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Description Just something I have in the works! It's still just a rough sketch with rough colors as of now

I wanted to hold off on showing Meiles' voodoo magic until I can properly introduce it in the comics, but since I'm going sooo sooo sooooooooo slow in getting those out... well, here's a big jump in the timeline

This happens in a later story arc, just a bit after he and Yarifeth have established their... uh... for lack of a better word, "romantic" relationship. It follows Yari's development into a shadow priest and segways into the introduction of Meiles' big brother Muk'tal. This scene shows the first glimpse of why Meiles' brand of voodoo is banned in the Horde.




I don't really consider myself a writer, but I like to write out the key scenes in my storylines. So juuuuuuuust in case somebody's interested... I thought I'd share it for once. So here you go. Or just skip it, haha!


Warning: This was written quickly and not completely proofread.
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In the distance, Meiles could see another wave of mercenaries heading towards them. More than he or Yarifeth could handle. Behind them was a difficult escape route full of fire and collapsing structures. They wouldn't escape fast enough to reach the next stronghold in time.

The little elf gulped as her glances shifted rapidly from Meiles to the incoming warriors and back to the troll again. "W-w-what are we going to do?"

"We be havin' no choice, Pet," he grimaced. "Dis be all because o' yer stubborness. Da warchief be havin' our heads if he be findin' out wat I'm about ta do. Here," he said, as he threw the smaller of his axes to her. "Chop me a head. Must be Horde. Quick!"

"WHAT???"

"DO IT! NOW!" he roared as he himself reached for the nearest fallen Horde warrior and chopped off the orc's head. "What are you waiting for?"

"I can't!"

"Yes, you can!"

"No I can't!"

"DO IT!"

Finally at his bark Yarifeth obeyed and chopped off the head of a nearby troll, shrieking as she did so. Meiles reached over and threw it towards a relatively clear space on the ground. "Get another! Quick!"

First time is always the hardest. She was able to do it easier the second time around. And the third. When they both collected six heads between them, Meiles pulled her towards the clearing where he threw the severed heads. Quickly he arranged them in a semi-circle in front of him as they faced towards the incoming enemies.

"Ya gotta listen ta me, and listen good, a'right?" he said sternly, giving her a glare of utmost seriousness. He slashed at his wrists with the blade of his axe and thick blood came flowing out. With a thick finger he picked some up and painted a stripe of it across his eyes, then did the same to hers. "I be doin' dis wit' no proper protection other dan me own blood. No charms, no talismans, nothin'! Without da proper materials I can't be controllin' dese spirits properly. But dis be our only chance."

"W-w-what is?" Yarifeth asked, trying hard not to let the panic well inside her.

"I be takin' da souls of our fallen comrades. Turn dem into vengeful, hungry spirits. Dey be wanting to devour every living 'ting in dis area. Including us."

"But--!"

"Da bond dat we have as fellow soldiers of da Horde may reduce da harm dey be doin' to us", Meiles interrupted. He held a bloody finger across her eyes, holding them closed and painting them with more blood. "Da spell be cast wit' me blood, it be offerin' us a little protection, at least. Da eyes be da window to da soul. Don' be openin' dem, no matter wat. Don' let dem in." He paused, still keeping his hand over her eyes, hoping to calm her down. "Hold on to me. They be comin' over ya, dey be tryin' to eat your soul. Ya be bleeding through your pores as dey try ta suck your soul from your body. But whatever ya hear, and whatever pain ya feel, don't let go of me. Ya understand? Don' let go!"

Yarifeth bit her lower lip as she forced courage into herself and nodded determinedly.

"Good," he said, as he stood up. "Remember, as long as ya keep yer eyes closed, dey can't get to ya." He patted her head as he felt her shuffle close and embrace one of his legs. "Pray, Pet. Pray to yer light. If yer light can keep us healed, keep us from losin' too much blood, den I t'ink we can live through dis."

Meiles brought the axe into his wrists again and slashed deeply down both of his forearms, causing blood to rush forth. He threw the axe back and brought his bleeding arms in front of him, allowing the deep red liquid to spill in by the heads of the fallen Horde warriors, as he recited his incantations.

"Here dey come..."
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Comments: 132

yapi In reply to ??? [2013-06-30 18:10:18 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! It's gonna be a while before they get to this part of the story, though!

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AZREAL258 [2013-04-13 20:41:43 +0000 UTC]

This is a awesome story.

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yapi In reply to AZREAL258 [2013-06-14 18:26:03 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it ^^

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AZREAL258 In reply to yapi [2013-06-14 18:34:03 +0000 UTC]

Keep up the good work.

