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Published: 2014-10-26 22:49:47 +0000 UTC; Views: 7868; Favourites: 154; Downloads: 22
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Description *EDIT*
I'm too lazy to finish, so here's what I was working on. There was supposed to be more vines. They were meant to wrap around all her legs, but as I said, got lazy xD Sorry guys.


This will be one of the four queens. I want to name her Aurora Dawn, but I already have a pony named that. Idk, I'll figure something out xD

She is slightly larger than your average butterfly, so pretty freaking small xD

More about Pixie Ponies here! ^u^ > Pixie Ponies(Closed species as of now)
Base is by SelenaEde  


*EDIT*
Well crud. This was posted to terrible ponies. ._.
I wonder how many people I'll get trying to hate on this? xD

Anyway, I have a few things to say really quick about what was said on the post just so you people know(Also I don't have a tumblr so I can't really say anything on there xD)

"The speckles definitely put a strain on the eyes. The colors aren’t too bad, but there is just too much going on with the patterns.

That being said, this person made this species closed, and you have to spend 100 points  to make one.

Why?"

If you look in the top, it's a WIP. I was going to try and make the patterns not as bad anyway. 

And I made the species closed, and did the whole 100 points thing because it is very underdeveloped. I only have three of the four queens designed, and one regular pixie pony. Once I get more on them, I will open the species, and customs will only be 30 points if anyone wants one. Maybe less. 

But yea, just thought I should clear those things up for ya (even though I know no one will read this anyway xDD)

Thanks for making it to the end of this. Have a cookie >w< *gives cookie*

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Comments: 207

FireHeartVolcano [2016-11-12 12:46:46 +0000 UTC]

So cute

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m-ellohi [2016-01-28 20:15:26 +0000 UTC]

so adorable



*mega squee*

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blackangel2113 [2015-08-26 18:34:18 +0000 UTC]

She looks beautiful!!

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yazmen10 In reply to blackangel2113 [2015-09-24 01:27:47 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! ;u;

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OCcriticism [2015-07-30 23:17:03 +0000 UTC]

I like it.

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yazmen10 In reply to OCcriticism [2015-09-24 01:27:37 +0000 UTC]

Woo! >w<

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Briopia [2015-07-17 22:36:28 +0000 UTC]

O.O How is this on terrible ponies? She is absolutely gorgeous. She doesn't have a backstory so how can she be a Mary Sue? If it is because of the fact she is a queen then this means that queen chrysalis is also a Mary Sue. If it is because he has a horn and wings I one thing to say: She is not an alicorn, and there is no evidence that she is op in any sense! I will quote one of my favorite Pony oc reviewers: "Just because it has wings does not make it an Alicorn" She is a pixie pony and the species sounds very well rounded so not op. If it is because of the colors I bring up:tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php… . All of the points related to appearance also refer to what is stated/described in written text. "She is a lovely shade of pinkish-white to represent her pure nature. The vine growing around her shows the complete control she has over nature and the love the plants have for her" vs. "She has a white coat with pink spiral patterns on the flank and ankles and dots under the eyes. Her mane/tail is a gradient from blonde to lilac with a water lily in both. Etc." One represents appearance as a direct correlation to personality also describing her as a flawless character. The second, however, gives a plain description and gives nothing about personality. It bothers me how people insult thing based on appearance alone, how can you tell what a character is like without a bio or even a cutiemark? If the colors hurt people's eyes they are not anywhere near clashing neon so the people must have an extreme sensitivity, if so they should have the brightness of their screen at a low setting to give an illusion of desaturation. I do not know how you can improve her design, if there is any need to, but the wing dark color may not go, not sure since it isn't on her. The only thing she is missing is a bio and with the description of the species I cannot wait ^.^ Don't listen to the Mary Sue commenters, they abuse the term too much for my tastes (Sorry if this became a rant on Mary Sue comments, I just cannot stand people throwing around that term without good reason)

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yazmen10 In reply to Briopia [2015-09-24 01:31:03 +0000 UTC]

Well, she does have a backstory, but I just didn't upload it here.

And yea, a lot of this is what I've wanted to say to a lot of other people. :l 
Thank you. 

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batw1ng [2015-07-11 09:36:32 +0000 UTC]

Really pretty! I love the color scheme and design

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yazmen10 In reply to batw1ng [2015-09-24 01:27:29 +0000 UTC]

Thank you ;w;

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rainbowdashrocks5 [2015-07-02 14:54:25 +0000 UTC]

so sparkly

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yazmen10 In reply to rainbowdashrocks5 [2015-07-03 01:58:09 +0000 UTC]

Much sparkle
such wow

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skydrowner [2015-06-26 18:36:02 +0000 UTC]

Why the heck is this on TerriblePonies?
She's really pretty C:

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yazmen10 In reply to skydrowner [2015-07-03 01:58:23 +0000 UTC]

Thank yoouu ;u;

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The-Little-Caticorn [2015-06-26 02:20:20 +0000 UTC]

She is beautiful! But people probably will call her a Mary-Sue.

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yazmen10 In reply to The-Little-Caticorn [2015-06-26 16:53:42 +0000 UTC]

Thanks, and I know lol
People should probably look up what a Mary sue actually is though before they start ranting about how she is one. xP

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KatLovesMLP [2015-06-15 04:12:24 +0000 UTC]

*cries*
*throws up blood*
*cries again*

This should be removed..
this oc is...


