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YouInventedMe β€” floating in the dark
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Published: 2019-09-19 10:00:04 +0000 UTC; Views: 453; Favourites: 43; Downloads: 0
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Description I see you and forget that I am shy

forget that I'm a
wounded
anxious thing

I do not let the word
love
pass my lips

but you can still
feel (it in) my smile
when your head
is turned away
(when my eyes
and ears
are drinking you in)

never has breath
come this easy

never have I felt so
comfortable
in my
own
skin

I do not let love
pass my lips

but hope
that it shows
in every
other thing
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Comments: 23

satellitenotes [2019-09-30 03:59:15 +0000 UTC]

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YouInventedMe In reply to satellitenotes [2019-09-30 15:22:07 +0000 UTC]

Wonderful of you to say. Thank you.

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KimberlyJolanda [2019-09-27 19:16:03 +0000 UTC]

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YouInventedMe In reply to KimberlyJolanda [2019-09-27 21:04:49 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much. <3

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KimberlyJolanda In reply to YouInventedMe [2019-09-28 13:13:30 +0000 UTC]

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Eefera [2019-09-25 01:26:23 +0000 UTC]

Letting someone love you and loving the, in return is the most terrifying and wonderful part of humanity. We love despite our flaws. ❀️ Beautiful piece.

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YouInventedMe In reply to Eefera [2019-09-25 03:39:33 +0000 UTC]

Thank you for the compliment, and I couldn't agree more about the rest.

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rhunel [2019-09-25 00:45:22 +0000 UTC]

So beautiful!

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YouInventedMe In reply to rhunel [2019-09-25 02:39:13 +0000 UTC]

Thanks so much.

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NotWithoutHonor [2019-09-20 04:07:25 +0000 UTC]

Fantastic

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YouInventedMe In reply to NotWithoutHonor [2019-09-20 05:47:52 +0000 UTC]

Thanks a lot!

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mrcrozier [2019-09-20 03:35:43 +0000 UTC]

Yes

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YouInventedMe In reply to mrcrozier [2019-09-20 05:47:56 +0000 UTC]

<3!

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LiterarySerenity [2019-09-19 18:38:05 +0000 UTC]

Aw, it's definitely true that we express love in more ways than saying it aloud. Beautiful work, as always.Β 

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YouInventedMe In reply to LiterarySerenity [2019-09-20 05:48:22 +0000 UTC]

Thank you. I mostly certainly try to.

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the-chemical-factory [2019-09-19 18:14:39 +0000 UTC]

this is really beautiful

"I do not let love
pass my lips

but hope
that it showsΒ 
in everyΒ 
other thing"Β 

i really love the close
i can also relate to it heavily hahaΒ 

Β 

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YouInventedMe In reply to the-chemical-factory [2019-09-20 05:48:36 +0000 UTC]

It always means a lot when you enjoy my scribbles. Thank you. <3

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alapip [2019-09-19 18:11:11 +0000 UTC]

Especially fine work, Shane. Β 

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YouInventedMe In reply to alapip [2019-09-20 05:48:44 +0000 UTC]

Thank you, pip.

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sunnyday72 [2019-09-19 15:06:19 +0000 UTC]

this 'i love you' business must be cursed. uttering it in all seriousness is like entering the eyewall of a cyclone. if that makes sense. Romeo and Juliet would never have such a miserable end had they been less verbose. if that makes sense. (edited: autocorrection changes words must turn it off!)

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YouInventedMe In reply to sunnyday72 [2019-09-20 16:35:00 +0000 UTC]

<3

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DecodeThis [2019-09-19 12:37:24 +0000 UTC]

I've made the mistake of allowing the word to pass my lips. I knew better, but I did it anyway. Now I'm back in the same boat as before. Sinking.

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YouInventedMe In reply to DecodeThis [2019-09-20 16:34:44 +0000 UTC]

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