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Published: 2017-04-23 02:21:10 +0000 UTC; Views: 2711; Favourites: 19; Downloads: 1
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Well, that took a turn! D:
Featuring my own personal take on Sans’s “shortcuts.” He creates doors on surfaces, and then exits through another surface in the “room” he goes to.
OMG! I was once teased that it’d be 6 months until my next release... They were right! ^_^() So sorry!
Glad to finally have this done after lots of depressive slumps and art block. Hopefully I can keep up a better pace from now on!
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what? please don't say this is how this story ends!
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The comic is captivating.
I did not know you were not well, some comic may stop midway because the writer would give up.
hope you get well soon.
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Awwwww... Thank youuuuu. *Hugs.* I'll do my best to continue when I can. I've got a long way to go... but your comment fills me with determination. :3
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Thanks for your interest. I really hope to. ^^ I have this and soooo many other ideas I wanna do too. It's just that my health has been horrible. No sleep pattern whatsoever, lots of pain and fatigue, and my depression keeps me so apathetic. It's hard to motivate myself at all, and then I usually have to spend what little energy I sometimes get on hygiene, making meals, shopping for food, going to doctor appointments, etc. The heart is willing, but the body is weak, bleh. I still wanna get back into this... it's just that I can only gauge my abilities day-to-day, and can't pick when I feel both inspired and strong enough to do it. All I can do is keep hoping it can be soon. 
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Oh man, the suspense! I wish the artist would hurry up and continue this storyyyy!
Oh wait... that's me... o_o
........Seriously though, I hate being in such a long and awful art-slump. But your comments are giving me a bit more DETERMINATION to try. I'll keep trying to whip up the energy to keep going... though it still may be a while as I'm wrestling with sleep issues, and that kinda creates 54882187745 more issues as a result. ^_^;;
But I'm so glad to see you enjoying what I've done so far. :3
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*reading this gives you determination*
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*sr.pelo gasp* where is the cinnamon roll?!?! WHERE IS PAPYRUS?! *flails arms as she yell's 'where's papyrus?!' and 'whoever took him i will rip them to SHREDS!'*
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I'm glad you're enjoying this story.
I'm currently dealing with depression crap, but hopefully can resume working on this soon. Knowing people out there like my story fills me with DETERMINATION. :3
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Oh dear how did this slip so far back in my queue?!?! At last it's here! I do love that shadowing in the forest. And how enthusiastic the kid is to help. AND your effect/coloring for the teleportation. I think the idea that Sans is very understated personality-wise, but his powers are really flashy and he can't help it is really funny.
And...oh dear, Papyrus. HE BETTER BE HELPING SOMEONE CROSS THE ROAD, OR I SWEAR--
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Yaaay! I'm glad that you're glad it's here! That makes me happyyy~!
That shading, took me sooooo long, but I just felt I had to do it. Thank goodness not much more will happen in the woods, phew!
Let's face it, to get through a True Pacifist run, it's very likely in most cases that they were really DETERMINED to get through the Underground making friends and not hurting anyone, no matter how many times they may've been hurt or even killed. That would make for an ambassador who really cares about monsters.
Hehehe, yeah with Sans it's like... "don't mind me, just casually bending time and space here." I figured that'd make a nice contrast to how nonchalantly he can do it.
Yup, don't worry, Papyrus is fine, no innocence-shattering in this comic, no sirree...
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Haha, an ambassador who really cares about monsters AND incurable goody-two-shoes
And FRIEND YOU ARE DOIN ME A CONCERN
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Yes!!! It updated!!!
Once again, you've done AMAZING! I love how you make the sun peek through the trees and shine on our heroes. It's an amazing effect that I've never seen any other artist do!
I love how you portray Frisk. They're a very good ambassador have a strong determination to help everyone (just wait until they find out it was their dear friend Papyrus that was taken, they'll gather the dog army themselves!)
I also love how you drew Sans taking "short cuts". It was a beautiful effect and I love how confused nearby monsters looked!
Things are about to a turn for the for the absolute worse in this story. Keep up the good work!!
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Aw man, thank you so much for your detailed review.
That shade effect in the forest, hnnnnngh! It was so time-consuming! But I really loved doing it, so that was another part of what took me so long. XD Heck, this whole release was way too detailed, but I was enjoying it and feeling very perfectionist, so I just had to, man! ^_^;;
Indeed, I kinda came up with this particular shortcut idea when thinking back on how he usually seems to do it in the game. Leaves one screen, enters another. I figure it also makes him less OP than being able to just do it wherever/whenever into thin air. As for how his magic looks, I figured lines of simple 'code' could be involved, as well as a combination of his time/space magic, hence why I incorporated both of his eye colors (yellow and turquoise) into the process.
I'm glad I could finally reward my loyal followers. Thank you so much for your patience! <3
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I have another question, if you don't mind: On the final panel, you have Papyrus' scarf laying by itself. This is obviously meant to fill us with dread, and I must ask, is that why you had the scarf laying in a field of yellow flowers with white centers? I know Flowey won't be in this comic, but if there's one character from Undertale who can fill the audience with dread...were you sending a subconscience message there?
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Hmm, it might be too direct for me to say too much, but yes, that was indeed the idea.
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Aw man, you clever artist you 😃
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Mwahahaha! Thanks for following my journey on this. But yeah, angst is coming in!
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Oh no! They got him! And knowing Papyrus, it was like kidnapping a child.
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Oh man, yeah, he's just too innocent and trusting for his own good! D:
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