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Crysenna [2006-08-27 04:10:40 +0000 UTC]

lol Since=ikeda has been commenting alot on anatomy wize, I shall not touch that area. I'll comment more on the background XDD
The character in general is pretty, sweet and does show that she's very friendly. I love the pose and additional characters near her. This does add more details to the picture. You've managed to fill up the space around her well I love her wings too; very unique May I suggest you add more flowers and plants in the background so that when you color, you can kinda blend the garden at the back with the sky somehow^^ What colors will you be using to color this piece??

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ikeda [2006-08-27 02:36:46 +0000 UTC]

Not bad

Looks like you've started drawing guides underneath. Remember to check out how bones look so that you get an idea of how they curve.

Considering that her shoulders are elevated, her breasts and upper chest should also move upwards. It looks like you only bothered to move the shoulders up and left the rest where they are in a static pose.

This also creates the feeling that her body isn't in line with her shoulder; her back line should connect to her arm in a way that the deltoids are not scrunched into the body (Uh, this may be hard to understand, I'm having a difficult time describing it, tell me if you need a visual aid)

Also, she seems to have a bit more flesh on the upper arm and left forearm compared to other areas of her body (they just look a bit thicker; this might be subjective though).

What's bothering me about the left leg is that the shin's curve is inwards whereas it's usually outwards, so that makes the leg seem a bit weird and uncomfortable. It should instead follow the overall direction of the movement. Also, the ankle area shouldn't seem to bulge out of the leg frame.

Also, concerning the right leg - I'm not sure if the knee is very long or whether it's the dress line -, the knee area should be half hidden, so you wouldn't see a bulb coming out. How it is now makes the leg too long compared to the left leg. This also makes the lower right leg look extremely short. You should either lengthen it so it reaches the butt (horizontally) or move it up so that it touches the butt.

Suggestion: Why don't you try making the ends of her braid thinner? Usually hair isn't cut completely equally (and doesn't grow in equal lengths), or strands are used in an unequal manner, so a braid becomes thinner and thinner as you go down Also, try making the lines for hair smoother, hair is generally very flowy in styles like yours.

Keep it up! Tell me if you need a drawover!

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