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I was talking to =ArthurRoyalKnight last night, and sketched this up. <3 Despite drawing it at 3:30 in the morning, I was very, very happy with it~
This is a gift for him since he has done so much for me lately. ;.; Seriously, I feel like I'm re-realizing just how lucky I am to have him, such an amazing guy. I love you so much, Arthur~ ♥
My scanner completely raped this, it looks so much better IRL. B(
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RecklessKaiser [2010-06-07 22:55:53 +0000 UTC]
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It doesn't matter how much time it have passed since the last time you asked for a critique but that as soon as you're polishing a new style you request a critique, it means you really wanna improve as much as possible and become a better artist. So let's see what you have for us this time:
First off, I'd to say that you've truly found an original and unique Anthro style that fits you very very well. No matter what you say, this only proves how much you've improved during the last years and that you can draw everything you want, body proportions aren't a problem for you anymore and your anatomy work keeps improve in every single artwork you draw. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/h/h… " width="16" height="16" alt="
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Then I'd like to add how much your traditional skills are improving too, the technique coloring you used this time enhance the drawing, what I liked the most was how you colored Taylor and Kaiser's fur, so smooth yet so vibrant! This also goes for your background it fits perfectly to the concept of your pic; what could be better that some hearts and a soft color for a lovely background?~ Not to say that even if the stand was complicated to draw you did it very well, seems like both of them are enjoying that kiss. ~e.deviantart.net/emoticons/h/h… " width="15" height="13" alt="
" title="Heart"/> But I think you could keep an eye on some details like Kaiser's arm, maybe it's just because of the perspective, but I notice his left arm is thinner than his right one; it would be only matter you practice more to fix smalls details like this one.
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Then I have to say that I love the style you use to draw the clothes and the folds on them, especially the jeans; even though don't forget to how is that jeans make look shoes when they're kinda baggy, so I think this tutorial could be uselful for you [link] That way you will also improve drawing shoes. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/t/t… " width="15" height="15" alt="
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And talking about shoes, you did a good work with them too, because the perspective was very tricky but they still looking good; although I always think is a chance to improve, so I'll suggest you to keep practicing with shoes and feet too, that's why I found these tutorials for you: [link] [link] [link] Hope they will be useful for you and they can help you out to draw shoes and feet even better, it's just matter you practice more with them. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/a/a… " width="15" height="15" alt="
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As I've told you since I started to critique you, I'm glad to be witness of your progress as an artist, and this lovely artwork is a proof that; you're becoming a great artist and I can't wait to see more of your drawings in all your amazing styles, because now you have to skills to draw all that you want! e.deviantart.net/emoticons/c/c… " width="15" height="15" alt="
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Keep up the good work my lovely girlfriend, once more thank you so much for this incredible drawing and gift, I love you!~ e.deviantart.net/emoticons/t/t… " width="40" height="18" alt="
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zelestials In reply to RecklessKaiser [2010-06-07 23:39:40 +0000 UTC]
...lol it has been a while, huh? But yes, wanna get better at anthro too1 |3
Urgh, thank you so much! ;w; I'm so glad you think so, I've been practicing anatomy for so long now. xD
It's been so long since I've done any traditional work, so I'm so glad you like it! But mm, yeah I kinda noticed that, but it was hard to fix. xD; But I'm glad you noticed, I'll keep that in mind for angles like this. >w<
Urggh thank youuu! ;w; I've needed something like that really bad, I didn't exactly know how the folds work around the feet, so that's really useful. >w<
OHH MY GOD THOSE TUTORIALS. So helpful omggg. :'D Especially the anthro paw one, I've been wanting to learn/practice that, so thank youuu! <3
Haha, thank you so much~! I'm glad that you see progress I've made, 'cause that's what I'm aiming for!
I will~! It's nothing, Arthur. Anything for you~ <3 I love you too! ~
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RecklessKaiser In reply to zelestials [2010-06-08 00:02:37 +0000 UTC]
Oh yes, you bet it has been quite a while Oh yes, you're already good but I'm sure you'll improve even more! ;D
You're very welcome! ;w; And of course xD, since a few weeks ago with those human sketches you showed me I noticed your how anatomy isn't a big issue for you anymore
Hey, all those pen artworks (as well, as all those sketches you drew too, haha xD) count like traditional artworks too, therefore you've practiced in somehow, okay? ~ Hey, it's okay, I bet in that part of the drawing it was difficult to fix a detail like that. xD; Yush, I noticed it and I'm sure you'll improve with things like those in no time. >w<
No problem! ;w; And I'm glad it can be that useful for you, now you'll know how to do the folds around the feet and improve with your feet too. >w<
Oh, I think someone really liked the tutorials I posted. ;D And yup, since paws aren't like human feet I thought you might like to know how to draw them better, so use them and I can't wait how much they're gonna help you; no problem! <3
You're very welcome , I can't wait to see more of your progress because you never stop improving!
