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Published: 2010-01-02 23:04:28 +0000 UTC; Views: 1942; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 13
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This adventure starts where most adventures start, at an Inn in the wee hours of the morning. Where Am I going with this? Ha, as if I would tell you! It is a secret. It is so secret that even I do not really know what I am doing!This is the first panel of comic I am doing, titled Complicated Food Chain: The Adventures of Susie. A first panel which took me far more effort to do then I intended. Really I just wanted to practice drawing, and practicing is HARD! I just hope I actually continue this comic this time
Super big major thanks to and whom critiqued and corrected my original line art, so I redrew parts of it with using their suggestions. It turned out a LOT better, thanks! ^_^
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Comments: 10
Aww, I never got a link to this after I red-lined it @.@ it was so long ago...and I just found it!
It looks great 
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Other than her eyes being to big, great work! 
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Thank you, now I just have to do the rest for you to look forward to ^_^
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Nice, I can see you're improving even more now, but as mentioned the eyes are a little off currently. Guess we can only stay tuned to see what you have planned ahead!
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I was surprised in how well it turned out, besides the eyes that is.
And "Planed" might not be the best word to describe what I am doing, more like vague idea
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It looks ok :3 The eyes are just a little weird ;3
And I can't wake up in morning :<
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curse you eyes and your hard to drawness!
I end up waking up a lot in the morning, except that most of the times I wake up its still a dream >_>
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D:! Wow..a waking up dream?!
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Wow this is really good...though...her right eye seems...like it's fused with her eft...
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Thank you, I ended up putting a lot more effort into it then I intended.
and yeah, I really messed up on her eyes, oops
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