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This isn't finished yet but I thought I'd give you a sneak peak of what I'm working on. Hope you likeAll trademarks referenced herein are the properties of their respective owners.
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Comments: 24
battlebrothertherix [2011-10-04 19:22:35 +0000 UTC]
I have to agree with Dethart, the feet are a bit flat and the helmet is a bit out of perspective, but otherwise it could be a fully finished piece.
The helmet's right side (as I look at it) is just a bit wider than the other side, so I think it just needs narrowing a bit, and the foot just needs raising slightly on the upper cap to create a slightly more curved effect. Apart from that an excellent piece of work, on par with better known artists.
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zahnib In reply to battlebrothertherix [2011-10-05 05:28:26 +0000 UTC]
Thanks again for the constructive criticism. I'll try and alter the helmet and feet when I'm finishing of the picture. Haha, and thank you for being so kind!
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jackabe [2011-10-04 18:45:47 +0000 UTC]
amazing work the metal shading is amazing and the fall of the cloth is great, nice work
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zahnib In reply to jackabe [2011-10-05 05:26:47 +0000 UTC]
Thanks Jake! Hope everything's going well at College
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jackabe In reply to zahnib [2011-10-05 20:36:06 +0000 UTC]
really good at the moment thanks, how are you now you? what are you up? to I heard you want to come back to England soon
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zahnib In reply to jackabe [2011-10-06 04:32:12 +0000 UTC]
Yeah I'm going alright, almost finished school so woohoo! Hopefully I'll be able to come back, I want to do some traveling so I'll try and make my way there.
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jackabe In reply to zahnib [2011-10-06 19:24:06 +0000 UTC]
yay sounds good I hope you do it would be really great to see you again I'm just in my last year of college now hopefully next year I'll be taking a foundation art degree (don't worry it's basically a year added on to college life somewhere else) then maybe uni
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zahnib In reply to jackabe [2011-10-06 20:30:40 +0000 UTC]
I hope I do too! Another year of college?! and the another?! Blimey well it sounds like you're enjoying it. Do you know what University you want to apply to?
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jackabe In reply to zahnib [2011-10-07 21:39:16 +0000 UTC]
yeah well it's like an introduction course to uni it lets me try all different styles and art forms over 12 months and builld a portfolio also most uni's here ask for it if you want a course in graphic design so really I have to and as for university no idea which one yet just as long as I like it, it is credible and not too far away I don't mind
what about you?
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zahnib In reply to jackabe [2011-10-09 11:09:50 +0000 UTC]
Oh cool that sounds really good, I'll be expecting lots of new art from you then In terms of University? I don't know at the moment, I mean I'd love to come and study in England, but I'm think maybe Melbourne. We'll see though.
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jackabe In reply to zahnib [2011-10-10 00:21:34 +0000 UTC]
yeah I should be making lots more I am at the moment for my current unit at college,
but haven't had much chance to upload on the same note your art is looking really good
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I have to say and I'm jealous of your digital painting it is seriously good.
I really like your textures and tones as well as your motion in fabric. keep up the good work.
And I hope you come and study in England but if not I'm sure Melbourne would be a great university .
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zahnib In reply to jackabe [2011-10-10 01:42:50 +0000 UTC]
Yeah finding time to upload stuff is sometimes tricky. Thank you! Those four b&w pieces were for my I.T. Major Work (a project you work on for the whole year and is then a large portion of you assessment). Haha, well I have a long way to go, how's your tablet going? Yeah I've been trying to work out how to do different textures, still only learning
Yeah we'll see what happens, maybe I can transfer to England for a year or something (don't remember what it's called).
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jackabe In reply to zahnib [2011-10-10 14:58:18 +0000 UTC]
oh nice when do you find out how you did in your major project?
the tablet is like another limb don't know how I would work without it,
it's just so much better than a mouse. And even though your only trying out textures
they still look really realistic (to me anyway ). And I think the thing you are referring
to is a placement year or transfer, I think but either way I know what your on about
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zahnib In reply to jackabe [2011-10-11 02:32:53 +0000 UTC]
I think we get our results maybe April next year, maybe before then I'm not 100% sure. Yes it is soooooo much easier than a mouse! There's still some things I think could do with improvement but I'm still happy with it.
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jackabe In reply to zahnib [2011-10-11 21:23:31 +0000 UTC]
Yeah cool let me know how you do I'm sure after seeing your work you will do great
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Dethart [2011-10-04 13:23:01 +0000 UTC]
Looks good, but maybe a tiny piece of critique, his helmet seems a bit off in perspective, if you get my drift. If you're drawing digitally, maybe use the warp-tool to straighten out the shape and maybe his feet are a little flat. But I think the detail and shading is very good. So keep up the good work
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zahnib In reply to Dethart [2011-10-05 05:25:36 +0000 UTC]
Thanks for the constructive criticism. Sometimes you spend so long looking at something that you miss obvious things (like the helmet). The feet were done in a rush and so are admittedly a little dodgy. Thanks again though
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