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yuumei — Fisheye Placebo: Ch2- Part 4
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Published: 2019-07-30 18:02:46 +0000 UTC; Views: 81381; Favourites: 1208; Downloads: 211
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Thanks for reading another chapter! I will be slowly revealing more of Frey and Robin’s past as well as more shenanigans with Vance. Stay tuned!
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I dig you're using 3D models and junk to make the art ultra epic, but it really detracts to see those word bubbles in comparison. It's okay for word bubbles to cover the art a little. In fact, part of drawing comics is to plan space for that. Sticking the bubbles in the gutters between panels or on 'harmless' pieces of the art looks really amateur in comparison to the epic scale of the art. The color of the bubbles blends too much with the background too. Colored bubbles are fine but standing out is better for readers than blending in. There's also a thing called 'padding', meaning put some space between the text and the edges of the bubble itself. Gives the text room to breathe. Hope this can be read in a constructive light. Keep up the good work and don't let the ultra-detail of the art stop you from making things more dynamic or simple when the story calls for it. Having every single panel look like some kind of masterpiece painting, when stuck all together in a comic, can easily look overcrowded and bland to a reader. Not every panel needs a detailed background, and sometimes no background can work even better than something high quality and full of elements.
Overall I like the graffiti feel of the art, which works well with blending those 3D backgrounds in, the comic just needs a little more dynamism in weight and layout and please please PLEASE work on those word bubbles.
Here's a comic from the suggestions on this exact page that displays bubbles done well (not perfect, but pretty good nonetheless).
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bruh
she's doing the best she can under the circumstances
if she's been doing word bubbles like that then it's her style, just let her do her thing
the word bubbles are fine the way they are. comics are meant to be part art, part story, and even if they have their issues if you can understand the story and appreciate the art then really there's no need to change it
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bruhm
it's called constructive criticism. It's not a crime to say something can be improved upon. the art itself is already droolworthy and full of detail and the fixes suggested are very simple. Just trying to help things get even better.
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bruhm?
and okay then you do you man but I'm just saying if she doesn't change it and hasn't for the past twenty two chapters then maybe it really isn't necessary to write such a huge comment just to say you don't like it
/shrug
sorry
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brahmo.
The comment wasn't just to say I don't like it pay attention. Idea was to help a great artist get even better but offering room for improvement. Chill yourself. Sorry not sorry.
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....ok
sorry for misunderstanding you
i gotta figure out how existence(´。＿。｀)
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it's ok I probably did come off and sounding really harsh in my initial comment.
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I will wait for this comic until the end of time. There will never be a time I stop looking, stop watching, stop following. This comic gives me life and it's the single greatest work I've ever read, thank you for all your hard work Yuumei and Team, and I will look forward to supporting your work in the future!
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FREYS SMILE IN THAT LAST PART THO
THAT WAS MY FAV
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Everytime this gets updated my heart goes EIIIIIIIII
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Looks like one of those "Are you happy/behaving in this controlled environment?" forms. Very curious.
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I've reading this since idk...but i still want to see the end or idk!!!!!
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For me it looks like test everyone has to take so country knows if indoctrination sticks.
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And, naturally, everyone lies in the hopes that the government doesn't make things worse.
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Well, it's been stated that majority has no idea about depth of economical divide or how little privacy they have, so if test is formulated in non-direct way it might work, especially to fish for people who seem to purposefully cheat to put them on special watchlist.
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Same and your comment made me laught even more XD
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Fascitaning! Yo may I use the 4th page of this on my Lofi music?
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I think the important question to ask is why the test got shredded.
Another intriguing installment. And now, the wait begins for the next one. ^_^
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The lack of body cap on that camera is distressing me. Hope it isn't dusty in there. D:
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I don't get it. What does "C #" mean?
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C# is a programming language.
The name might seem a bit weird but, basically, it's the C programming language with additional things (a C# is a semitone higher than C when you're talking about music, note that an earlier language C++ which can be understood as "C+1" also exists, but C++ is too large and complicated a language to really use it as a subset of a new language, at best you'd borrow a couple things).
C itself has been named because it's the next language after the B programming language, which itself might have be named after BCPL (basic combined programming language) but with the superfluous stripped.
So, he wears glasses so he can see sharp / he wears glasses so he can code in C#.
[edit: damnit why does deviantart hide the answers to a comment if they "belong" to another page? sorry for reexplaining things]
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Pronounced “C Sharp”, it’s a programming language similar to Java that’s commonly used in web development and video games
So Vance’s shirt is just a real nerdy pun
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Oh! I wonder if I'm going to come across that in my Electrical Engineering courses. (My teacher is combining programming courses with the electrical courses.)
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Oh nice, programming is definitely a good skill to have!
There's also a really nice easy course in C# on codecademy, it's fairly short and doesn't require any prior programming experience, and I think a pretty good resource for anyone interested in learning the language 
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It's a computer programming language.
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