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Published: 2014-12-30 10:55:34 +0000 UTC; Views: 1440; Favourites: 12; Downloads: 0
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 My room's a mess, my mind is sore,

I cannot think clearly anymore,

Instead of a heart there is a hole,

And I just sit around, staring at the wall.

 

The clock is ticking, but there’s no action,

And there is no utter satisfaction,

There is nothing  to the world I can show,

I let myself completely go…

 

I want to live, not just exist,

I do not wish to lose myself in this mist,

I need to inhale the cold winter air,

And exhale all the despair!



How many days more to lose,

Is this what I choose?

I am wasting all this precious time,

To waste it all would be a crime,

I should go out and make a dime,

But then who will write this dark rhyme?



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salty-lex [2022-04-13 15:18:56 +0000 UTC]

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Zivylla [2015-01-08 22:43:53 +0000 UTC]

Ah laziness. Exactly what I've been  dealing with right now as a whole. A lot of things happened at once, and now I just want to relax when I should be drawing or writing or doing poetry or something.

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ZakesCorner In reply to Zivylla [2015-01-08 22:49:52 +0000 UTC]

LOL, I feel ya

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CrazyMai [2015-01-07 16:01:25 +0000 UTC]

I can relate to it so much ♥  

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ZakesCorner In reply to CrazyMai [2015-01-07 21:44:15 +0000 UTC]

A lot of us can

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TheSolitaryTrickster [2015-01-02 09:33:38 +0000 UTC]

Wow! This is almost exactly what I'm feeling at the moment. Great poem!

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ZakesCorner In reply to TheSolitaryTrickster [2015-01-02 19:28:04 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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LadyMurasaki1 [2014-12-31 07:36:08 +0000 UTC]

This is brilliant! Sometimes its hard to accept that 'lazy' is, in reality, what you are actually being. This refusal to accept this label just leads to more laziness and more procrastination.

So congratulations on writing such an epiphanic poem! And good luck overcoming laziness! I believe this is also something I must conquer too. Maybe my New Years Resolution?

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ZakesCorner In reply to LadyMurasaki1 [2014-12-31 11:28:57 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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