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ItinerantDjuradhan [2019-03-23 19:48:59 +0000 UTC]

Critique? Going through doors would be a pain in everyone's butt. Walking through crowds would be even worse.

But seriously, nicely done.

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Cryptid-Creations [2011-05-27 03:51:11 +0000 UTC]

Wow, its pretty hard to give a critique to this, it's fantastic already. Perfect anatomy and everything. The only thing I can think of is the sword's light, maybe it can reflect a bit on the leg armor and the gloves, but apart from that, utterly amazing stuff!

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yefumm In reply to Cryptid-Creations [2011-05-27 04:59:47 +0000 UTC]

ooo ok thanks, ill keep that in mind for next time!!

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Nin-jueTheKirin [2011-05-02 21:36:02 +0000 UTC]

ah there you go
i know you're pressed for time, but my only complaint is that the swords look a little flat on him...

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yefumm In reply to Nin-jueTheKirin [2011-05-03 03:03:17 +0000 UTC]

it DOES look flat, but I dont know how to change it

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Nin-jueTheKirin In reply to yefumm [2011-05-03 04:10:17 +0000 UTC]

yeah that's why i was reluctant to say so in the first place...
i'd transform it into perspective a bit and add a second edge to it

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yefumm In reply to Nin-jueTheKirin [2011-05-03 05:35:03 +0000 UTC]

ok ill give it a try.

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dude-im-alive [2011-05-02 11:05:12 +0000 UTC]

awesome

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yefumm In reply to dude-im-alive [2011-05-02 11:06:10 +0000 UTC]

thanks BRO, any crits?

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dude-im-alive In reply to yefumm [2011-05-02 11:09:34 +0000 UTC]

well there's something about his armour in the hip area that seems a little like it's just slumping down rather than a professional tight fit if you know what I mean. Maybe raise the belt a little higher? that's all I can really think of the rest is cool

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yefumm In reply to dude-im-alive [2011-05-02 11:10:55 +0000 UTC]

thanks a bunch, i was wondering what was so off about it....

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dude-im-alive In reply to yefumm [2011-05-02 11:19:57 +0000 UTC]

haha no worries (:

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dude-im-alive In reply to dude-im-alive [2011-05-02 11:05:31 +0000 UTC]

His weapons are cool

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