapter to show their faces (the girls)

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xXTomoDachiXx In reply to Exorcest [2013-08-23 14:17:40 +0000 UTC]

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EvilS-Dutch [2013-08-21 19:59:23 +0000 UTC]

FINALLY I said I love him

that took me long enough

 

great story

 

but what makes it perfect is revenge on those evil girls

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xXTomoDachiXx In reply to EvilS-Dutch [2013-08-22 02:52:52 +0000 UTC]

Gil and Luddy are on it

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EvilS-Dutch In reply to xXTomoDachiXx [2013-08-22 10:53:38 +0000 UTC]

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Nightcool [2013-08-21 13:04:35 +0000 UTC]

T-that scared me.

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xXTomoDachiXx In reply to Nightcool [2013-08-21 14:19:12 +0000 UTC]


Better?

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Nightcool In reply to xXTomoDachiXx [2013-08-21 14:35:38 +0000 UTC]

Yes/ XD

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xXTomoDachiXx In reply to Nightcool [2013-08-21 15:26:22 +0000 UTC]

Haha! Thanks for reading

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Nightcool In reply to xXTomoDachiXx [2013-08-21 15:32:53 +0000 UTC]

^^

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xXTomoDachiXx In reply to Nightcool [2013-08-21 14:17:35 +0000 UTC]

:

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cantstandpeople4 [2013-08-20 22:23:06 +0000 UTC]

Dude. I swear to....... DONT DO THAT TO MEH! THAT ALMOST GAVE ME A FLAPPIN HEART ATTACK! XD

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xXTomoDachiXx In reply to cantstandpeople4 [2013-08-21 09:21:10 +0000 UTC]

Kya! Have I enraged the GummyBear Mistress? *flees*. >,<

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cantstandpeople4 In reply to xXTomoDachiXx [2013-08-24 15:03:52 +0000 UTC]

No no no. Just..... Worried me. Very badly. I shall now go hug my tomato plushie.

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xXTomoDachiXx In reply to cantstandpeople4 [2013-08-24 20:52:50 +0000 UTC]

better?

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cantstandpeople4 In reply to xXTomoDachiXx [2013-08-27 01:20:23 +0000 UTC]

........ Maybe....... Yessss

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nu-be In reply to cantstandpeople4 [2013-08-21 01:55:55 +0000 UTC]

IKR?!??! Scared me half to friggin' death...>:I

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cantstandpeople4 In reply to nu-be [2013-08-24 15:04:24 +0000 UTC]

Yes! THANK YOU! SOMEONE WHO AGREEEEEES!

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SometimesFox [2013-08-20 20:32:01 +0000 UTC]

will there be more? Oh how i love this story

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xXTomoDachiXx In reply to SometimesFox [2013-08-21 09:19:37 +0000 UTC]

Yes there will be thank you so much for reading! 

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