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Zephyr-starz — Experiments of the heart 1.1
Published: 2013-08-18 10:50:06 +0000 UTC; Views: 2184; Favourites: 23; Downloads: 0
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So Here is a Mini Comic of what Trouble in the midst leaves out, things that you would never have known X3This might be to violent for some people.... >.< ;
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Umbreon(Shade) © skyrocker4cats
Espeon (Andensine) © skyrocker4cats
Eevee (jewel) © skyrocker4cats
Zorua(Mark)© skyrocker4cats
Baby human(Mark)© skyrocker4cats
Pokemon© Nintendo
Pokemon© Gamefreak
Art © skyrocker4cats
Trouble in the midst comic© skyrocker4cats
Experiments of the heart© skyrocker4cats
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I was expecting a human instead...
BTW: after reading this, my imagination went into OVER drive and now I'm wondering if I can cameo Shade in my Pokemon Ranger story...-_-;
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Yes shade was a human but was transformed by PMD so he met Andensine( She is a normal pokemon). They fell in love and had jewel. Jewel is half human yes X3
Axis is like stuck with humans XD
Sure you can cameo shade ^^ He also goes by professor morph 
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That's interesting, I always considered the PMD universe to be separate from the mainstream universe. If Shade was transformed by PMD that would make him a normal Umbreon, so why is his eyes red when he's a shiny?
Now I gotta figure out how Alex will end up meeting Shade... I'm thinking the Union will search him out in hopes that he might point them to any leads on Alex's ability origins. In my story they find a temple that discribes the Whisperer's history, so maybe Shade will find it first in hopes of seeking answers of his own and ends up telling the Union where it is when it turns out to be a dead end for himself.
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Well Andensine kinda made an in between universe after the pmd where the worlds collide a bit XD
That was a mistake thank you for pointing it out i fixed it XD his eyes are now yellow >W<
Hmm, that sounds like a great idea, he did search around for answers.
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That explains why your pokemon characters act more human than...well, wild.XD
You're welcome.^^ Though I kinda thought the red eyes added a bit of character to him. If you went with a concept of him actually being human that researched in understanding the pokemon mind, and an accident happened that transformed him into what he is now, you could use that to explain the red eyes by saying its a mutation of his transformation since it was imperfect. However I personally like the yellow eyes better simply because....never mind...
If I cameo Shade/prof. Morph, I MIGHT have to change his back story since I don't consider the PMD universe to be the same as the mainstream. But if you can convince me in your story on how the two worlds merged then I'll change my mind.XD I prefer to keep things as accurate as possible when cameoing, though my imagination LOVES to take what people give out and brainstorm on how they can be changed or improved.
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Yes X3
Yeah i like the yellow eyes better, it make him look more professional then a complete manic XD
Okay well here is how they merged.
When shade was leaving at the end of the PMD Andensine went in a state of utter insanity which made her powers go crazy, her physic ability are so intense and powerful she made the two worlds collide, she then made her beloved husband return to her with her telekinetic abilities creating a world where the two could be together for as long as they live ^^
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That's SOME power....
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yeah XD, and no they get along wonderfully ^^ he never told her that he missed being human because he loved her and his daughter, and mark ^^
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Yet so far I've seen him treat Mark rather badly, any chance for repentance or something? I'm kinda trying to get a feeling on who Shade is. Is he a good guy, is he a bad guy? He's a normal guy for wanting his human life back, that's understandable. He loves his family, that's good. But his desperation drove him to experiment on an innocent child.*facepaw* I hope there will be an "I'm sorry" moment somewhere...
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Well he did say sorry to mark in panel 10.
Well if you look closely at his expression when mark was in pain he was sad and sorry. he always was talking to mark the whole time if he didn't care he would just inject him when he was a baby, but he raised mark and then when he was 3 years decided to not keep him a secret and change him so he can be with his family more often. shade is a good guy ^^, He just got a little cared away at times XD, He and mark have a great bond, it's just bad first impression as mark had in trouble in the midst. Shade has a reserved personality, he is caring, and curious.
