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Yooyfull β Prank Chronicles part 2
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Published: 2012-12-11 22:21:49 +0000 UTC; Views: 26543; Favourites: 102; Downloads: 87
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Heh.. it's been a while has it not? ..sorry :<Twilight got shoved into a puddle by Dash last time - and shes cooking for revenge.. PINKIE PIE STYLE
..sorta
..I guess?
Gimme a break -.-
*ONE more in the series is planned out, after that - we will see :3*
Here is the first part: [link]
I used a completely different style for Dash this time, any critique on it would be swell ^^
Also - I know that there are a lot of errors here and there that I just couldn't be bothered with, but I am going to try out this critique request thing because I want to use my premium that so kindly gave me <3
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i think this was great, and i know this was a lot of hard work. i liked the part where it rain chocolate or mud ( or whatever it was) on the blue pony. i think it needs some sounds and it should be a little longer. overall, this was absolutely wonderful, quite amazing! i think you should keep up doing these type of work and i am sure you will get many positive comments and likes on this work and your other works in the future. i think next time you should come up with something instead of pranks. Go ponies!
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Thanks for taking your time with this, there is just something special about getting a critique :3
The raining is chocolate milk, thats what Discord from the show "enchants" the clouds to rain. (cloud is made of cotton candy btw ^-^)
Thanks for the encouraging words, they mean a lot to me
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Well over all I say it's really good (better than I could do and I have no idea how to do this) but a few things i noticed was that their noses should of been out a little more, their eyes should of been a bit rounder/ bigger, the rope around the cloud should of been a little tighter, their mouths seemed a bit too small and there was no puddle under rainbow dash after she had all the chocolate rain.. or chocolate milk rain... but over all I really liked it. keep up all the amazing and good work e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s⦠" width="15" height="15" alt="
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Thanks for taking your time to write a critique!
You bring up many valid points that I will consider for the next one. I didn't see that the eyes were lacking in size until you mentioned it and the choco puddle was just.. forgotten ^^
I do think that you were a bit over generous with the rating though since I know how much of a mess this really is at some points and i wouldn't rate it as high
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Β : *slurp slurp* i taste pretty good
Β : bu-but.......
Β : IM A KITTY! THANKS TWI!
Β : i thought you were annoyed.
Β : I was. Turns out the chocolate rain had poison joke in it and it made me a cat.
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Hey hey hey, wait. Discord helped with this, didn't he? If he not, then where they found that cotton candy cloud?
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Discord is always around when there is mischief going on
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lol lol soooooooooo super lolz funny
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Look on the bright side, Dashy. At least you'll have a nice, quick tongue bath.
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I could imagine DHX doing something like this for an episode.
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The pink stays dry but Dashie feels the pain!
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I don't know much about animation, but this is totally awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Poor Dash!!!! Did Twi think up that prank??
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Thanks :3
Dash had it coming though (she pranked Twi first, link is in the description
Also
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You're welcome :3
: Oh, Dash XD
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How the fuck is that a prank? I mean... ah.... how...
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Pouring chocolate on someone is a pretty solid prank in my book.
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It has a lot of flaws, so i'd stay away from the word "amazing" but thank you
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Oh, your welcome anyway. ^^
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Now Im confused, the others told me you like it when people shit.... and thats what gives you the creativity to make beautiful art like this.
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Uh.. I'm a tad bit more confused than you are, thats for sure
I'm just going to focus on the part where you call my art beautiful, thank you!
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Just keep away from my family you god-damn fat fetish jewish tomato!
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I've had it, stay away from every talking to me again or i'll report you. Good day sir.
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Im os soryr!!1 Honetsyl! I wshi you cna forigve me! Yuo are an Epci OC pony! I wuv you!
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