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Published: 2008-06-09 17:26:50 +0000 UTC; Views: 1867; Favourites: 57; Downloads: 4
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how to apologizeto the air
that I breathe
for the fear of loss
that costs
everything
when this grip
that grasps
forever
is so suffocating
when your ears
have grown tired
of these
sad songs I sing
see, panic
and I have spent
so much time
alone
that fright forms
my features
etched its shape
in my bones
and while
I long to make
my heart your home
all flaws
in design are
completely my own
I'm awkward
I'm anxious
but I'm also
all yours
for the rest
of the years
my dust circles
this earth
and though I know
to you it must
seem quite absurd
I hope to rebuild
on the strength
of these words
said
I love you
(I'll always
love you)
yes
I love you
(I'll always
love you)
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Comments: 113
thanks a lot, nicole
xo!
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I really like the flow of this one. Good job.
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my dust circles
this earth
that line i luv....
but your comment is a BAM!!!
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haha
thanks
it's a song by kind of like spitting
the singer is an acquaintance of mine
and the band was great
xo!
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is their album avail...?
like it alot...
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he's got many, many available
all independent labels
(though he is no longer recording under the KOLS moniker)
I'd recommend starting with the album
Nothing Makes Sense Without It
(it's my absolute favorite)
and then, maybe, trying
Bridges Worth Burning
you can explore his other stuff from there
glad you like it
xo!
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hey thanks....much appreciated...
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I love it it flows along and has great rhyme and rhythm
Direktor
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You're amazing, sir.
You left a bit of awe whirling in my stomach.
and no, it isn't because I'm hungry.
This is really gorgeous. It's so....there's no more words for it. I sound like a broken record when complimenting you
Run and become a lyricist or something. Now.
<3333
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always so kind
thank you
xo!
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I love it (of course, haha.) I also love what you wrote for artists comments
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the part in quotes is from a song by Kind of Like Spitting
the bold is a resolution
xo!
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ahh okay, cool... good to know
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Marvelous! The short lines give a deliciously fragmented feel.
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thanks a lot
xo!
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Unfortunately I cannot favour it from my mobile phone, but I will as soon as I sit myself in the front of a PC tomorrow.
It's just ... WOW!
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thank you, miss
xo!
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of course, I'll change.
being a worried wreck all the time
is no good for me and worrying
someone is going to leave for no reason
is almost an insult to them.
it's a lose/lose situation.
I end up pushing away the one I want to hold closest.
xo!
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if she loves you she shouldn't expect you to change. if you respect her, you know she doesn't do anything for no reason.
xo
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none of that touches my
reasons for wanting to change
and besides
if you engage in an unhealthy behavior
and someone loves you
they SHOULD want you to change
I'm not sure exactly where the respect/motive thing
enters into it
clarify?
xo!
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Wonderful. We have all felt this at one time or another.
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My pleasure, m'dear!
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Every time I tell you your writing is amazing, and this one isn't an exception. The whole thing just flows perfectly. Awesome job!
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see, panic
and I have spent
so much time
alone
that fright forms
my features
etched its shape
in my bones
and while
I long to make
my heart your home
all flaws
in design are
completely my own
I love that part!! This whole poem is great, the flow, the words used and the rythmn and rhyme.
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It hurts... Because it strikes the same way as hearing "I hate how you depend on me..." or the way your thoughts linger on "what if it all comes crashing down..."
But it hurts so good.
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oh, you definitely know where I'm coming from
I plan on lifting roots
and never going there again
if I can
thank you
xo!
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I thought the roots grew too deep...
But slowly, slowly, life seeps back in.
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This is most excellent. Also, the title is so good.
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thank you
and thank you
xo!
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that fright forms
my features
etched its shape
in my bones
and while
I long to make
my heart your home
all flaws
in design are
completely my own
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