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I just decided that the last reference sheet didn't represented my style anymore neither for Lully... x3 So here's a new one with some updates on her design, and new colors! <3
About Lully Pop:
The bunny clubber known only as Lully Pop, since her true name is unknown, is a 21 years old female born in a common family at Brazil.
She came to Holand yet young when her mother died, so she doesn't know very much about Brazil, but know how to speak portuguese.
Lully is the middle daughter, her other sisters are Bonny (Wich Lully has a great annoyance) the older, and Pretzel, the youger. Lully haven't met her father, she was created only by her mother.
Lully's mother died when she was 12, then Lully had to work to feed the family, since Bonny used to live away from home. Lully worked as waitress at Madam Yolanda's cabaret, without knowing that Yolanda was her aunt, when she finally discovered, Yolanda decided to adopt Lully and her family, and take care of them since then.
Today Lully works as dancer (Only dancer, not stripper) and DJ at some Clubs too.
Lully's personality is very playful and cheerful, she likes to dance and tease around. She's dressed like that because she was inspired to Yolanda's outfit, wich is pretty revealing too. She loves vibrant colors to transmit her energy, her favorite are neon green and pink.
Lully Pop Β© Yamiikarus
See also:
Nude Reference Sheet:
Electro-Cute Outfit:
Madam Yoyoh:
Anti:
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Comments: 35
theycallhimcake [2013-03-10 02:46:52 +0000 UTC]
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Alrighty, I'd say this is a definite improvement from the original reference sheet. You're more adventurous with posing, which is showing. I also like the more subtle muscle tone in her legs and abdomen, though keep in mind the exact kinda of things she would have to do to get that kind of muscle. I understand that she goes clubbing, and dances a lot, but those are the abs of someone who does a lot of crunches, or actively works towards them... heck, she might already do that and I'm oblivious to it, but keep in mind the difference between "natural" formed muscles and ones that are worked towards (like you might see in someone who goes to the gym). I'm also wondering if, considering her hobby, if her arms would be toned as well, if not just to balance it out.
I really like how long her hair is. However, I feel as if the line definition in the hair isn't quite enough... I feel like, instead of long, flowing indications of hair, they're placed in a somewhat random manner. Were I tackling hair like this, I might try to either add more, longer lines, or get rid of lines in general, if the style was simple enough. From the back view, the sudden corner in the hair throws me off a bit (near the right thigh). I'm wondering if you intended for some sort of overlap there, but I'm not so sure... if you weren't, then I would suggest curving it in the future. Hair doesn't shape like that unless it's being affected by something physically (say, on a table).
From the back view, the angle of her left foot is the first thing I noticed... in the front view pic it's fine, but why can I see the bottom of it from the back view? She isn't standing on glass, and it almost looks like she's about the trip. Granted, the back view of a high-heeled shoe can be quite difficult, but still... think about how it's positioned in relation to the ground.
That said, I can really appreciate your subtle detail in forming the leg. However, her right leg doesn't appear to be as toned as her left leg. This is especially prominent from the front view.
I have a minor quip about the format of the listed information, though this may simply be personal preference... Instead of being in a bulleted list, the information is in a normal reading format... I understand the conservation of space, but for some reason, I feel as if the information is not as easily accessible as it would be in a bulleted list format. Again, that's just a personal preference ^^'.
Overall, this is a huge improvement from the first one, and you're definitely getting better. Just watch out for those minor details, and you'll be all set. : )
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Yamiikarus In reply to theycallhimcake [2013-03-10 03:25:05 +0000 UTC]
Thank you really much for your critique, I'll give you some answers. <3
Yes, she usually goes to gym to workout too, I don't tell this information here at DA that much, I usually say that on Tumblr and chats. :3 Thos muscles weren't naturally formed with dancing only. x3 I tried to make the arms a little toned too, but they took too much attention, and I like to keep the focus on her legs and abs, so I removed it.
The hair lines were really random I usually define the final lines in the shading only, so I skipped that. x3
Yes, Her high heels were a problem for me to work on, since I tried a lot of positions, but none of them worked, so I just leave it like this. xD
The muscle on her right leg is correct I made the same muscles on both of them, but due the asymetry clothing it tends to look a bit off... xD
About the information, I tried to make this ref sheet as simple as possible in a "slim" format. I tried to make something really basic, to give the viewer more space to stare at Lully's design mainly. xD I wasn't even making the color picker, I just added it due some really close tones, and I added it when I was uploading the ref sheet, otherwise the reference sheet would be even more simple. xD
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kaixmike [2016-02-25 00:01:12 +0000 UTC]
(Starts daydreaming her strip dancing to fly away now from panty and stocking and studyxstudy from High School DxD.)
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SmokeyandtheBandit [2014-01-15 12:48:04 +0000 UTC]
What skin? All I see is the white fur?
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Yamiikarus In reply to SmokeyandtheBandit [2014-01-15 12:58:01 +0000 UTC]
Nose, nipples and pussy. c:
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SmokeyandtheBandit In reply to Yamiikarus [2014-01-15 13:11:21 +0000 UTC]
Oh okay. That explains it. Too of those aren't visible in this picture.
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X-A-K [2013-08-17 22:39:59 +0000 UTC]
she got them Hips and thighs. the stockings holding High. she got that attitude in the Bag. she's got the rights to Brag!
sorry a little jiggle i just thought up looking at this picture XD
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Ichicora-Uzumaki [2013-07-20 05:55:00 +0000 UTC]
i like this character, i want to make her on Kisekae but there is no lollipop item
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WestWinter [2013-06-20 16:26:29 +0000 UTC]
Man, you have a super cute, cool and damn sexy!
you make a very well done work on her!
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Dark-Lemur [2013-03-11 02:27:24 +0000 UTC]
Love the pose. Looks like you caught her in mid-rave!
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Yamiikarus In reply to Dark-Lemur [2013-03-12 15:02:38 +0000 UTC]
Indeed! Thank you! <3
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haitstu [2013-03-11 02:20:51 +0000 UTC]
Interesting indeed. Seems like there were some changes to the character. Pretty much on the accessories and hair. It's even longer now!!! Maybe, (once I'm done with my stuff), if possible, would you mind if I drew your character just for fun?
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Yamiikarus In reply to haitstu [2013-03-12 15:05:10 +0000 UTC]
Thank you really much. <3
Yes, I wanted to make some little updates on her design. <3
About the hair, I exaggerated on porpose just to make it sttylish, it's not longer... xD
Ohg, no, I don't mind at all, please go aheadd! <3
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haitstu In reply to Yamiikarus [2013-03-14 01:15:39 +0000 UTC]
Quite right indeed, and awesome! ^.^
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aha-mccoy [2013-03-10 07:06:15 +0000 UTC]
ela Γ© mesmo super sexy r super fofinha. hehe bom trabalho X3
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LifeSoulZen--Art [2013-03-10 02:21:27 +0000 UTC]
I like her, everytime you post somethin with her i favorite it, even though i dont really like furries haha. i just reallyc like your style
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