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Published: 2007-10-20 17:43:26 +0000 UTC; Views: 3235; Favourites: 55; Downloads: 47
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What?! Yes! Another Chaotix comic! This comic was made with the intenttion to send it to SEGA, to get the rights for publication in Europe by Egmont. The comic itself, is a REMAKE of first issue of Chaotix SDT , made just as a test. Too bad, the comic didnยดt get an approval... but will be free here on dA.
The Chaotix Detectives
Script and Art: Felipe Marcantonio
Pages: 22
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Comments: 5
A few grmmer errors such as:
'found my dear cherry' should be
'find my dear cherry'
'come here take a look on this' should be
'come here and take a look at this'
'what we have here' should be
'what do we have here'
'and they finish at that car marks'
'and they finish at thoose car marks'
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i would hug tight in the 3rd panel lolz
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Charmy's face, is he annoyed, or laughing at the end? XD
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Vector looks so hilarious in the third panel XDDD
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