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Published: 2004-03-11 23:25:17 +0000 UTC; Views: 182; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 19
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This is a really short one. It was originally the first verse of a song that I was writing with my band but I turned it into a 1-minute poem with music by myself. I like the rhymes and the rhythm though, see what you think.Related content
Comments: 4
enfilade999 [2004-05-11 04:50:51 +0000 UTC]
you say its a verse from a song for your band? i think it would work good in a song. nice work
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zephyrus7 In reply to enfilade999 [2004-05-11 20:46:27 +0000 UTC]
hehe cheers It's almost finished now!
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zephyrus7 In reply to Sakura-la [2004-04-19 08:20:23 +0000 UTC]
hehe thanks, that was just a little verse for a song for my band, but thanks anyway! i kinda like the flow on this one,
Zeph.
(Not gonna finish it tho, lol)
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