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Yitzin — Push the swing!
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Published: 2013-08-20 21:44:46 +0000 UTC; Views: 955; Favourites: 12; Downloads: 0
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So after more than two months on +10 territory, the Friendsies are back as we use to know them better. Some of them were amused, others shocked, but they enjoyed it a lot. What about you?Finally I've found a nice and convincing way to combine either pair of girls for a swing theme, with one pushing and the other riding it. Though I bet this would have been more crazy if someone more mischievous like Sita or Ludy were pushing it rather than Aida, who is more gentle but still has enough strength for Shannon who is older and heavier than her.
Not that hard, right? OK, now imagine if she were pushing Dora (or Nuria!) instead, or if Mari Fer is the one who pushes
Commenters: I'd really appreciate it more if we talk about what do you like of the drawing (beyond how well it might be colored, shaded and such) and if it reminds you of something in general. You can always include it but it's best if we also talk about the girls themselves and the scene
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Muy buen trabajo
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Gracias! Bueno, a lo mejor no lo percibes mucho pero se ve que Aida puede con Shannon aunque la rubia sea más pesada
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It just reminds me of my childhood days. I like their cheerful looks and the joy they're presenting 
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Thanks! Yes, I usually like to do my drawings as cheerful as possible, whenever I can
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Well, I do like how there's a sense of fun and energy in this picture (thanks to the facial expressions and motion). The motion lines and blur do well in conveying movement. The two seem to be enjoying themselves well.
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Thanks! And the best of all is that they need nothing electronic to enjoy themselves even if they weren't together, not even an old fashioned Game Boy or DS
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Raspones en las rodillas de Shannon, ¿Será que este es como el enésimo intento en el que busca mecerse sin caerse o simplemente es un relax después juegos un poco más movidos?
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Pues lo podemos tomar como un relax, porque al parecer sí sabe agarrarse bien, y no creo que Aida la pueda empujar tan fuerte
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I really like the clothing, especially the dress of the blonde girl. This reminds me of being scared to jump off of swings when I was a kid. All the tough kids would jump off of them and leap forward, and I just couldn't do it. For critique, I'd say the lines that you drew between the hands and the swing are not following the track of the swing well. Oh holy shit I just noticed the blurry transparent parts behind the blonde girl, amazing!
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Thanks! In this case I think Aida (left) should be more afraid of pushing Shannon (right) because the blonde is heavier
Again, not perfect, even if it were a straight path
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Very cute drawing. Once again, yay for redheads with freckles
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Thanks! Yes, you can always expect for Aida to show off her freckles on any drawing she appears (at least only those on the face, depends)
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Your friendsies are always cute as a button. I love the outfits, they both just look like they are enjoying this activity. It is a good way for them to spend some quality time together. Shannon expression is priceless, she seems to be having a mix of fun with a little bit of fear. Maybe she could use a seatbelt so she wouldn't have to worry about falling off the swing.
I love the outfits. They seem very original and the little girl on Adia's shirt is really a nice little touch. You have a very well drawn background here and the shadows in the picture line up well. Nice job as usual.
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Thanks! Maybe the part of adding seatbelts to the swings is a bit exaggerated, since we assume they hold on tight while riding them
None of their outfits are new, in the sense they've worn them on earlier drawings, except Aida's jacket. But since they wear out their clothes a lot, it wouldn't surprise me if they bought two or three of the same to replace the worn ones
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I really love their clothing desings its very colorful and cute!
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Thanks! Even if they aren't very new except for Aida's jacket, but they still enjoy themselves
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you are welcome! I see I like it!
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Great to see Aida spending more time with friends, +10 or not. Here it looks like she's as excited and a little concerned for her own sake as she pushes Shannon. Then again, as you say, Shannon is bigger than she is (though with the older girl sitting down it's hard to tell) and Aida could easily go flying backwards if she's not careful. Shannon seems to be having such a blast, almost as if this were her first time on a swing ever. Probably they're chatting too and telling jokes or stories, but I'm sure the swinging makes it a lot more fun regardless.