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theworgenwarlock [2013-03-16 00:22:26 +0000 UTC]

Oh boy, good old banned voodoo magic using the souls of the fallen. Love that. Honestly if I was un the receiving end of this wrath, I may or may not wet myself and cry like a baby gnome

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pim-nee [2012-03-28 18:57:09 +0000 UTC]

guaahh...! always had goose bombs evreytime I see a shopped off head.... and now there's seven XO

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yapi In reply to pim-nee [2012-04-03 07:36:53 +0000 UTC]

Ahaha sorry XD

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silentsteel [2011-10-24 06:59:41 +0000 UTC]

Yeeesh . . . dark, dramatic, glorious . . . and yes, I can totally see why that voodoo is forbidden. *shudders*

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Zinjak [2011-08-04 06:19:37 +0000 UTC]

Big Bad Voodoo

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TragedyOfABrokenRose [2011-05-25 21:14:25 +0000 UTC]

the only thing I could think of, he must have ripped her in two when they did it.

love the story!

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yapi In reply to TragedyOfABrokenRose [2011-05-25 21:18:22 +0000 UTC]

Oh, she didn't enjoy it one bit, I promise you!

Thanks!

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TragedyOfABrokenRose In reply to yapi [2011-05-26 04:54:26 +0000 UTC]

Poor girl xD

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zukosgirl28 [2011-04-30 10:41:56 +0000 UTC]

Wow that's just awesome. You've definitely got talent missy

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yapi In reply to zukosgirl28 [2011-04-30 21:26:44 +0000 UTC]

hehe thanks a lot!

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Aishinteru [2011-04-03 00:39:54 +0000 UTC]

that is cool!!!!

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SomeRedDame [2011-03-24 22:33:14 +0000 UTC]

Comic or not, getting a glimpse into a scene like this is incredible. >w< I love it and I love the ritual you came up with!
Was there a reference you used or what?

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yapi In reply to SomeRedDame [2011-04-05 16:16:13 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! Haha no, no reference, I just pretty much made it up as I wrote it XD

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SomeRedDame In reply to yapi [2011-04-05 16:42:01 +0000 UTC]

ffffffff oh god dude that is SO awesome. XD You're my hero

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Rein-chan [2011-03-20 19:06:54 +0000 UTC]

amazing ^_^

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Pisu7 [2011-03-19 16:09:43 +0000 UTC]

this is... WOW!
you are so good at writing!
I love the picture!
and... more voodoo!

...'"We be havin' no choice, Pet," he grimaced. "Dis be all because o' yer stubborness. Da warchief be havin' our heads if he be findin' out wat I'm about ta do. Here," he said, as he threw the smaller of his axes to her. "Chop me a head. Must be Horde. Quick!"'... (should I say? xD) this is typically Meiles!

awesome work!

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yapi In reply to Pisu7 [2011-03-21 10:22:26 +0000 UTC]

Ahaha thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it

What's typically Meiles? That there are enemies coming and he's still scolding Yari anyway? XD Well if she obeyed like a good girl and stayed with the retreating forces rather than running right into a fallen base to look for Meiles he would have been happy just bleeding there and finding a way out his predicament (he was wounded and trapped under a fallen building). He might die, he might not. He didn't care.

But now that Yari's there he's forced to use his voodoo XP

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Misty-Ishida [2011-03-19 16:03:39 +0000 UTC]

Ok, wow. This just looks so EPIC! But we're a long ways off from finding out what brought this on, are we XD. Now I wanna know more about them!!

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yapi In reply to Misty-Ishida [2011-03-22 16:42:40 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! But haha, yessssss, a loooong way from this. Oh, if only I had a limitless amount of time and energy! XD

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Azazeth [2011-03-19 14:16:17 +0000 UTC]

TOTALLY AWESOME!

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yapi In reply to Azazeth [2011-03-22 17:40:59 +0000 UTC]

Haha thank you!

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boochan82 [2011-03-18 18:44:42 +0000 UTC]

Not a writer? This is Magnificent hon!

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yapi In reply to boochan82 [2011-03-22 17:40:48 +0000 UTC]

Haha well I don't consider myself a writer in the sense that literature is not something that people would expect from me XD But I try to write decently, at least! But in need of much refining!

Thank you, glad you enjoyed it!

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BrokenHaiymi [2011-03-18 11:55:52 +0000 UTC]

Wtf? No writer? Youare an excellent writer! You really should concider doing more work like this. Couldn't stop reading XD

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yapi In reply to BrokenHaiymi [2011-03-24 14:05:05 +0000 UTC]

Aw haha thank you so much! Well, I like to write from time to time, but I don't really put my work out for public consumption. I have lots of stuff written that's lock away in a big black vault of doom XD But I'm glad you like this one!

