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Published: 2005-01-28 20:04:42 +0000 UTC; Views: 83; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 2
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trees are dropping their leavesspiraling to the ground
angels come and go as they please
some dark, some grey, some with broken wings
i hear all these words
they pierce the skin
so deep the hurt
my soul bleeds
spiders, bats, and snakes
crawl in my slumber
a life im going to take
please take a number
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Comments: 4
IT seems like you life is complicated for you...leaves spiral to the ground...like a plane spirals down..angels coming and going as they please...guardian angels are supposed to be with you always...the words that pierce so deep they readh the soul and the "scary animals"
I don't know to me it seems like a life out of control...and it even shows in the complicated ryhme pattern and the general confusion of the poem.
But that's just my viewpoint. I like it!
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heh. gratze, gratze. i have lots more i just gotta copy it from my other site.
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I see faded hope and a sense of hopelessness. but that's just me.
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maybe. its a fairly old poem.
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