Yay! >w< And just like I said, Lisa, anything for you, so now I'm thinking/working on something for you too, bwahaha!~ <3 Fff, you! ~
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Hasheruna [2010-06-14 19:44:10 +0000 UTC]
nice job! but you could use a little more shading around the heads area
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zelestials In reply to Hasheruna [2010-06-14 21:41:24 +0000 UTC]
Thanks~ I'll keep that in mind! <3
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Aya-Hiratasuka [2010-06-10 02:04:58 +0000 UTC]
First off - I envy your ablility to draw right now. And that you can color so well on paper D: And I absolutely love the pose :3 You've improved whether you like it or not! Yes the scannered raped it but its beautiful nevertheless ^^ I hope you and Arthur stay happy :3 Hopefully for forever! (also I can't draw couple pics to save my life...so you take the cake on that right here >B( And you wonder why I want an art trade...pfffft!)
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zelestials In reply to Aya-Hiratasuka [2010-06-10 02:14:53 +0000 UTC]
fff thank you so much! ;w; <333
(Pfff, I got lucky with the pose this time, okay? B( PFFFFT. *bricked*)
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Aya-Hiratasuka In reply to zelestials [2010-06-10 02:19:37 +0000 UTC]
Mhm X3 *goes to draw Kamal, and maybe Aaron or someone else* :333
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MrEchoAngel [2010-06-08 18:30:27 +0000 UTC]
Stop being so fucking cute, guys ;_; <3
This is amazing Lisa, seriously the poses and angle is amazing i love how Taylor has her back turned, her tail is ever so bushy! <3 Really adore the colouring too, really neat pencil work and the pink background works so well, love all those hearts! So pleased for you guys, keep up the good work! <3
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zelestials In reply to MrEchoAngel [2010-06-08 21:58:07 +0000 UTC]
Urggh, thank you so much, Kimmy! ;w; <3
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KTWizard [2010-06-08 14:06:49 +0000 UTC]
Aw, that's cute! Reminds me of the soulmate pic Karla did for me!
Great job!
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SunChails [2010-06-07 15:24:09 +0000 UTC]
Scanner kills almost everything, but I still love this, the pose and stand looks great and I have to admire that BG
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zelestials In reply to SunChails [2010-06-07 23:24:41 +0000 UTC]
Haha, so true. xD Thanks. <3
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RecklessKaiser [2010-06-07 05:25:24 +0000 UTC]
ptmwqstpwqtm omg! ;___; <3
Why, why did you have to get obsessed with this pic the day before your finals and even upload it before you went to sleep!? ;___; Seriously, yesterday (early today? xD) were the best twelve hours of chat we had and we didn't finish to something important, fff! xD <333
But omg! I couldn't believe that the way we said good night would inspire you to draw something as sweet an amazing as this ;___;, just how amazing your Anthro style has improved and how Kaiser and Taylor came out on it, so lovely! ;w; What I like the most was how you drew their tails, so fluffy! You know how much I love that of your drawings, Lisa! >w< <3 And then, omg, the stand! ;___; <3 Such a lovely kiss scene, I swear! ;w; <3 Seriously, when you and I met in person, we much kiss each other as much as possible, alright? 8( <3
twiaksds Did I tell lately how much I love you? ~ Well, I'm gonna tell you right now: I love you so much my all-I've-ever-wanted-girlfriend!
*hugs you very tight and kisses you softly on your lips* <3333 And fff! Come on, I only do the least I can do for you and I'm glad you appreaciate this way ;-; <3 And no matter what you say/think/whatever you're the best girl ever and I'm so proud to be your boyfriend.
<333 Loving you now and you loving you forever, Lisa! ~
Thank you so much for this amazing gift, I'll treasure forever! ;w;
<333 Keep up the good work my lovely girlfriend, I can't wait to see more Anthro stuff from you this Summer! ;D And hopefully I'll critique this for you later, if you're okay with it, of course
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zelestials In reply to RecklessKaiser [2010-06-07 05:37:19 +0000 UTC]
Uhm.. because I have issues? B( Gahh, I know right? I was amazing. ;ww; <333
fff well it did! ;w; Urggh, I'm just so glad you like it. ;__; You know how much I love drawing fluffy tails. ;D <3 eee of course we will, and it'll be amazing each and every time~! <333
frbjkgh ;-; I love you too my everything-I've-ever-wanted boyfriend~! *hugs and kisses back* ;///; <333 Gahh, of course I appreciate it! I appreciate every little thing you do for me. ;-; <33 Well in that case, you're the best boyfriend in the world, no matter what! ;w;
<333 Loving you forever and always, Arthur!
fff Of course, anything for you! ;w; <333 eee thank you, I will~ <3 And yeah, go ahead. ;D
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RecklessKaiser In reply to zelestials [2010-06-07 06:06:34 +0000 UTC]
Several big issues I have to add 8'( And yes, omg! One of our best chats ever, I swear! ;ww; <333
I noticed how much liked that phrase! ;w; twqps but of course, I like it ;-;, I'm loving it! ;ww; <3 And you beat, your fluffy tails are the best! ;D <3 Oh you know it, Lisa, each one of our kisses will be simply amazing!~ <333
twiktws It's the true! ;___; And fff, you! >///< <333 And that's why I keep doing those things because I know you appreciate them ;w; <333 If you say so, meanwhile you accept you're the best girlfriend ever!!! ;w;
<333 That sounds like a good deal to me!
Well, that means I'll have to do something for you too, mmm~ <333 You're very welcome, I'm sure you'll~ <3 And alright, if you say so ;D
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