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Published: 2008-06-09 17:26:50 +0000 UTC; Views: 1867; Favourites: 57; Downloads: 4
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Description how to apologize
to the air
that I breathe
for the fear of loss
that costs
everything
when this grip
that grasps
forever
is so suffocating
when your ears
have grown tired
of these
sad songs I sing

see, panic
and I have spent
so much time
alone
that fright forms
my features
etched its shape
in my bones
and while
I long to make
my heart your home
all flaws
in design are
completely my own

I'm awkward
I'm anxious
but I'm also
all yours
for the rest
of the years
my dust circles
this earth
and though I know
to you it must
seem quite absurd
I hope to rebuild
on the strength
of these words

said
I love you
(I'll always
love you)
yes
I love you
(I'll always
love you)
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Comments: 113

LemonLovesWMB In reply to ??? [2008-06-10 06:26:41 +0000 UTC]

this is beautiful!

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YouInventedMe In reply to LemonLovesWMB [2008-06-10 07:16:53 +0000 UTC]

thanks very much

xo!

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LemonLovesWMB In reply to YouInventedMe [2008-06-10 18:07:55 +0000 UTC]

NP

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cries-of-the-past [2008-06-10 05:11:44 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful.

and I mean that.

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YouInventedMe In reply to cries-of-the-past [2008-06-10 05:21:42 +0000 UTC]

thanks a lot, nicole

xo!

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IDontPostArt In reply to ??? [2008-06-10 04:53:29 +0000 UTC]

I really like the flow of this one. Good job.

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YouInventedMe In reply to IDontPostArt [2008-06-10 04:54:39 +0000 UTC]

thanks a lot

xo!

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LNIN9 [2008-06-10 04:20:50 +0000 UTC]

my dust circles
this earth

that line i luv....

but your comment is a BAM!!!

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YouInventedMe In reply to LNIN9 [2008-06-10 04:36:55 +0000 UTC]

haha
thanks
it's a song by kind of like spitting
the singer is an acquaintance of mine
and the band was great

xo!

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LNIN9 In reply to YouInventedMe [2008-06-11 02:23:39 +0000 UTC]

is their album avail...?
like it alot...

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YouInventedMe In reply to LNIN9 [2008-06-11 05:33:17 +0000 UTC]


he's got many, many available
all independent labels
(though he is no longer recording under the KOLS moniker)
I'd recommend starting with the album
Nothing Makes Sense Without It
(it's my absolute favorite)
and then, maybe, trying
Bridges Worth Burning

you can explore his other stuff from there
glad you like it

xo!

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LNIN9 In reply to YouInventedMe [2008-06-11 06:13:34 +0000 UTC]

hey thanks....much appreciated...

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YouInventedMe In reply to LNIN9 [2008-06-11 06:25:25 +0000 UTC]

my pleasure

xo!

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Teh-Direktor [2008-06-10 03:50:11 +0000 UTC]

I love it it flows along and has great rhyme and rhythm

Direktor

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YouInventedMe In reply to Teh-Direktor [2008-06-10 03:53:28 +0000 UTC]

thank ya much

xo!

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Teh-Direktor In reply to YouInventedMe [2008-06-10 03:56:39 +0000 UTC]

Your welcome

Direktor

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KiwiBri In reply to ??? [2008-06-10 03:30:37 +0000 UTC]

You're amazing, sir.
You left a bit of awe whirling in my stomach.
and no, it isn't because I'm hungry.

This is really gorgeous. It's so....there's no more words for it. I sound like a broken record when complimenting you
Run and become a lyricist or something. Now.

<3333

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YouInventedMe In reply to KiwiBri [2008-06-10 03:32:15 +0000 UTC]

always so kind
thank you

xo!

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cad-Photography In reply to ??? [2008-06-10 00:12:20 +0000 UTC]

I love it (of course, haha.) I also love what you wrote for artists comments

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YouInventedMe In reply to cad-Photography [2008-06-10 00:17:44 +0000 UTC]

the part in quotes is from a song by Kind of Like Spitting
the bold is a resolution

xo!

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cad-Photography In reply to YouInventedMe [2008-06-10 00:49:50 +0000 UTC]

ahh okay, cool... good to know

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007-FleetingPassions [2008-06-09 23:58:46 +0000 UTC]

Marvelous! The short lines give a deliciously fragmented feel.

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YouInventedMe In reply to 007-FleetingPassions [2008-06-10 00:05:46 +0000 UTC]

thanks a lot

xo!

