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Description Just something I have in the works! It's still just a rough sketch with rough colors as of now

I wanted to hold off on showing Meiles' voodoo magic until I can properly introduce it in the comics, but since I'm going sooo sooo sooooooooo slow in getting those out... well, here's a big jump in the timeline

This happens in a later story arc, just a bit after he and Yarifeth have established their... uh... for lack of a better word, "romantic" relationship. It follows Yari's development into a shadow priest and segways into the introduction of Meiles' big brother Muk'tal. This scene shows the first glimpse of why Meiles' brand of voodoo is banned in the Horde.




I don't really consider myself a writer, but I like to write out the key scenes in my storylines. So juuuuuuuust in case somebody's interested... I thought I'd share it for once. So here you go. Or just skip it, haha!


Warning: This was written quickly and not completely proofread.
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In the distance, Meiles could see another wave of mercenaries heading towards them. More than he or Yarifeth could handle. Behind them was a difficult escape route full of fire and collapsing structures. They wouldn't escape fast enough to reach the next stronghold in time.

The little elf gulped as her glances shifted rapidly from Meiles to the incoming warriors and back to the troll again. "W-w-what are we going to do?"

"We be havin' no choice, Pet," he grimaced. "Dis be all because o' yer stubborness. Da warchief be havin' our heads if he be findin' out wat I'm about ta do. Here," he said, as he threw the smaller of his axes to her. "Chop me a head. Must be Horde. Quick!"

"WHAT???"

"DO IT! NOW!" he roared as he himself reached for the nearest fallen Horde warrior and chopped off the orc's head. "What are you waiting for?"

"I can't!"

"Yes, you can!"

"No I can't!"

"DO IT!"

Finally at his bark Yarifeth obeyed and chopped off the head of a nearby troll, shrieking as she did so. Meiles reached over and threw it towards a relatively clear space on the ground. "Get another! Quick!"

First time is always the hardest. She was able to do it easier the second time around. And the third. When they both collected six heads between them, Meiles pulled her towards the clearing where he threw the severed heads. Quickly he arranged them in a semi-circle in front of him as they faced towards the incoming enemies.

"Ya gotta listen ta me, and listen good, a'right?" he said sternly, giving her a glare of utmost seriousness. He slashed at his wrists with the blade of his axe and thick blood came flowing out. With a thick finger he picked some up and painted a stripe of it across his eyes, then did the same to hers. "I be doin' dis wit' no proper protection other dan me own blood. No charms, no talismans, nothin'! Without da proper materials I can't be controllin' dese spirits properly. But dis be our only chance."

"W-w-what is?" Yarifeth asked, trying hard not to let the panic well inside her.

"I be takin' da souls of our fallen comrades. Turn dem into vengeful, hungry spirits. Dey be wanting to devour every living 'ting in dis area. Including us."

"But--!"

"Da bond dat we have as fellow soldiers of da Horde may reduce da harm dey be doin' to us", Meiles interrupted. He held a bloody finger across her eyes, holding them closed and painting them with more blood. "Da spell be cast wit' me blood, it be offerin' us a little protection, at least. Da eyes be da window to da soul. Don' be openin' dem, no matter wat. Don' let dem in." He paused, still keeping his hand over her eyes, hoping to calm her down. "Hold on to me. They be comin' over ya, dey be tryin' to eat your soul. Ya be bleeding through your pores as dey try ta suck your soul from your body. But whatever ya hear, and whatever pain ya feel, don't let go of me. Ya understand? Don' let go!"

Yarifeth bit her lower lip as she forced courage into herself and nodded determinedly.

"Good," he said, as he stood up. "Remember, as long as ya keep yer eyes closed, dey can't get to ya." He patted her head as he felt her shuffle close and embrace one of his legs. "Pray, Pet. Pray to yer light. If yer light can keep us healed, keep us from losin' too much blood, den I t'ink we can live through dis."

Meiles brought the axe into his wrists again and slashed deeply down both of his forearms, causing blood to rush forth. He threw the axe back and brought his bleeding arms in front of him, allowing the deep red liquid to spill in by the heads of the fallen Horde warriors, as he recited his incantations.

"Here dey come..."
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Comments: 132

yapi In reply to ??? [2011-03-17 21:23:26 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! I like to write once in a while, but I don't do it enough and I don't expose my work so much that I can legitimately label myself as a writer. But it does help me get a clearer view of my stories ^^ But I'm glad you enjoyed it, and that it helped you appreciate the picture

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CamillusCactus In reply to yapi [2011-03-17 23:39:27 +0000 UTC]

You know what could be interesting, if you're willinf to of course! Whenever I get to writting again, I thought I could send you a short story, once in a while, telling each of our couples their stories and you could illustrate it. If ever we lack ideas for commissions

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yapi In reply to CamillusCactus [2011-03-18 07:05:34 +0000 UTC]

Hahaha I wonder if you ever will run out of ideas! Not that I mind!

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CamillusCactus In reply to yapi [2011-03-18 13:12:52 +0000 UTC]

You're right, I think my head will be full of ideas for the rest of my life As long as you don't mind I'll keep on commissioning you I really enjoy working with you Besides, if ever you need a break you me you know where to reach me

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FeatherhowlArt In reply to ??? [2011-03-17 15:09:54 +0000 UTC]

Not a writer?!?!?!?! You're amazing at it! I'd like to see it more =3 and the pic is great by the way

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yapi In reply to FeatherhowlArt [2011-03-18 05:22:42 +0000 UTC]

Haha thank you! Well, I'm not a writer in the sense that it's not something that people would regularly expect me to do, and that I don't really release my work to the public. But I try to write decently at least!