...unique...

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yazmen10 In reply to KatLovesMLP [2015-06-15 08:21:16 +0000 UTC]

Well, everyone can have their own opinion, but isn't that one just a little harsh?
I don't mind constructive criticism and all, but saying something should be removed isn't exactly helpful...

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KatLovesMLP In reply to yazmen10 [2015-06-17 22:15:48 +0000 UTC]

its not harsh.

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Java-Kitty In reply to KatLovesMLP [2015-07-04 22:01:00 +0000 UTC]

You're right, it's down right rude and offensive to the artist.
Just because something is unique doesn't mean it's bad.

If you're going to comment your opinion on someone's OC try to offer real criticism rather than a blatant insult.

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KatLovesMLP In reply to Java-Kitty [2015-07-07 00:47:08 +0000 UTC]

Unique is bad.

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Java-Kitty In reply to KatLovesMLP [2015-07-07 02:39:20 +0000 UTC]

Soo in other words? You are bad? I mean no one else in the world is like you therefore Unique.
Any OC you have made is bad? I mean they aren't recolors, therefore unique
Any piece of art you've made? Guess that's bad too because it's unique.

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Emeraldy-Dust [2015-05-22 21:06:34 +0000 UTC]

She's amazing!

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yazmen10 In reply to Emeraldy-Dust [2015-05-24 15:50:24 +0000 UTC]

Ah, thank you

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MoonieStarSky [2015-05-19 19:28:49 +0000 UTC]

She looks so pretty!

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yazmen10 In reply to MoonieStarSky [2015-05-20 01:56:09 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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MoonieStarSky In reply to yazmen10 [2015-05-20 02:03:16 +0000 UTC]

np

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iKittehs [2015-05-05 19:32:18 +0000 UTC]

Despite it being on TP, I think this is a wonderful idea :3

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yazmen10 In reply to iKittehs [2015-05-20 01:56:17 +0000 UTC]

Ah, thank you so much

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iKittehs In reply to yazmen10 [2015-05-21 17:15:55 +0000 UTC]

No problem, I speak the truth :3

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dokisforlokis [2015-04-30 00:36:49 +0000 UTC]

I actually think this 0C l00ks pretty g00d. 0u0 n0t bad br0

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yazmen10 In reply to dokisforlokis [2015-04-30 01:12:23 +0000 UTC]

I can't tell if this is meant to be sarcastic, or genuine o.o
Really sorry, I'm not good at understanding things

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dokisforlokis In reply to yazmen10 [2015-05-10 00:28:39 +0000 UTC]

0h it's chill, I'm being legit 0u0 the c0l0r scheme is really pretty, and I think that it's pretty c00l 0u0

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ShinigamiKitten [2015-03-10 15:46:30 +0000 UTC]

This is so gorgeous! <3

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yazmen10 In reply to ShinigamiKitten [2015-04-30 01:11:03 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! ^u^

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SapphirePhoenixMoon [2015-02-23 00:10:19 +0000 UTC]

I like the colors :3

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yazmen10 In reply to SapphirePhoenixMoon [2015-02-23 01:11:14 +0000 UTC]

purtty aint they?

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SapphirePhoenixMoon In reply to yazmen10 [2015-02-23 22:15:25 +0000 UTC]

Yes:3

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Jhugs [2015-02-21 21:01:59 +0000 UTC]

She shouldnt be on TP, this is amazing.

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yazmen10 In reply to Jhugs [2015-02-22 23:37:38 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! ;w;

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Emily-is-a-Otaku [2015-02-16 03:29:56 +0000 UTC]

I Don't Get Why This Is On TP! Shes So Pretty! >w<

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yazmen10 In reply to Emily-is-a-Otaku [2015-02-22 23:37:31 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much ^u^

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MelodyHeartArtist [2015-02-08 08:03:28 +0000 UTC]

this could probably have potential but the colors dont look too pleasing

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yazmen10 In reply to MelodyHeartArtist [2015-02-22 23:37:22 +0000 UTC]

Well, if you have any suggestions on how I could make her better, please let me know. (Other than fixing the speckles, because that one is pretty obvious xP)
I'd really like to improve on her design. ^u^

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MelodyHeartArtist In reply to yazmen10 [2015-03-05 09:19:33 +0000 UTC]

Well, I think light green and pink, yellow, and dark red would be nice color schemes for this concept. But of corse, not all at once. Gradients don't match the concept either. I really like the idea, but these are just some suggestions.

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MelodyHeartArtist In reply to yazmen10 [2015-02-22 23:42:39 +0000 UTC]

Well, I'm working on a journal so it will have to wait. It's actually OC tips for alicorn OCs.

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yazmen10 In reply to MelodyHeartArtist [2015-02-23 01:09:32 +0000 UTC]

Oh, that sounds cool! ^u^

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Sophias-Doll [2015-02-04 17:53:33 +0000 UTC]

I think she's pretty, however I'm not a big fan of the dots... But I still think she's an awesome OC!

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yazmen10 In reply to Sophias-Doll [2015-02-22 23:35:33 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much ^u^

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AnaisTheNightguard [2015-02-04 16:08:05 +0000 UTC]

this is amazing. UGH i want one! flower crown- like details, the wings are amazing aswell!

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