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Yeah, I noticed. But its kinda hard to say he really cares for Mark like a son if you don't show it proper. Otherwise people will get the wrong impression...again.XD
It kinda seems like you have a plot hole in here. Shade takes care of Mark and loves him like any father. The transformation moment obviously gives off a bad impression between the two, but Shade would soon turn around and comfort Mark, wouldn't he? He'd also introduce Mark to the rest of the family and show all wonders of being a pokemon, making Mark a part of the family. So if everything goes all hunky-dory how come Mark makes it sound like he was only treated like an experiment? RPing with him gave me the impression that he hated his "father" for sticking him in the body of a Zorua. Its not adding up.
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Mark and shade are very similar so they both make bad first impressions XD.
Well no not really a plot hole just things you don't know yet >W<
Mark loves shade but sometimes gets confused on stuff because he was so young he doesn't quite remember things exactly, shade treats him very kind but sometimes has to deal with marks bad reactions to the formula and mark thinks shade is experimenting on him but in realty he is trying to help him, here is also a spoiler, mark was kidnapped by shades co workers and used as an experiment of science but mark thought it was shades idea and later figures out it had nothing to do with shade so he forgives him again ^^
Also mark felt like an experiment even though he wasn't just by the fact he was change from human to pokemon.
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Sounds complicated, but it makes more sense now I guess.
Still, I don't think your first page clearly show Shade's intentions well enough. If you want my advice, I suggest adding just a few more panels to show how Shade took care of Mark; Feeding, dressing, teaching him to read and write. Heck you can even add a funny scene of little Mark playing around with Shade's equipment and Shade trying to keep him from braking anything.XD Then you can add the transformation after and people won't give as big of a lip about Shade's misdemeanor.
Sorry if I'm being very nosy about how you do your story...
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Oh XD the reason i skipped the three years cause i thought people would get bored of shade raising mark XD
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I don't think they would if you just summarize it all in just a few panels, three or four would do.
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Oh I made a page and i will put it as deleted page so people can see those three years in a nutshell, and you gave me an idea on why mark got confused, shades co workers made a devise that will disguise themselves as shade so that mark thought it was shade instead of the other scientists ^^
Then after trouble in the midst he was found by shade and he explain everything so they became partners in the lab
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But since Mark is now captured by Alex in trouble in the midst, how does he go to be with Shade?
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Alex lets him go sense he found out mark is a human, he and the others meet jewels family and mark tells alex he can go back on his team whenever they need him. ^^
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And what about Jewel's amnesia and meeting up with her family again?...WAIT, don't tell me. I'd like to see it for myself.
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Actually i changed my mind again XD, mark finds shade before finding jewel again. and it's not in the comics, do you want me to tell you? >W<
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Well if your not going to reveal it in the story, might as well. But I don't see why you can't put it in the story somewhere since its a slight hole that could use the filling. Don't want to leave loose ends, no matter how small.
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Well to me it's unimportant cause she slowly gains her memory back ^^ , but i would put it in the story if there was room cause i already put in so much stuff XD.
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I thought we were talking about how Shade finds Mark again before the main series starts.
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oh yes, mark finds shade before the series starts and that why mark comes to find her ^^
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That explains why Mark knows Jewel.
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whoa.. Jewel's dad....
okay..okay i take back everything bad i said about Mark lD
cause becoming human to a pokemon is just rough...very rough xD
and hopefully by "Mark and I" proved them wrong.... he meant himself;f as the scientist.. an not as.. you know.. transformed himself lD
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XD yeah mark had a kinda bad childhood, and shade was a human scientist.
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whoaz O.O
sooo... Jewel could be part human then..? lD
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lol shade was just excited >W<
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well his hysterical laughter is evil sounding XD
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well his worked on that formula his entire adult life so he's super happy XD at least it didn't say evil laughter >W< like Muhahahahah >
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well thats what I take hysterical laughter as XD
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Oh XD Well he's not evil >W< Just a little crazy lol
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hahah yes but he's not always like that he treats mark like his best friend and raised him like his own son, he just needed to change him so he can be with his family more often then with solely mark in his lab.
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yeah I'm just teasing shade ^^
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Shade," Well I am not a phycomanic, I simply got over excited at the fact i can return to my human state, although i never did" he laughed embarrassed.
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well you should be more concerned about when mark was whimpering.
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Shade," Mark cried over everything as a child, I kinda got use to him whimpering although i see your point" he sighed," I should have comforted him more, but i was so overwhelmed with joy i forgot".
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if he's like a son you should take better care of him.
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