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Published: 2012-03-24 15:19:39 +0000 UTC; Views: 4438; Favourites: 82; Downloads: 98
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Description Summers almost here ^^
Time to start reducing the clothes layers and brightening my colour pallet up

This took over 9-10 hours to complete.
Hope you like it!
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Comments: 145

Kanamioshi [2012-03-24 22:27:59 +0000 UTC]

Overall

Vision

Originality

Technique

Impact


Aaah~! That's indeed cute!! Great work!

First of all I have to say I love the colors! Everything's beautifully drawn and the shading is really cool! I wish I could draw like that xD

Now, the background is stunning! Mount Fuji, isn't it? Wow... Look at that bridge! I like the fact that the part of the columns (that support the bridge) in the water is visible.

Azusa's cute and her face is funny! Haha, a real kitty craving for that little watermelon... I want one too!
Ritsu is awesome like always e.deviantart.net/emoticons/h/h… " width="15" height="13" alt="" title="Heart"/>

And OMG, Ritsu's touching Azusa's boobs!

There are a couple of things I don't really like though.
- I know it sounds stupid, but I think... that the hair of Azusa's nekomimi should be shorter, haha! e.deviantart.net/emoticons/a/a… " width="19" height="19" alt="" title="Sweating a little..."/> It's not like I hate it, but it'd be better if it wasn't that long.
- *tries desperately to find something she doesn't like but fails*

Okay, that would suffice

About the rating:
The truth is that I rated before writing my critique. Then I thought about checking out the 'help' page for this, because I wanted to give you a well-written & well-rated critique, since that's what a good piece of art should receive. So,here's my opinion;

Vision: 4.5 stars
Originality: 4.5 stars (I'd give it 5, but 5 is the perfect, so yeah.. I'd prefer not to just 'rate it with 5 stars')
Technique : 5 stars! (I wish I could give it 6 out of five to be honest! This is really amazing; you're very skilled!)
Impact : 4 stars (it did affect me to the point that my mind was thinking of hundreds of Tainakano scenes, but as I said before it's hard to give it a 5. Perfect is perfect -yeah I know you're like 'Oh, don't tell me!' now xD Anyway, before reading the help section I had given it a 4.5. Don't worry though, no big deal. The whole thing's still amazing)

Anyway, that's all from me! I hope that this critique is nice; well-written, that is. Keep it up, Shane! I'd love to see more of you! I think you're really good, but you do have space for improvement. I'm not that great as an artist (ok, here we laugh; I'm not even an artist, I'm just a mere, random writer), but I do believe I'm quite a good judge ^^ Hope I didn't disappoint you. This is my first time writing a critique.

~Kanamioshi

Random Info:
Here's the page about critiques: [link]

My very first ratings were:
Vision: 5
Originality: 4.5
Technique : 4.5
Impact : 4.5

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STARSWeskerTRW [2012-05-25 02:02:32 +0000 UTC]

cuuute X3

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Bongaboi [2012-05-25 00:25:45 +0000 UTC]

Critique has been sent.

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Dame-kun [2012-03-28 11:18:55 +0000 UTC]

It is so hard to spot something wrong specially when the Art is Digital or like, photoshoped or SAIed so I guess your art is the best so far and still improving. I have no regrets watching you.

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xZDisturbedZx In reply to Dame-kun [2012-03-28 12:16:16 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!!!!11`

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Jailboticus [2012-03-26 14:37:30 +0000 UTC]

cute!

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xZDisturbedZx In reply to Jailboticus [2012-03-26 17:51:22 +0000 UTC]

Glad you think so ;D

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Jailboticus In reply to xZDisturbedZx [2012-03-26 17:54:32 +0000 UTC]

ur stuff always cute!

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xZDisturbedZx In reply to Jailboticus [2012-03-26 18:16:48 +0000 UTC]

Cute stuff is cute!

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Jailboticus In reply to xZDisturbedZx [2012-03-26 20:12:25 +0000 UTC]

true

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JumpySquirrel [2012-03-25 19:04:55 +0000 UTC]

I love your work! I wish you would put some more mature content on, i really enjoy those

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xZDisturbedZx In reply to JumpySquirrel [2012-03-25 21:33:25 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! ;D
It depends whenever I'm in the mood for mature content related stuff.

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JumpySquirrel In reply to xZDisturbedZx [2012-03-26 10:58:25 +0000 UTC]

oh ok! great job though!

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jaja-sick-bear [2012-03-25 15:14:00 +0000 UTC]

I CAN SEE THEIR FUTURE! Yuri Sensei, by "clothes layers", did you mean...

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xZDisturbedZx In reply to jaja-sick-bear [2012-03-25 16:02:40 +0000 UTC]

Big house in the country! 3 kids and a dog!

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jaja-sick-bear In reply to xZDisturbedZx [2012-03-27 01:56:31 +0000 UTC]

Oh mY O #O Only 1 dog?

