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Chapter 1 : Battle of Dī Shi Shī Part 1

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Chapter One

In the year of XXX, the kingdom of Hianov. The Emperor Zao announced that he'd passed on to the other side on the first day of Autumn. Living no heir to the throne to keep the kingdom peacefully but a power-hungry fool named Lord Dong. He was cruel and ruthless, treated his own people and army like trash. Killing and raping young women out of pure amusement. He has only one child, who named Zhouxdong.

The male was feminine looking male with light brown hair and tan skin that was smooth. His father force him to married young woman to keep the family blood running. Of course Zhouxdong didn't have no choice but to complied to his father wishes. But there was a problem, Zhouxdong wasn't sexually interested in anyone. He'd to force to get himself 'up' and conceive a child with his newly bride. After two month of being the next ruler over the land of Hianov, the other Lords and Dukes, rise up against their new so-called 'Emperor' and gladly over thrown him. And free the land from his

(Allies)

Year of XXXX, in the day of winter. The sky was gloomy and the air where is dry and damped. There were snow on the ground. Only a light blank of white frosty snow on the ground.

The Tora Weii and Han, Wuu Clan are in war with the newly Emperor. Over with 30,000 men at their disposal. Ready for anything that comes their way. Marching to the capital of the town of where the castle, Dī Shi Shī. The path was slightly narrow but the men kept marching until they reach camp by nightfall. Reaching close the hills that were known as "Shi Peak" A surprise attack would be dispatched by of the time when the sun rises from the peak in the south. As the men set up camp, Shiryu Wei of The Tora Weii Clan. He was the leader of the clan and the leader of the campaign. Heading to his set up tent; Shiryu as he came out of his tent wearing a Royal blue and Royal purple ancient like Chinese like soldier uniform. Just without the heavy armors. He was holding a sword that had three blade on it two on the each side was bend in as the sword in the middle was straight. His hair was long it was navy blue-black hair that reach to his back. Gracefully that looked so smooth. He had this odd eyes colored with Iris was light green and his pupil was blue.

His skin was creamy peach tone to it. His smile was the soft despite it being so small. He'd a scar over his face from his right side. That didn't stop him being so beautiful. He was truly beautiful. He made the sun and stars,even the moon to put in shame and hide from the behind into the clouds.

Flicker his hair out of his face, that soft but yet small smile turn into a smirk. Looking out at the men that was working on setting up the camp. And the surprise attack. Everything should go quarterly to plan, if no one screw up.

Shiryu heads toward to another camp, where two guards bows and the tent flap for the commander. Shiryu enter the tent and seen others commanders and generals there. Planning along. Sighed calmly as he went over as the other generals and commanders were sitting down at a table that was round. Made of out of the finest woods, pulling out a chair as one of the commander has notice him sitting down at the table.

"It's great to see that your finally here Lord Shiryu." said one of the commanders.

Shiryu looked up with his odd colored eyes, smirked a little. Ran his finger through his velvet navy blue locks. Cooley. His eyes shown amused by the commander 'concern'.

"Oh yes? I was merely freshen up and I thought it wouldn't take long. As I can that you men had already started without me. I hope I didn't miss anything important." he responded back. Shiryu watches carefully at the male reaction. The commander actions spoke louder than his mouth, his body language shown he was nervous as his fingers were fidgeting a little. But than he suddenly straighten up a little and stop the fidgeting now.

"Of course not, milord. We were only talking about the other rebellion that Lord Sun Wu of Wuu Clan is handling. Near the sea of Sungol." he answered.

Shiryu smiled as he crossed his legs, than his arms. Lean back against the chair with still that amuse look on his face. Nods his head.

"He can handle it himself. He make look like a fool but he can handle it when he got the best strategist, Sun Chenyni by his side. Now lets handle this matter first men. Their four trails, I'll take center trail where it easier for him to hide in the overgrown wild."

One general stood up, his armor clank together as he stood up so fast the chair fell over. With a loud thud.

"Who the hell made you in charge! Only Lord Mingie is in charge!" he growled.

Shiryu raise an eyebrow at the other male, he laughed at the male general outburst. The general red to the face with angry and embarrassment. How dare he laugh at him!? His hand was reaching for his weapon was tied to his side. Shiryu smirked at him.

"Fine? If you want the middle path, go right ahead. Does anyone wants to pick a path for themselves? I'm curious now? Are we children around here now. "

The general criticize him, his name was Gon Che. He was a middle-aged general that been in war for a long time. Even during The Trio Era. And that was the most brutal era ever but he was glad that was over, but now new war and more blood would be shed. Narrowing his eyes at the pretty boy, he could feel his blood boiling as he want to wipe that smug look off the male face.