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BrokenHaiymi In reply to yapi [2011-03-24 20:25:02 +0000 UTC]

hahahaha, awesome xD but you definitely should share some more of your writing ;D

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Abbarath [2011-03-18 07:17:28 +0000 UTC]

CAnt wait!!

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artisticchica [2011-03-18 07:14:19 +0000 UTC]

O.O OMG! THIS IS SO COOL! GO MEILES GO! GO YARI YOU CAN DO IT! I KNOW YOU CAN! XD
love it the little story yapi!

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yapi In reply to artisticchica [2011-03-22 17:38:30 +0000 UTC]

Hahaha! Meiles did not want to have to do that! Stupid Yari making him do it XD

Thank you!

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artisticchica In reply to yapi [2011-03-22 22:27:41 +0000 UTC]

what in the world did yari do to make him do this anyways?
welcome!

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yapi In reply to artisticchica [2011-03-23 07:28:16 +0000 UTC]

Well, Meiles was out in the front lines and he left Yari behind at one of the outposts (this is her first time out in a campaign, and he doesn't think she's ready to fight in the field yet so he left her at base to heal wounded soldiers).

The Horde side had to call a strategic retreat as they were getting overpowered. The orders were to abandon the smaller outposts and regroup at the main base camp where they can reorganize and attack at full force. However,Yari noticed that Meiles wasn't among the soldiers who came back, so she went out to get him instead of joining the retreat.

Meiles turned out to be injured and trapped under a collapsed structure. Now on his own he was fine trying to figure out a way to get himself out of trouble and away from the remaining enemy soldiers before their reinforcements came. But Yari came and unlike him, she's slow, inexperienced, and just generally awkward so she basically aggroed everything, and they had to fight them off and had no more time to escape before the next wave of enemies came.

Yari's such a noob. Haha!

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artisticchica In reply to yapi [2011-03-23 08:06:57 +0000 UTC]

O.O wow..now thats scary to think about all the things happening all at once!
i feel like i need to make a story for my 45 toon warlock. lol.
i cant even get out of a spot that im in with the sun agents or what ever they are called.

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Eviannya [2011-03-18 04:21:49 +0000 UTC]

such a great writer. omg. i wanna read the rest of the entire book just off this page. and i cant WAIT to see this picture finished.

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yapi In reply to Eviannya [2011-03-22 17:37:25 +0000 UTC]

Aw haha thank you! I'm really glad you enjoyed it that much!

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ika-siyam [2011-03-18 03:09:18 +0000 UTC]

I like et~! XD

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Dreadapple [2011-03-18 01:21:02 +0000 UTC]

awesome awesome awesome!!

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yapi In reply to Dreadapple [2011-03-24 14:04:10 +0000 UTC]

Haha thank you!

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sexta-hellion [2011-03-18 00:31:37 +0000 UTC]

Oh. Wow!! This is soo cool Yapi. I love it, so exciting, I can't wait to see what happens next.

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yapi In reply to sexta-hellion [2011-03-18 05:11:14 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!! I won't be going more into this story yet, though, as I'd like to finish the current arc I'm doing first XD

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LadyMuse [2011-03-17 23:57:57 +0000 UTC]

Awesome pic and awesome story!!!!!! I wants more!

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yapi In reply to LadyMuse [2011-04-07 23:18:16 +0000 UTC]

Hehe thanks!

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kaliannameyron [2011-03-17 22:44:10 +0000 UTC]

pfft, you're a fine writer, and if you ever do need/want a proofreader/beta, I am so your girl. ^_^ Can't wait to see this piece finished, although, given the subject matter, the rough look is emotionally effective.

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yapi In reply to kaliannameyron [2011-03-17 23:43:36 +0000 UTC]

Aw haha thank you. Well, I don't consider myself a writer in the sense that prose isn't something that people would normally expect from me, and that what I have written, I usually keep to myself (I have pages upon pages of Yari/Meiles scenes written out!). But I still do try to write as decent as possible, as much as sentence fluency, grammar, and spelling goes.

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shorty35565 [2011-03-17 21:53:40 +0000 UTC]

Whoa, i think ur a good writer!!
Great picture too!

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yapi In reply to shorty35565 [2011-03-27 16:48:54 +0000 UTC]

Ahahah thank you, glad you enjoyed it

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Pimpypants [2011-03-17 21:02:45 +0000 UTC]

Do these people like, never die? She gets shot in the butt, he goes gouging out his arms, DANG GIRL

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