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Published: 2013-11-09 15:08:51 +0000 UTC; Views: 1467; Favourites: 19; Downloads: 6
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Acrylic markers (poska & molotov) on canvas (80x30 cm)
Wip here : youldesign.deviantart.com/art/…
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Comments: 10
Artistbanks [2013-11-10 07:29:26 +0000 UTC]
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Overall I was very impressed with this piece. The merging of faces to create the letters was very interesting in its approach. I also appreciate the use of a monochromatic color scheme, that appeals to me, as well as it shows the mastery of line and contrast so everything is still legible. The only thing that I would encourage is possibly some more variation in the facial expressions on the frontal faces. I get the twin idea with the letter u, however you did vary most of the others but in the right stem of the y is too similar to the twins, and I think it may be a little too repetitive. But all in all you should be commended.
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YoulDesign In reply to Artistbanks [2013-11-10 15:25:59 +0000 UTC]
Thanks a lot !
Yes you're right expressions aren't enough différent.
Was more on this old one :
youldesign.deviantart.com/art/…
But i wanted to add a head in the u, i'll remember that in the next one
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Artistbanks In reply to YoulDesign [2013-11-10 15:37:20 +0000 UTC]
Loved the expressions in this previous version. Especially the one in the O, it made me giggle. The Y had a great feel to it too. I think you were right to add the twin in the new version, that was a great idea, and I think it's something you can play up in the future.
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YoulDesign In reply to Artistbanks [2013-11-10 16:02:16 +0000 UTC]
Yes next one 'll be better
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Artistbanks In reply to YoulDesign [2013-11-10 16:16:40 +0000 UTC]
Keep me posted! I look forward to seeing it.
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