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zephyrus7 — A Life Changing Decision

Published: 2004-03-11 23:25:17 +0000 UTC; Views: 182; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 19
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Description This is a really short one. It was originally the first verse of a song that I was writing with my band but I turned it into a 1-minute poem with music by myself. I like the rhymes and the rhythm though, see what you think.
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Comments: 4

enfilade999 [2004-05-11 04:50:51 +0000 UTC]

you say its a verse from a song for your band? i think it would work good in a song. nice work

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zephyrus7 In reply to enfilade999 [2004-05-11 20:46:27 +0000 UTC]

hehe cheers It's almost finished now!

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Sakura-la [2004-04-19 00:49:19 +0000 UTC]

You're pretty good! ^_^

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zephyrus7 In reply to Sakura-la [2004-04-19 08:20:23 +0000 UTC]

hehe thanks, that was just a little verse for a song for my band, but thanks anyway! i kinda like the flow on this one,
Zeph.
(Not gonna finish it tho, lol)

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