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Published: 2006-08-17 09:22:39 +0000 UTC; Views: 416; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 4
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No sooner has that become thisThan it is transformed to that again.
Chris rarely listens outside,
He is too fascinated by the world.
I am trying to explain
the Metamorphoses in a way
that forces him to concentrate,
but the subtleties confuse him.
“I reach for that glove.
I wear it. It is a good fit,
It hugs but does not squeeze,
It warms but does not heat.”
He thinks I am delusional.
He looks at me, quizzically,
Then at the glove. I turn
Around, then back to him.
“Here, try this on, it is a
glove. It will fit you well,
It is soft but not weak,
It is plain but not dull.”
I remove one of his mittens
And slide his hand into the glove.
It does not fit him. It is far too large.
I try on his mitten and move us along,
But my fingers get cold. I turn back to him,
“Would you like me to take that glove back, Chrat?”
He looks bewildered. He holds out his hand,
Then his eyes start to sparkle, and, “Chris!” he squeals.
I kneel down, kissing his shivering cheek,
Returning his mitten, I father a smile
His eyes burst with colour, an opaline shine,
And we move along, his hand small in mine.
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Comments: 9
elvata [2006-09-24 20:03:21 +0000 UTC]
EEk, I love this. It's SO awsome, keep it up, LOVE the style!!
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zephyrus7 In reply to elvata [2006-09-27 10:18:02 +0000 UTC]
Haha wow well thank you, what a compliment.
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feelinhungry [2006-09-10 14:32:41 +0000 UTC]
I particularly appreciate the last two lines. Definitely a different style, but not a bad thing. Exceptional, as usual...
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feetpeet [2006-08-17 22:03:09 +0000 UTC]
It sounds nice, it has a good flow to it and it quite me amused the way through.
aka I wish I could comment properly on lit.
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zephyrus7 In reply to feetpeet [2006-08-18 18:18:15 +0000 UTC]
Thank you - I will get back to your note asap - sorry I don't have very much internet access at the moment, am doing a PC-Laptop transition and my Laptop doesn't have internet.
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feetpeet In reply to zephyrus7 [2006-08-22 12:55:05 +0000 UTC]
No worries, I will not like hunt you down and make faces at you cause you have crap/no existant internet.
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czavelle [2006-08-17 13:17:24 +0000 UTC]
i love that the subtleties are not on the metamorphisis of the glove through the this and that.
a lot of the communication here is completely not verbal.
what a beautiful poem - nice flow and language.
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zephyrus7 In reply to czavelle [2006-08-18 18:22:28 +0000 UTC]
Thank you very much, it's greatly appreciated - I'm glad you liked it so much.
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