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XxTwilights-AngelxX — A Sign of Affection
Published: 2004-11-08 07:21:47 +0000 UTC; Views: 278; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 12
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Call me babyI like it that way
Makes me think
You’ve got a part of me
Somewhere in that heart
Maybe I’ve got a part of you
As you’re holding me
Or do you even notice
That I’m waiting patiently
For a sign
A reply
Of your feelings towards
This awkward girl
Call me darling
Makes me feel
A little less empty
And almost loved
Maybe by you
I’m not asking
For those three words
Not some line
Just a sign
That I matter a bit more
Than most
To you
11/3/04
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I like it a lot I especially the stanza
Call me darling
Makes me feel
A little less empty
And almost loved
I can definitley relate to this, the deadness of a failin relationship
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thank you for the comment 
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Oh, wow. It's beautiful. It seems so quiet to me and so tender and in anticipation. 
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thank you for the kind comment and the +fav, glad you like it
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Call me darling
Makes me feel
A little less empty
And almost loved
I can relate to this line. Very nice work
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thank you glad you like it, and thanks also for the +fav
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I like it. I can feel the longing in it. I can relate completely.
Kinda makes me think of Love-Fool by the Cardigans - one of the songs in Romeo & Juliet (with Leonardo Di Caprio). "...pretend that you love me...."
Though I don't think it's pretense that you want. It's the small things that count - not just those 3 words....
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thank you for the comment and the +fav 
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this is really good. very real and very powerful
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tragic that such a monumental pairing of three particular words could ever become so fast, automated, and meaningless...
What you've shown us here is what counts.
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i like it, though it envokes a feeling of being trapped to me...maybe i'm not a romantic? 
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heh well I didnt want it to come off as being trapped, but kinda... a longing for an understanding of what kinda emotions are being felt.. 
but either way glad you liked it and thank you for the comment
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got'cha...i am the non-romantic eh? lol. and you're welcome, much 
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lol well nothings wrong with being non-romantic.. I'm a hopeless romantic 
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now how am i supposed to write about how i'm feeling when you do it first? lol. 
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"Call me baby
I like it that way
Makes me think
You’ve got a part of me" i like this, is a good beginning, sounds like song lyrics, and has a good beat to it
"Call me darling
Makes me feel
A little less empty
And almost loved" i like the "almost," makes it have another dimension
"That I matter a bit more
Than most
To you" same as before except the phrase "than most"
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thank you darlin' always for you comments
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I really like the piece, but I didn't quite understand the need for italics. Usually, you use that to emphasize something, but considering that the whole piece was amazing, you really didn't need them
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I usually do it for one reason or another, if it be instead of using quotes for someone say something or whatnot.. I might change it.. lol.. I usually wait awhile before I say, pah what was I writing and go back to edit.
Thanks for the comment
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love it
"I’m not asking
For those three words
Not some line
Just a sign
That I matter a bit more
Than most
To you"
...my feelings exactly towards someone..
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heh funny how much people can be feeling the same things, yet still feel like hte only one going through it, no?
thank you for the comment
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