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YEAH I wanna know what the hell's goin on and who's responsible
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Seriously when will this series continue? It does sound very intresting
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This is a day to remember for me. This marks the first MLP fan comic I will experience from the beginning. I eagerly await more!
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Holy Sugar Honey Ice Tea this looks amazing! *shivers* and awesome and freaky and OMG WHEN IS THE NEXT ONE I GOTTA SEE!
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My oc is slave test subject who has been hidden away from the actual world... why does this feel like something similar to ot?
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SO, in this timeline, Twilight didn't stop Starlight Glimmer from altering the past, and she's now the self proclaimed Queen of Equestria?
Could be good.
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You have my attention :3Β
I mean... No wonder, huh? xD
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Huh, a supposed death right at the beginning and your unique art style?
I LOVE IT ALREADY!
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LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOL, sounds cool
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hmmmm interesting. lets see where this is goingΒ
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Great intro! Can't wait to see more of the comic
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What an intro. It's certainly got me interested!Β
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no cutie mark? and dash can out fly / dodge that in her sleepΒ
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Intriguing... yes, I'm really curious to see how this story will develop!
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This DEFINITELY caught my attention. *grabs popcorn*
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popcorn for a single page?
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No, it's for the entire story. I've got a whole room full of popcorn *opens closet door and gets buried in avalanche of popcorn*
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yes but there is only 1 page yet
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I know but it's for later
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...I WAS NOT PREPARED FOR THIS!
What is this? New comic serie? Or just something to get our minds working?Β
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This looks like a mad max fury road entrance
"my name is Max, my world is fire, and blood"
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Spectation mode ON.
I want more >_< , awesome start!
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Huh. Not a nice start. And I have a feeling it's gonna go downhill from there. You got my attention. Heh.
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Okay, now I'm curious to see where this leads...
Good start, lots of potential, and based on first impression, I'm going to guess... This is a drama-action-adventure story.
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2nd panel: "[...]world it use to be." Shouldn't it be "used"?
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"Use to be" is the correct grammar in this instance.
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Ooh... okay :3
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"Used to be" is actually the correct grammar. You're intending to indicate past tense when you say this phrase and thus is should be constructed accordingly. Some say that "use" can be used in the negative sense as in "Didn't use to be," but this is likely a recent occurrence due to the fact that people run the -d- and -t- together when they say the phrase, leading to confusion among the masses and thus leading to a perceived need to give "use to" an actual place even though it makes things even more confusing.
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''whom''
IS THAT A NEW WORD TO THE WROLD? .O.
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Whom is like Who, but it's used in a different way...
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