He tries to attack Shiryu with his board sword. But Shiryu gracefully moved out-of-the-way. As he jumped over his chair, Gripped it and smashed it across Gon Che chest. Causing the male gasped for air as he taken by surprised. Stumbling back and fall over his own chair. Sword landed on the side. Luckily nobody wasn't hurt at all.

Shiryu's chair was now broken. It was fine because he can careless, tossed it to the side. Shrugged innocently. Mingie sighed. He was in his early twenties, this man puts anyone in mind or thoughts of an industrious ant. On how small he was as his height were 4'3. He has the most deep-set eyes the color of burnished iron. His thick, straight, sapphire hair is worn in a style that reminds you of a tangled bush. Which he forgot to brush sometime he intend to forget to brush or wash himself. And has a lithe build. His skin is ruddy. He has a low forehead and small hands. His wardrobe is plain but with elebroate patterns on his robes. A nice wedding band that was all blue.

"That enough General Gon Che! I want to hear Lord Shiryu plan but since you interrupted. You'll be taken the middle path with you and your men. No question asks, you ARE dismissed!" He commanded.

General Gon Che glared at his lord but he wouldn't dare go against him, As he got on one knee and a fist into his hand. As he bows his head.

"Of course milord."

He quickly get up and walked out the tent, more likely limped out. He would see the doctor first if he broken anything. Shiryu had his hand on his hips as he watched the general leave the tent.

"Please forgive him Lord Shiryu, he always been known to be brash." he commented.

Shiryu chuckled and smiled a little. "It's quite alright, he got my blood going. But I would suggest to get the plan going. I think we should cut off their exits route including ours if I suggested. Or make it seem like our exits route cut off too."

Mingie was curious and including the others were too. This would be interested to hear about. Shiryu begins to explained himself.

(Dong)

"WHERE IS MY GOOD FOR NOTHING SON!" yelled out a voice from a golden throne. The male was overweight and sloppy fat, that his face had crumbs and sticky food coating it. Blistered on his lips. Nose hooked. His silky, straight, jade-colored hair is worn in a style that reminds you of a porcupine's quills. He is very short. His skin is dark. He has a weak chin and his neck fats rolls that was size of a banana. His fat stubbly fingers digging through in a large bowl of candy. It was chocolate that was shape like an oval.

The male enter the throne room as his hair was into two big puffy pigtail. One puffy fringes on the side of his head; two long braids in the back. His hair was a shade of light brown that remind anyone of the season of autumn colored. His darting bright tangerine eyes darken with alarmed emotions. As his father kingdom was about to be attack, barely getting no sleep with bags underneath his eyes. His oval-shaped head straighten up, doing his best to show pride and confident in the way he walked and talk. His skin were with a texture of being soft and smooth like silk. With no scars or bruises, nothing on his flawless skin. He did his best to stay out of the sun and not get hurt at all. His lips were thin and a lighter shade of rose. Many people had taken him to be a female but he proven them wrong each time. He wasn't weak. Sort of? Zhouxdong barely put up a fight unless he want too.

His thick slightly muscular legs felt heavy as he was close now. Pushes himself forward. As he was close now, breathing through his nose, that were that curves outwards in the center area and protrudes too far from the face.

His clothing was loose as his robe were cut off where he doesn't have a long flare sleeve on the right side. As his right arm were coated with jewelry, each fingers and his wrist. As his left arm had the flare sleeve, and a couple of rings on those slender fingers. A sash was holding up the large shirt. The pants were a bit baggy and his boots like shoes that stopped at his thigh, at the tip shone like a tip. With a bright yellow designs on top, pushing the door to the throne. His breathing hitch a little.

'I can not show fear.'

Zhouxdong came in as everyone became quiet including his father. He got on one knee and bow to his father to show respect. His eyes were lower to the ground.

"Rise up boy!"

Watching his with a studied expression. As Zhouxdong rose up and stood his ground, the air around him was serious. Arms crossed.

"The rebellion at Sea-gal been annihilated!"

Lord Dong had ecstatic grin on his face, this good news. However Zhouxdong looked away, it was more to the news than anything. He spoke up louder, the tyranny frown than sneer as he heard his explanation that their army was destroyed. Lord Dong was furious as he toss his golden bowl at his only son. Glaring as he put the blame on his son, it was easy. No one go against the king.

