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Published: 2012-03-24 15:19:39 +0000 UTC; Views: 4438; Favourites: 82; Downloads: 98
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Summers almost here ^^Time to start reducing the clothes layers and brightening my colour pallet up
This took over 9-10 hours to complete.
Hope you like it!
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Comments: 145
Aaah~! That's indeed cute!! Great work!
First of all I have to say I love the colors! Everything's beautifully drawn and the shading is really cool! I wish I could draw like that xD
Now, the background is stunning! Mount Fuji, isn't it? Wow... Look at that bridge! I like the fact that the part of the columns (that support the bridge) in the water is visible.
Azusa's cute and her face is funny! Haha, a real kitty craving for that little watermelon... I want one too!
Ritsu is awesome like always e.deviantart.net/emoticons/h/h… " width="15" height="13" alt="
And OMG, Ritsu's touching Azusa's boobs!
There are a couple of things I don't really like though.
- I know it sounds stupid, but I think... that the hair of Azusa's nekomimi should be shorter, haha! e.deviantart.net/emoticons/a/a… " width="19" height="19" alt="
- *tries desperately to find something she doesn't like but fails*
Okay, that would suffice
About the rating:
The truth is that I rated before writing my critique. Then I thought about checking out the 'help' page for this, because I wanted to give you a well-written & well-rated critique, since that's what a good piece of art should receive. So,here's my opinion;
Vision: 4.5 stars
Originality: 4.5 stars (I'd give it 5, but 5 is the perfect, so yeah.. I'd prefer not to just 'rate it with 5 stars')
Technique : 5 stars! (I wish I could give it 6 out of five to be honest! This is really amazing; you're very skilled!)
Impact : 4 stars (it did affect me to the point that my mind was thinking of hundreds of Tainakano scenes, but as I said before it's hard to give it a 5. Perfect is perfect -yeah I know you're like 'Oh, don't tell me!' now xD Anyway, before reading the help section I had given it a 4.5. Don't worry though, no big deal. The whole thing's still amazing)
Anyway, that's all from me! I hope that this critique is nice; well-written, that is. Keep it up, Shane! I'd love to see more of you! I think you're really good, but you do have space for improvement. I'm not that great as an artist (ok, here we laugh; I'm not even an artist, I'm just a mere, random writer), but I do believe I'm quite a good judge ^^ Hope I didn't disappoint you. This is my first time writing a critique.
~Kanamioshi
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Here's the page about critiques: [link]
My very first ratings were:
Vision: 5
Originality: 4.5
Technique : 4.5
Impact : 4.5
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It is so hard to spot something wrong specially when the Art is Digital or like, photoshoped or SAIed so I guess your art is the best so far and still improving. I have no regrets watching you.
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ur stuff always cute!
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I love your work! I wish you would put some more mature content on, i really enjoy those
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Thanks! ;D
It depends whenever I'm in the mood for mature content related stuff.
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oh ok! great job though!
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I CAN SEE THEIR FUTURE! Yuri Sensei, by "clothes layers", did you mean...
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Big house in the country! 3 kids and a dog!
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HOLY BATSHIT BATMAN!
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I totally want that tongue on me...
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oh my?
Oh btw, I noticed... what happened to Karamelle's account?
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I don't really know.
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She's resting her hand over Azusa's shoulder X3
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lolzXD oh....well close enoughXP
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I almost can't breathe.
DO
WANT.
And so does Azusa, eh? ;D
Good work
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Thanks! Try not to die! D:
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Np!
Ah but it's so beautiful, I feel that I might die!
Look, Mio is pleased too
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Fuxk your shit! Pervy things are pervy!
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Haha! I could love you! A friend of Jaja is a friend of mine XD
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Oooh? You could? I'd be glad to be your friend~ Ohh, Jaja Name-chan, she's a crazy bitch. <3 And by crazy, I mean airheaded.
Ohohoh, Mioooo
;D
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Dat bitch is Yui level: air headed!
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QFT! It's like talking to the real Yui No seriously o__o
OH OH OH thanks for dat watch man. I'll watch you back
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Oh gawd why is this the first happy icon I thought of.. XD
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You're a bigger perv than jaja
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What? WHAT? NOOO. She always says that too, why does everyone say so? I mean, I really don't get it! Why would anyone think that? Y'know, it can't be helping that I'm looking at ecchi K-ON pictures right now, can it? XD
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Those K-ON girls would be selfish to keep those sexy bodies to themselves ;D
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They give their bodies to eachother~
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