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Yunarii — Running Wolf Lineart 10 points P2U

Published: 2013-08-11 20:50:02 +0000 UTC; Views: 983; Favourites: 11; Downloads: 0
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Description 10 to use! Credit in the description is a MUST!!
If you have used this please put the link in the description because id love to see what you created with this ^w^

The package includes:
A PSD File
and a Transparent file

Do not steal
Art©Blazenight817
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Comments: 3

fasabutt [2013-08-17 22:26:09 +0000 UTC]

Overall

Vision

Originality

Technique

Impact


To begin, I really like your style, and I also love how you shaded this. This is one of your better works, partially because this type of shading
with this style gives it more depth and dimension. You shaded the dark places nicely, but in some places you should've
either left them blank or lightened it. Try to imagine a sun or moon as a light source, that should help with shading. I'm having trouble with shading, personally.
I'm studying wolves a little but I focus more on cat anatomy, so I'm not
an expert, but for the most part, anatomy is good.
However, the chin is a bit too big, as well as the head. The fur on the tail is a little clumpy, and on the butt, too. (lolbutt.)
Fur doesn't go in one direction, but on the butt it usually lies flat, instead of going in two directions.

All in all, I think you're on the right track. Just a ittle more practice with the face, proportions, fur and shading.
I love this. He's so adorable. ;u; e.deviantart.net/emoticons/h/h… " width="15" height="13" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="357" title="Heart"/>
Looking forward to starting the art trade with you! ~

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Yunarii In reply to fasabutt [2013-08-17 22:30:01 +0000 UTC]

thank you so much for the critique! I really respect you for your honest perspective c:

Ill definitely work on what you pointed out, thanks again!

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fasabutt In reply to Yunarii [2013-08-17 22:32:18 +0000 UTC]

awh, thanks! and no prob

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