HOME | DD

zack0809 — Importance
Published: 2013-10-19 01:09:54 +0000 UTC; Views: 172; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 0
Redirect to original
Description The gem of my world
Which carries the most beauty
Is not made from rock.
Related content

[ TEXT ]


zack0809 - Oh, The Irony

[ TEXT ]


Novadrome - The Day After Tomorrow

[ TEXT ]


AMGstorm - It Might as Well Be Night

[ TEXT ]


SpiritZodiac - Fear Itself
Comments: 4

xxBoneless [2013-10-20 01:56:50 +0000 UTC]

Aw, this is wonderful.

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

zack0809 In reply to xxBoneless [2013-10-21 06:06:38 +0000 UTC]

Why thank you.

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

Haikumato [2013-10-19 18:22:51 +0000 UTC]

I think this haiku is really delicate and pretty, I like it! And it's okay even if it has been done "million times" already. It's still a great poem.

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

zack0809 In reply to Haikumato [2013-10-21 06:08:08 +0000 UTC]

Thanks, most romantic stuff does turn out to be delicateish. I tried to make it less so, and therefore more interesting by trying to use harder sounds though, while comparing something gritty and sharp, like rock and gems.

👍: 0 ⏩: 0