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y0urstalker β€” Remnants of A Vampire
Published: 2008-08-04 04:12:13 +0000 UTC; Views: 233; Favourites: 6; Downloads: 7
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Description I've killed so many times to live for an eternity,
forever is pain once enough for pleasure,
twice enough for regretting your memories,
but thrice enough to run in sunlight.

I want to die.

--There was a girl once,
IΒ Β tried to save her life,
there was a demon once,
but his heart was rife...
with anguish.--

This moon makes me lonely,
I howl for it's false comforts,
people cannot see,
I don't want to see them hurt.

I've hurt so many.

--there was a man once,
the blacksmith was the first to die,
there was a demon once
where the dead man's body lied...
in cold agony.--

I didn't want it, but the power warms,
makes me wander, makes me quiver,
changes come with my bat like arms,
with this exhilaration that makes me shiver.

the meanest price for murder.

--the girl once,
there was a home where I belonged,
before the demon became once,
what I become, now I long,
for home again.--

just one bite to change eternity,
once goes my identity,
twice goes my sanity,
thrice destroys me eternally.

I regret, I can never go back.

--there was a home once,
it died in my arms, clean and dry,
when there was a demon once,
that demon wanted to die.

In my arms she died too,
with my teeth bared at her throat,
and she had loved me too,
and simply smiled when I awoke,
from a demon's slumber.--
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Comments: 11

SpazzyNinjaSpork [2008-08-05 16:02:01 +0000 UTC]

just one bite to change eternity,
once goes my identity,
twice goes my sanity,
thrice destroys me eternally.

That was my favorite part. Ever. I really loved it. :D
Sort of, I was reminded of the song "The Horror Of Our Love" by Ludo. o_O;;
Nevertheless, good job.

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y0urstalker In reply to SpazzyNinjaSpork [2008-08-14 00:06:59 +0000 UTC]

hrm. I'll have to look it up.

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BlAcKaT94 [2008-08-04 18:35:04 +0000 UTC]

Wow I really like this just on this you could probelby write a whole story or make a character. Well any away nice work.

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Out-Of-Spite [2008-08-04 15:57:09 +0000 UTC]

creepy and intriguing... telling a story as you go! wonderful piece

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Mandalore13 [2008-08-04 06:03:47 +0000 UTC]

Why do you hate it?

-Mandalore

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y0urstalker In reply to Mandalore13 [2008-08-04 06:21:14 +0000 UTC]

too emo for my vampires.

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Mandalore13 In reply to y0urstalker [2008-08-04 06:55:52 +0000 UTC]

I want to hear of the vampire you are making.

-Mandalore

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y0urstalker In reply to Mandalore13 [2008-08-04 06:59:27 +0000 UTC]

he's a vampire in my game and not a vampire in Night Fiction, in both he's insane.

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Mandalore13 In reply to y0urstalker [2008-08-04 07:01:52 +0000 UTC]

Ah...I want to reaaaad.

-Mandalore

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y0urstalker In reply to y0urstalker [2008-08-04 06:26:20 +0000 UTC]

actually, not really, I just don't like it because it isn't like the vampire I'm making.

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y0urstalker [2008-08-04 04:14:27 +0000 UTC]

quite personally I hate it.

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