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Published: 2006-04-19 04:21:38 +0000 UTC; Views: 165; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 5
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I wish so much to hold your hand,to call you my own, to leave this land.
Alas, I'm afraid you belong to another,
never to be mine, never to bother.
Perhaps one day, if my love stays strong.
Perhaps it was meant to be, all along.
Hope is my pen, destiny, my paper.
I must be careful, lest my hope will taper.
I know not the truth, or which way to look.
What I do know, my heart you have took.
It is yours to behold, forever and ever.
Much pain has been caused, by this uncertain endeavor.
I'm too deep to get out, I call for your help.
Will all of this end, with just a pitiful yelp?
Comments: 2
Doberz [2006-04-19 04:26:13 +0000 UTC]
I like it. It's not perfect, but hey, what is? And who the Hell set the standards for poetry anyway? The emotion there is tangible, and that's what matters. Keep up the good work. And hey... good luck.
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Zencyde In reply to Doberz [2006-04-21 20:44:58 +0000 UTC]
I'm very aware that this is not one of my better works.. but I needed to get it out. Thank you though.
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