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Yolly-anda — You caught an adder Ravenpaw
Published: 2010-02-24 20:24:28 +0000 UTC; Views: 29576; Favourites: 1357; Downloads: 897
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This is my entry for the Ravenpaw contest From the club xWarrior-CatsxI was thinking of making Ravenpaw hiding from the threat that Tigerclaw makes him endure but I felt like it was just too common. So I decided to make a scene from the first book where Ravenpaw catches an adder.
I don't know why but I really likes that scene where Greypaw's amazed by Ravenpaw's catch and by his agility. "I was too quick for them!" thats what Ravenpaw said
I took the background from a scene from Bambi movie. I'm so lazy that I didn't even made shadings on the 2 cats and didn't felt like making my own background. Well I just stink at making background especially forest one. Sorry T-T
But when I was checking out Bambi's scenes I realized that in most of them Bambi didn't had shading on, so I thought it would look more animated this way.
Anyway I hope you enjoy
I just love Greypaw on this one and Ravenpaw as well.
Greypaw & Ravenpaw © Erin hunter
Background © Disney
Artwork © Yolly
Made in photoshop CS3 5 hours
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Comments: 275
Can I use this in a little movie I am making. I will credit you and have a link here if I put it anywhere.
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That's SO cute! I like the early books, because that's when life is most easy and the books are playful and fun!
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In my opinion you draw better than anyone i know!
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T-thank you, but there are many more good artists out there <3
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Your right, it does look animated. aww, you made them look like cute little kittens!!! I just want to hug them both!!![link]
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Agh, sorry, don't know how to do faces. lemme try again... and if it doesn't work... oh well. -_- [link] WORKWORKWORKWORKWORK!!!!
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grr... watevs. x3
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They're so cute, and fluffy, and they make me want to go 
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This forced me to fav it! It's just SOOOOOOOOO cute!!!!
I always loved the mentions of the adder.
"What if Barley dosen't want me to live with him."
"Tell him you caught an adder once."
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Awwww so cute! i like how they're small and their exspressions are great! X3
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I would write critique but i dont have a membership. So here are my thoughts:
Good: It looks very bambi like, the non-shading really makes it perfect. It looks really good how Greypaw is giving ravenpaw a push. the scratches on the adder really sums it up. the background is great.
Bad: I think their pupils should be a little bit more rounded not slits. the adder should not be be behind ravenpaw instead it should be sitting in front of him. Ravenpaw's tail should be resting on the ground since he is shy-ish. the background should be minimized, because the leaves look about the size of ravenpaw and greypw. ravenpaw and greypaw should be a little bit bigger 'cos they look somewhat like kits. ravenpaw's feet should not be facing each other but if you want to keep them like that then bend his legs a little more.
does this sound fair? if not please don't be mad at me if not.
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yes it sounds fair ^^ thank you!
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i love this! they kinda look more like kits than apprentices but still REALLY cute
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its cute and sorta reminds me of bambi because greypaw looks like a fox
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they look like kits but its ssssssoooooooo cccccccccuuuuuuuuuutttttttttttttteeeeeeeee
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I remember this scene. I recently got Into The Wild. 
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GOOD FOR RAVENPAW! Did you bump mat the drawing top make it more blended with the background
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Aww they're soo cute <33
I love Ravenpaw and Greypaw!
They're absolutely adorable!
Great work !
Fav.
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ps i wrote the first chapter of the rise of flame it is a fanfic i made a bit like warriors plz read it and comment . i would be honored if you would plz do a picture about is there is not much to draw yet so u should mabey wait untill i write more chapters( u dont have to do it). The rest of chapters will hopefully be longer i was just exited so i posted it early
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Awwwwww you drew them so well brownie points for using Bambi's background
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haha XD thank you <3
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Aww! They look like cute little kits 
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Omg Ravenpaw is so adorable i love him! and i love this picture! *adds to favs*
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