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FeatherhowlArt In reply to yapi [2011-03-18 18:35:07 +0000 UTC]

yes ya do =3

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ParadoxialGamer In reply to ??? [2011-03-17 14:52:57 +0000 UTC]

OMFG!!! SDKJGHSKDJFHGSKJEHTRKGAHEWKLRGL!!!!!






I SO wanna read the rest of that!! not me if you finish it?! PWWWEEZE?!

Oh man, Mailes just got about...100 times haweter! >///<

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yapi In reply to ParadoxialGamer [2011-03-17 21:21:46 +0000 UTC]

Ahahahaha! I don't really plan to finish it, though, since I just write out specific scenes instead of completed fics XD And I gotta go back to my original place in the story, haha!

But thanks, I'm glad you like it ^^

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ParadoxialGamer In reply to yapi [2011-03-18 19:42:42 +0000 UTC]

NUUUUUUUU!!!!!

you just gotta! DX!

I'd do it, but...i am not all that good. >_<

What did you think of my pic of Meiles anyway? ^_^ i got a bit lazy on Bwansombi

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yapi In reply to ParadoxialGamer [2011-03-18 20:02:14 +0000 UTC]

Oh! Haha yeah I looked at it then suddenly I had to go so I was gonna comment later and FORGOT. Booo.

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DraykinDesto In reply to ??? [2011-03-17 14:46:05 +0000 UTC]

How very badass. Leaves me wanting more.

And the story added so much to it, don't let yourself think the writing isn't good. It made the scene come to life.

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yapi In reply to DraykinDesto [2011-03-18 08:08:48 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! Well, I'm not saying my writing is BAD or anything, but writing isn't really what I *do*, if you get what I mean. But I try to write decently, hehe!

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Turtlefan926 In reply to ??? [2011-03-17 14:25:08 +0000 UTC]

Go Melies Go! I dont want u to die but....GO MELIES!!

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yapi In reply to Turtlefan926 [2011-03-22 16:38:30 +0000 UTC]

Haha don't worry, he won't die XD

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Turtlefan926 In reply to yapi [2011-03-22 16:41:23 +0000 UTC]

oh good

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Avelineh In reply to ??? [2011-03-17 14:18:13 +0000 UTC]

Oooh, I can't wait to see this piece finished!

The writing was AWESOME. Don't you say anything otherwise, I wanted to read even more! After playing Dragon Age (Origins and number 2) that reminded me a lot of Blood Magic. It can be pretty harmful but super strong, I got the same feeling from your text. Awesome job~

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yapi In reply to Avelineh [2011-03-24 14:45:09 +0000 UTC]

Haha thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed reading it, at least Hmm, Blood Magic, eh? Sounds interesting (are the spells cast with blood too, like Meiles' work?)!

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Avelineh In reply to yapi [2011-03-24 20:46:27 +0000 UTC]

Yup! The magic is enhanced by blood and most of the casts involve drawing the lifepower (blood) out of yourself or an enemy. o:

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yapi In reply to Avelineh [2011-03-31 16:26:58 +0000 UTC]

Oooh it does sound just like Meiles' magic!

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Neah-chan In reply to ??? [2011-03-17 14:13:39 +0000 UTC]

That is just stunning!! No writer huh? Liar! This is so awesome, both the writing and the picture!!

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yapi In reply to Neah-chan [2011-03-17 14:32:49 +0000 UTC]

Ahahaha really?? ...Thank you XD I've never really released much writing, haha.

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thirzadragon In reply to yapi [2011-03-17 19:32:45 +0000 UTC]

yes! You should write more. Like, proper full length stories.

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Neah-chan In reply to yapi [2011-03-17 16:57:51 +0000 UTC]

Well, you should write more I think it's good ^__^

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Crazybit101 In reply to ??? [2011-03-17 14:11:30 +0000 UTC]

God I love their story, I love your writing and I am sooo excited to see the finished product!!

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yapi In reply to Crazybit101 [2011-03-18 05:10:04 +0000 UTC]

Thanks so much! I don't know if the finished product will come anytime soon since I have so much to do at the moment, but someday, someday! XD

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Crazybit101 In reply to yapi [2011-03-18 05:21:41 +0000 UTC]

Oh I know, But I loooove their story sooo much!! faster!!! lol jk

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lilsrah In reply to ??? [2011-03-17 14:07:41 +0000 UTC]

"No writer" my butt!!
That's an excellent excerpt, woman! You've always so beautifully and thoroughly painted portraits (literally AND figuratively speaking! ) of both of these characters that I doubt any bit of "writing fail" (*cough*nonexistent*cough*) would be noticed anyway....
MORE PLEASE!

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Alecea-Dekay In reply to ??? [2011-03-17 14:06:18 +0000 UTC]

... I think your writing is awesome

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yapi In reply to Alecea-Dekay [2011-03-17 23:38:57 +0000 UTC]

Aw haha thanks!

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Alecea-Dekay In reply to yapi [2011-03-18 00:47:12 +0000 UTC]

You be welcome

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