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Yitzin β What's wrong, Flora
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Published: 2013-09-10 18:42:53 +0000 UTC; Views: 470; Favourites: 9; Downloads: 0
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So Flora, when did you start to behave as someone who likes to whine and complain? That's not the usual you, you know? (we have enough when Nuria whines about Sita and Mari Fer about everything) Unless well, it's something very serious and not just stupid problems that can be easily solved right away. Is it because Mari Fer is standing on your right? I can call her, but maybe Dora wouldn't like to split out the nice trio all of you are making now.OK, maybe it's not Mari Fer because both of you get along kind of well with her, right? Just asking because I know some of you love to complain with me about how bad she misbehaves and always wants things her way.
Let's just hope as well that Dora's friendly attitude is genuine and not just pure façade, since there are several unfortunate cases where the reverse is true...
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Aww, Chibis! This is very cute, and I love their expressions!Β
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Thanks! Not real chibis (otherwise their bodies would be much smaller) but they have their thing each of them
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Very cute drawing. I like the different expressions. Good job with the net hat (i don't know it's proper name, heh).
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Thanks! Me neither, but I think one like this goes very well with Flora (center). Se has already worn a white one in another drawing
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Your anatomy is needing some more work, hopefully this:
Will help. Its an anatomy book, and no matter what I say, this would explain it 100 times better!
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Well, it's not perfect, as in most anime/cartoon styles. Thanks for the link anyways! I'll take a look later on, when I can download it (can't right now).
And what about the girls themselves? (not considering anatomy or style, just the characters as they are)
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They're characters, they're not overly unique but thats not a bad thing, it means they would work as a character, but they're also not too mary sue. They work
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Yes, I expect them to blend in with normal children, that's why you don't see unnatural hair colors or super powers or overly elaborated outfits. Thanks
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Good work with the poses, looks like they are going (walking) somewhere
Floras outfit looks very cute.
If viewed for some minutes, I can find three versions of what could be going on, and I think the small signs kinda adds to that possibility.^^
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Thanks! Yes, slowly (to pay attention to Flora) but they're walking
So, what do you think might be going on with them?
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Well, one possibility is the "annoyed" thing, and the others might not really get what she is upset about, as hints in the pictures name.
But it could also be that she is deep in her thoughts and the others are trying to talk to her and does not get any proper response.Β
The third I thought of was kinda similar to the others, like a mix. She gets a little upset because they all talk.
I don't know why I thought of them talking about something, just because their mouths are open it doesn't have to mean "talking", but that's what I thought of this time.^^ next time it might not^^
But that is the interesting part, it can be so much. I like when pictures are "open" to the viewer. Makes it worth to look at for a while
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Maybe Mari Fer is bombing out too many questions and thus makes Flora uneasy about what to answer, while Dora is more about listening but not sure if Mari Fer doesn't let her listen either...
Or she's simply too shy or embarrassed to talk it about
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Very clean and colorful you seem to have a grasp on the style that your going for here.
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Thanks! It's not a very conventional method because I use vectors for almost everything (with Photoshop's pen tool), from tracing lineart to defining where the shading goes and that. Moving to another program without that tool, like almost anything available for tablets now, would force me to re-learn everything to achieve close to similar results.
Be sure to get to know the other girls as well! I know it's a lot for a newcomer but take it easy if interested
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Everyone, and especially every kid is going to be feeling down or upset now and then. Even the unflappable Flora. With the support of her big sister and a friend (whom she always seems to get along with) she'll get over it soon enough, whether they help her come up with a solution or she realizes it's not really worth being upset over.
As for Dora, I seriously doubt she'd only pretend to care when her little sister is feeling glum. There's time for pranks when they can both laugh at them. It looks like the bigger girl has already had enough adventure and excitement today anyway with those scratches on her knees and elbows.
Anyway, lovely work on disturbed Flora, both her face and her body language. I can almost hear her talking in a higher-pitched voice and huffing a little as she goes over what has her so bothered. Okay, Mari Fer doesn't understand what's wrong yet but she looks eager to help. 
I have to say that Mari Fer's outfit is stunning with those striking yellow bands (chest, belt, flip flops... plus one hair band) that punch up the other colors and look very good against her skin. The cherry belt buckle makes me smile. (I think I've seen it before, but no time to look it up now.) Flora's top is very pretty with that "windy night" feeling, plus the green that is so her. And that cute cap too. Dora is looking a bit sharp today too, simple with a splash of style. It is surprising that their parents buy the elder sister anything with white in it though since there's a good chance she'll get it all dirty by the end of the day. Then again, a dirty shirt and smiling kid is a sign of a life spent living.
Thanks.
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Well, I wanted to point out whether Dora's friendship is genuine because judging for her looks, one could believe she might not be very sincere with her feelings, especially when behaving very friendly with the younger ones, as here where putting a hand on Flora's shoulder suggests that she cares. In that case we should worry more about Mari Fer, because she already has a history of not being trustworthy and the like, which explains why she often gets, either herself or others, into trouble.
The only thing that worries me is that either of them believes Flora's problem is stupid or whatever, thus not giving her the support she expects. Because while it might be something easily brushed off for you, can be a huge deal for the other one!
Another case where every outfit has been used before but oops, haven't thought about soiling their clothes once in a while! C'mon, I started with some random scratches
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Well, maybe that only you and someone else have commented so far, there's A LOT we can discuss about this one!
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Sure looks like something is on her mind indeed. Something troubling? Or maybe trying to remember if she remembered to do something?
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Next time on cases like this, I'd rather say "she's worried about ..." and not leave anyone without doubts. That openness about you guessing what could be, without a right answer, is supposed to encourage commenting but looks like it's not the case
Sorry for venting this out but it really upsets not me, them, how much people hesitate to drop a nice line here. Same happened last week with the other trio...
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