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Published: 2007-08-20 16:28:40 +0000 UTC; Views: 66; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 1
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PLEASE CRITIQUE~!!!! :'(Related content
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If you want an advanced critique...
1. the leg that's bent- the point where it's bend kinda doesn't make sense- the thigh seems to be too skinny.
2. the left shoulder (from my POV) is sticking a bit out.
3. the left arm (from my POV) is way too long, not matching the right arm.
4. the right shoulder (from my POV) is a bit too "stuffed in" under the head.
It's an awesome picture, though! I love the expression on her face.
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XDXD yesh, I see so many mistakes now.....I drew this quite a long time ago.
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'tis 'kay, yuyu! We all make mistakes XD
if you drew this long time ago I want to see what you draw now XD
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Lols. good job againnn~
The hair thingy sticking out seems wierd.
&&. the leg that's like..bent.
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ZOMG I JUST REALIZED I'M NOT WATCHING YOOOOOOOU!
Why am I not watching you? *watches* O_O
It's very pretty! And yes, it does look like Spring! ^^
But the arm that's bent looks a little long to me, and her legs are kinda small and skinny.
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ack...creepy....she's now watching meh....>_>
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XD See you at school. I shall be staring. 0.0
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THAT is good. But you made the bottom half too small, again....
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You know, bottom half! The waist and below.
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oh...yes...I see...;_;
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The little hair thing sticking out from the back looks kinda wierd. That's about the only thing I can see.
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