Zhouxdong hissed in pain when the bowl hit his head. Still on his knees, feeling a bit dizzy now from the hit. Not daring to lift his head and on his one knee bowing to his father. He could feel the blood slowly down and dripping down his forehead. Listening to his father putting the blame on him for no reason. Belittling him. Each time something went wrong his father either give him lashes or belittling him. Chewing on his bottom lips as he was grateful for no lashes this time. As he chewing on his bottom lip a bit hard, cutting himself by accident. Blood trickle down his chin from his thin lips.

"GET OUT OF MY FACE WORTHLESS PIECE OF CRAP!"

Zhouxdong did not raise his head, bows once more. Turning to leave being careful as he leave the throne room. Going to his room as quickly as his body can move. Bearing the pain and the blood trailing down a bit faster, he needed be quick. Finally reaching to his room slamming the room door, alone with his thoughts; sliding down against the room door. The world felt so cold.

His father hates him with passion, because on how he look? Zhouxdong can't help it if he look exactly like...

Shaking his head a bit hard, flinched. His heart string each time when he think about that person. How much longer do he has to suffer with his life. Forgetting about the wound at the back of his head, he lean his head against the decorative door. Jerked away when he felt the pain, placing a hand at the wound where it throbs.

'Right?'

He forgot about the wound, he needs be stitch up and he needed to be covered up. Clean and stitch up, bandages. Zhouxdong yanked open his door called out to the servants in the palace. To come here at once with first aid kite.

(Allies/Tora Weii)

Back at the base, Shiryu were laying in his fur made bed inside his tent. Keeping himself warm. Planning an attack was hard work. But the hardest part was pretending. Scolding himself as he turn himself over on his back to sit up. Flicker a dead ant off his shirt. Those people were unforgettable! Running his fingers through his silk long hair, his left hand reach over to the right to get his comb. Stopping midway when he felt the cold air enter his tent, a smirk appeared across his beautiful face.

"Did you bring the news I need Jin Xinyu?"

A voice spoke but only a whisper that no one can overhear them. Shiryu's ears perks up when the voice begins to speak to him.

"The Middle path is dangerous and were covered in booby traps. An invisible string in the middle section of the path. Hard to spot. But only easy to spot by the direction of the sun, Lord Shiryu."

Shiryu couldn't help himself to smirk from hearing the news. Finally reaching over to grabbed the comb and begun to comb through his hair. But the main question is should he tell Lord Mingie or wait it out? How to even answer that silly question. The candle on the stand next to him, blew out from the tent being open. Leaving the sane man in the room his eyes had this eerie look that it could kill a man.



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Comments: 12

SailorEnergy [2016-05-12 01:23:14 +0000 UTC]

No worries, writing a story is always a hard task and it's great that you're doing it to inspire your daughter.

I'm familiar with the Three Kingdoms part of the Chinese history. History is a great source of ideas and my Pacificators story use those quite heavily.

Poor that son for having to deal with his father but at leastt, he's strong.

Nice work,

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Yuriiian In reply to SailorEnergy [2016-05-12 01:53:56 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

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SailorEnergy In reply to Yuriiian [2016-05-12 01:56:17 +0000 UTC]

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7Swords7Lives [2016-04-03 20:10:29 +0000 UTC]

Awesome first chapter and nice to meet a fellow student of Romance of the Three Kingdoms! That's my favorite part of Chinese History to study.

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Yuriiian In reply to 7Swords7Lives [2016-04-04 02:02:05 +0000 UTC]

It my favorite too ^_^

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William-Candido-Cruz [2015-12-16 21:57:44 +0000 UTC]

Looks like it was inspired by real life ancient Chinese conflicts. Ever heard of the battle of the red cliffs? This kind of reminds of it.

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Yuriiian In reply to William-Candido-Cruz [2015-12-18 19:19:44 +0000 UTC]

The Three Romance Kingdom? Of course I'd heard of them. I've been studying them the longest.

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CrescentxSmile [2015-12-12 05:26:17 +0000 UTC]

Nice story I hope to read more about it.

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Yuriiian In reply to CrescentxSmile [2015-12-13 15:22:08 +0000 UTC]

You can read the full verison on my fictionpress or wattpad

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CrescentxSmile In reply to Yuriiian [2015-12-14 01:40:22 +0000 UTC]

Do you have a link that I can see?

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Yuriiian In reply to CrescentxSmile [2015-12-15 14:28:32 +0000 UTC]

www.deviantart.com/users/outgo…

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Yuriiian In reply to CrescentxSmile [2015-12-12 07:01:24 +0000 UTC]

Thanks, its a start

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