I would have guessed it's morning considering the haze and the fact that Aida has a windbreaker over her very pretty girl tee shirt. However, the sun is apparently high because their shadows are relatively short. A cool hazy or drizzling day (explaining the color "echoes" as Shannon swings), or maybe the freckle-faced girl burns easily and is protecting her arms. (Even on a hazy day it's easy to burn, maybe more so.) Nice skirt to match, of course with the same character no wonder. I love Shannon's sparsely floral one-piece with hood, perhaps some Asian influence but just a touch. Nice work on the little fence for the terrace or deck that they're on, or at least with the trees so low in the background that's what it seems like.
Anyway, it's always great to see more of them, especially when things are going so great. Thanks.
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Yes, and she's not afraid or anything! Not sure why but she'd fear more of Mari Fer even if the latter is lighter, like if she sent her flying by accident or something or just because they don't get along very well. And of course Shannon enjoys it a lot, though I doubt she might be paying attention to Aida if they were talking, or possible at all while swinging...
Except for Aida's jacket, none of their outfits are new at all. Pretty ironic how their clothes appear to contrast with each other, with Aida slightly more bundled up this time than Shannon, even more if she zipped up though I doubt she might want to cover the cute girl she's wearing. Shannon's dress by itself is as thick as Aida's jacket even if the sleeveless might offset how warm it might be. So maybe it isn't as warm, otherwise even Shannon would feel uncomfortable and go for a lighter set, while Aida wouldn't be wearing her new jacket. And as of the latter burning easily, someone would have to explain me why they let her play outside wearing just a little crop top that time she went with Sita and started raining
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I love the slight blurr and the shadows, but also.... love the fence and trees, and even more importantly....The girls look nice and happy. Love their outfits (Love that girl on Aida's skirt and shirt, some character you made up?). Also, I've now got a song stuck in my head...the very appropriate "Swing up High"... youtu.be/VfW7WAsLzO4 it even has the same kind of swings in that!
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Thanks! So that blur to make Shannon move isn't that distracting, you say
It's like the 4th time Aida wears this set, and that doll is just a random print to make it look more girly, even if by itself it was enough...
Sorry but I can't see anything from Youtube now (blocked in the office)
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Thanks! Fortunately these still do and prefer it to be indoors with the damn TV on all the time
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Yeah, like our cultures (United States and Mexico) abuse material affluence if gained. (even if it was from illegal means or just whining like a spoiled brat) Like Surburbia is a neighborhood of electronic cavemen and only cars drive the streets
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Muy adorable y genial como siempre
El fondo esta genial tambien, ahi es esas cosas yo soy muy malo.
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Gracias! Bueno la verdad yo no soy mucho de fondos, a veces hasta los vuelvo a usar de un dibujo a otro con un par de cambios para que no se note mucho
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Las líneas de movimiento se ven raras, como si Aida estuviera manipulando a Shannon como un títere. Creo que el efecto que quieres dar se puede dar con los brazos de Aida más separados de su cuerpo, su pierna derecha más flexionada, ubicándola un poquito más atrás de Shannon y en el caso del movimiento del columpio, recordar que es un movimiento pendular y no recto (las líneas de movimiento las ubicaría en sus pies, y curvadas).
La perspectiva del fondo también tiene que ir un poquito más a nivel de suelo, y pues creo que es todo
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Como que se notó un poco el efecto que le quise dar a Shannon para que pareciera "en movimiento"
Mmmm... y qué tal si en vez de ellas dos estuviera alguien más? Como lo estaba contando en mi descripción
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De cualquier manera ese efecto solo aplica para el movimiento recto, y no el pendular de un columpio.
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She looks like she's having fun with that swing. It's nice to see friends get along like that indeed.
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Thanks! I really enjoyed the scene in general, though maybe it would have been more fun with another pair of girls
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Welcome! Maybe, but this is still pretty nice.
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