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ShinVonNibelung [2008-06-09 23:44:47 +0000 UTC]

Unfortunately I cannot favour it from my mobile phone, but I will as soon as I sit myself in the front of a PC tomorrow.

It's just ... WOW!

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YouInventedMe In reply to ShinVonNibelung [2008-06-09 23:46:17 +0000 UTC]

thank you, miss

xo!

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colacandy [2008-06-09 23:42:29 +0000 UTC]

beautiful beyond words really x

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YouInventedMe In reply to colacandy [2008-06-09 23:46:08 +0000 UTC]

thanks very much

xo!

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CatRoxUrSox In reply to ??? [2008-06-09 22:49:01 +0000 UTC]

wooow,
this is amazing!

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YouInventedMe In reply to CatRoxUrSox [2008-06-09 22:50:49 +0000 UTC]

thanks very much

xo!

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CatRoxUrSox In reply to YouInventedMe [2008-06-09 22:54:35 +0000 UTC]

your very welcome!

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myfallfromgrace [2008-06-09 22:23:48 +0000 UTC]

:\ don't change.

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YouInventedMe In reply to myfallfromgrace [2008-06-09 22:27:30 +0000 UTC]

of course, I'll change.
being a worried wreck all the time
is no good for me and worrying
someone is going to leave for no reason
is almost an insult to them.
it's a lose/lose situation.
I end up pushing away the one I want to hold closest.


xo!

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myfallfromgrace In reply to YouInventedMe [2008-06-09 23:05:58 +0000 UTC]

if she loves you she shouldn't expect you to change. if you respect her, you know she doesn't do anything for no reason.
xo

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YouInventedMe In reply to myfallfromgrace [2008-06-09 23:09:22 +0000 UTC]

none of that touches my
reasons for wanting to change
and besides
if you engage in an unhealthy behavior
and someone loves you
they SHOULD want you to change
I'm not sure exactly where the respect/motive thing
enters into it

clarify?

xo!

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myfallfromgrace In reply to YouInventedMe [2008-06-09 23:39:24 +0000 UTC]

sigh. via note.

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LeonieSainteVire In reply to ??? [2008-06-09 21:41:30 +0000 UTC]

Wonderful. We have all felt this at one time or another.

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YouInventedMe In reply to LeonieSainteVire [2008-06-09 21:42:40 +0000 UTC]

thank you

xo!

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LeonieSainteVire In reply to YouInventedMe [2008-06-09 21:49:34 +0000 UTC]

My pleasure, m'dear!

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greymists [2008-06-09 21:06:42 +0000 UTC]

Every time I tell you your writing is amazing, and this one isn't an exception. The whole thing just flows perfectly. Awesome job!

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YouInventedMe In reply to greymists [2008-06-09 21:08:46 +0000 UTC]

thanks very much

xo!

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Out-Of-Spite In reply to ??? [2008-06-09 21:00:51 +0000 UTC]

see, panic
and I have spent
so much time
alone
that fright forms
my features
etched its shape
in my bones
and while
I long to make
my heart your home
all flaws
in design are
completely my own

I love that part!! This whole poem is great, the flow, the words used and the rythmn and rhyme.

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YouInventedMe In reply to Out-Of-Spite [2008-06-09 21:01:24 +0000 UTC]

thanks

xo!

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kurenaiXseito In reply to ??? [2008-06-09 20:29:17 +0000 UTC]

It hurts... Because it strikes the same way as hearing "I hate how you depend on me..." or the way your thoughts linger on "what if it all comes crashing down..."

But it hurts so good.

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YouInventedMe In reply to kurenaiXseito [2008-06-09 20:45:47 +0000 UTC]

oh, you definitely know where I'm coming from
I plan on lifting roots
and never going there again
if I can

thank you

xo!

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kurenaiXseito In reply to YouInventedMe [2008-06-12 15:42:28 +0000 UTC]

I thought the roots grew too deep...
But slowly, slowly, life seeps back in.

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Toume In reply to ??? [2008-06-09 20:13:01 +0000 UTC]

beautiful.
very
very
beautiful.

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YouInventedMe In reply to Toume [2008-06-09 20:45:56 +0000 UTC]

thanks very much

xo!

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cypriphobia In reply to ??? [2008-06-09 19:25:18 +0000 UTC]

This is most excellent. Also, the title is so good.

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YouInventedMe In reply to cypriphobia [2008-06-09 19:28:18 +0000 UTC]

thank you
and thank you

xo!

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pardonM3 [2008-06-09 18:02:58 +0000 UTC]

that fright forms
my features
etched its shape
in my bones
and while
I long to make
my heart your home
all flaws
in design are
completely my own

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