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xZDisturbedZx In reply to jaja-sick-bear [2012-03-27 09:32:45 +0000 UTC]

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jaja-sick-bear In reply to xZDisturbedZx [2012-03-29 19:59:58 +0000 UTC]

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xZDisturbedZx In reply to jaja-sick-bear [2012-03-30 11:40:01 +0000 UTC]

HOLY BATSHIT BATMAN!

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jaja-sick-bear In reply to xZDisturbedZx [2012-03-31 09:23:42 +0000 UTC]

WHERE?!

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xZDisturbedZx In reply to jaja-sick-bear [2012-03-31 19:15:26 +0000 UTC]

I totally want that tongue on me...

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jaja-sick-bear In reply to xZDisturbedZx [2012-04-02 19:58:55 +0000 UTC]

Then come and get it~

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xZDisturbedZx In reply to jaja-sick-bear [2012-04-02 20:05:23 +0000 UTC]

I didn't say anything...

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jaja-sick-bear In reply to xZDisturbedZx [2012-04-04 19:53:41 +0000 UTC]

oh my?

Oh btw, I noticed... what happened to Karamelle's account?

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xZDisturbedZx In reply to jaja-sick-bear [2012-04-04 20:44:13 +0000 UTC]

I don't really know.

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RandomRedneck1990 [2012-03-24 21:27:06 +0000 UTC]

That's cute right there.

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xZDisturbedZx In reply to RandomRedneck1990 [2012-03-25 07:38:40 +0000 UTC]

Cheers man!

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katban [2012-03-24 20:12:45 +0000 UTC]

looks like some groping is happening there.

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xZDisturbedZx In reply to katban [2012-03-25 07:39:00 +0000 UTC]

She's resting her hand over Azusa's shoulder X3

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katban In reply to xZDisturbedZx [2012-03-25 18:25:42 +0000 UTC]

lolzXD oh....well close enoughXP

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spiralmaestro [2012-03-24 20:09:22 +0000 UTC]

cute!

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xZDisturbedZx In reply to spiralmaestro [2012-03-25 07:39:05 +0000 UTC]

>:3

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spiralmaestro In reply to xZDisturbedZx [2012-03-25 18:37:00 +0000 UTC]

YW!

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Thesdroz [2012-03-24 17:39:38 +0000 UTC]

asuzaaaaa *0*

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xZDisturbedZx In reply to Thesdroz [2012-03-25 07:39:20 +0000 UTC]

Nyan!

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court-xx [2012-03-24 16:05:27 +0000 UTC]

I almost can't breathe.

DO
WANT.
And so does Azusa, eh? ;D

Good work

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xZDisturbedZx In reply to court-xx [2012-03-25 07:39:43 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! Try not to die! D:

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court-xx In reply to xZDisturbedZx [2012-03-25 13:22:28 +0000 UTC]

Np!

Ah but it's so beautiful, I feel that I might die!

Look, Mio is pleased too

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xZDisturbedZx In reply to court-xx [2012-03-25 14:07:42 +0000 UTC]

Fuxk your shit! Pervy things are pervy!

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court-xx In reply to xZDisturbedZx [2012-03-25 14:21:38 +0000 UTC]

LOL Yui's new catchphrase?

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xZDisturbedZx In reply to court-xx [2012-03-25 14:23:52 +0000 UTC]

Haha! I could love you! A friend of Jaja is a friend of mine XD

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court-xx In reply to xZDisturbedZx [2012-03-25 14:37:52 +0000 UTC]

Oooh? You could? I'd be glad to be your friend~ Ohh, Jaja Name-chan, she's a crazy bitch. <3 And by crazy, I mean airheaded.

Ohohoh, Mioooo
;D

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xZDisturbedZx In reply to court-xx [2012-03-25 14:48:03 +0000 UTC]

Dat bitch is Yui level: air headed!

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court-xx In reply to xZDisturbedZx [2012-03-25 14:52:55 +0000 UTC]

QFT! It's like talking to the real Yui No seriously o__o

OH OH OH thanks for dat watch man. I'll watch you back

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xZDisturbedZx In reply to court-xx [2012-03-25 14:57:30 +0000 UTC]

Like a baws!!
Cheers!

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court-xx In reply to xZDisturbedZx [2012-03-25 15:01:05 +0000 UTC]


Oh gawd why is this the first happy icon I thought of.. XD

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xZDisturbedZx In reply to court-xx [2012-03-25 16:03:40 +0000 UTC]

You're a bigger perv than jaja

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court-xx In reply to xZDisturbedZx [2012-03-25 16:08:55 +0000 UTC]

What? WHAT? NOOO. She always says that too, why does everyone say so? I mean, I really don't get it! Why would anyone think that? Y'know, it can't be helping that I'm looking at ecchi K-ON pictures right now, can it? XD

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xZDisturbedZx In reply to court-xx [2012-03-25 17:12:38 +0000 UTC]

Those K-ON girls would be selfish to keep those sexy bodies to themselves ;D

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court-xx In reply to xZDisturbedZx [2012-03-25 20:31:54 +0000 UTC]

They give their bodies to eachother~

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