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a poster of the upcoming "ghost in the shell"-remake ...not!lineart [link]
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There are quite a few points in this picture that are wrong, but we'll skip over these for now.
I will applaud your use of lighting on the body itself, showing the contours of the muscles and the body itself. The background itself is striking, with the red robot eyes catching our eyes. The sleekness of the "Ghost in the Shell" is well done, and the faint "ROT" leaves us wondering what that means.
But, as I said, there are a few bad points. Basically, the anatomy of the body itself is a bit off. The back seems like it bends way too far back, to the point where it looks like the back of the shoulders actually bend past the back of the butt, which isn't normal I believe. The neck is slightly in giraffe territory, and it's too long for the angle the body is at. The muscles themselves may actually be too muscular, and I think that some of the muscles you drew shouldn't even be showing, like to the top left of the left buttock.
Other than those anatomical errors, the piece is good and just needs a bit of polishing.
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Ok, I searched some pictures for you to show why I don't accepted your critique.
sure its not the same pose but if u understand anatomy u may see the point
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Ava cowan
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Larisa Reis
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Protip: It's not wise to "not accept a critique"
if you don't like what it says, thank the artist for giving it and move on
you don't need to publicly announce that you "didn't accept it"
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I'm sorry, sir, but those examples really don't help you, since they kinda show the contrast between correct anatomy and what you drew.
Also, I don't think it's fair to completely disregard a critique, even though it offered helpful tips and praised you in some places.
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I did not know, if I hit unfair it don't get shown on the artwork.
yesterday i drew a skeleton in the figure. try it ur self if u anatomy knowledge goes fare enough then u will see that the bend of the spine doesn't look so hard anymore 
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That... That really did not help you at all. The picture you provided just keeps showing the differences between correct anatomy and what you drew.
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there are muscles implied in this picture that aren't even evident in human anatomy.
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first of all i can definatly tell you spent a great deal of time and effore on this work the detail in her musculatur really shows an not to mention her stark contrast to the red and black background really makes her stand out....i am not a fan of muscles on women....i find them creepy but this doesnt seem to go too far in that department. i am reminded of the ending credit picture of Motoko topless looking back and i can see this being perhaps influenced by that.....this is a very great picture and not only for GITS fans but for fans of women and body building....nice work
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Hey, thanks glad you like my stuff. Enjoy!
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Best major I have seen so far, awesome job
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I guess she really gets into her job?
Really, who's her boss, Master Roshi?
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yep, didn't you read the dragonball gits crossover??
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m.youtube.com/watch?v=gvdf5n-zβ¦
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Yeah, I start drawing a new movie... I already have drawn 2 seconds
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I'm not sure that counts.
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I can hear the Yokko Kanno theme playing in the background!
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necesito dibujante para comic de ciencia ficcion xxx
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u draw really nice muscle girls. please keep it up
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Yes, I will... ehm... keep it up
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really? im glad im watching u
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You know from afar, I mistook Motoko for Casca. Its a very nice piece overall.
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*googlecasca* *nod* yeah... ^^
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This render is pretty awesome.
And that butt with those muscles are all kinds of high class.
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there has been alot of talk recently about a live-action adaptation of the ghost in the shell movie.
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Yeah, Steven Spielberg... time will tell ^^
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maybe but I don't think it was him.
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