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ZerachielAmora — For the Spire

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Description *The scene takes place in the Spire. Lucien is sitting on a chair. Theresa is standing in front of him, yet her position is away from him.*

Theresa: I do not appreciate lies.

Lucien: I apologize, fortune teller. The Spire will be finished within the next few years, granted my obedience program goes well. Soon I will make the world free of chaos, and the likes of you.

Theresa: That is your plan?

Lucien: I swear it.

Theresa: Perhaps you should swear on these, then. *She throws the Hero fate cards.*

Lucien: …What do you want?

Theresa: The timetable in which the Spire will complete. When the Hero returns, *she slowly turns around to face Lucien. She has on her classic smile.* this place shall be mine.

Lucien: Yours…?

Theresa: You lack the Strength, Skill, and Will required for the Spire to awaken. With all the Heroes being recruited into my hands, I can turn your attempt at conquest into a fall from pride.
You see, your foolishness brought the fourth to me, where they burned for revenge. That hate will soon be turned against you, and your fate will be sealed within these walls.

Lucien: The fourth…?

Theresa: The Hero of Bowerstone. You killed his sister, Rose.
He has been fighting diligently on the path to vengeance, preparing for a ritual and a destiny I have helped him with. The road has been long, and he has suffered much. *She begins to walk closer to Lucien.* However, those sacrifices will lead to something great. The weapon that will destroy your plans shall be summoned. *She then stops right before Lucien, staring down at him.* The hero you thought dead will destroy you as well, just as the Hero of Oakvale defeated Jack of Blades hundreds of years ago.

Lucien: What do you know about the Hero of Oakvale?

Theresa: Lucien, surely you know he had a sister?

*Theresa leans in and lowers her head. She remains a moment, then raises her head slowly. As she does so, Lucien sees flashes of her younger self, the blind seeress that grew up in Twinblade’s camp.*


EDIT:I added the rest of the scene's script, because I probably won't get to doing the comic of it ever, or even just trying to make an AC-styled image of the last part of the scene.

This is a Fable 2 adaptation of the scene with Kadaj and Rufus in Final Fantasy 7: Advent Children. I made my own 'script' version of this scene, replacing Rufus with Lucien, and Kadaj with Theresa. I might make a comic based on the entire adapted scene, but we'll see.

This is a part of that scene. Instead of raising ID cards, as Kadaj did, Theresa is holding up three of the fate cards she hands you after you complete your first dungeon. I had to recreate those cards, which was annoying, but I did get it done. Each of the three cards above represent the three Heroes you need to collect in Fable 2. There are 2 other fate cards in the game, but they're not needed here.

The card template was created by =DarkJediPrincess :[link]

Enjoy
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Comments: 53

E1fking [2013-04-02 23:04:33 +0000 UTC]

while reading this i pictured in my head Theresa and Lucien kissing

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Slytherin313 [2011-06-12 16:31:08 +0000 UTC]

OMFG! blew my mind! *picking up pieces of cranium*

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Rocketfist14 [2010-09-04 00:54:59 +0000 UTC]

THIS IS AWESOME!

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ShinySeabass [2009-12-24 04:53:57 +0000 UTC]

I agree with you that she is a really good character, as a matter of fact she was just about the only character (besides Garth and maybe one or two more) I actually liked... I was rather disappointed in Fable II...
And very good job!

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ZerachielAmora In reply to ShinySeabass [2009-12-24 04:56:02 +0000 UTC]

It was sad that there wasn't many main characters in Fable 2.
But Theresa is awesome.

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ShinySeabass In reply to ZerachielAmora [2009-12-24 05:04:35 +0000 UTC]

Yes, tis' sad.
true!

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NamelessManic [2009-12-12 06:30:44 +0000 UTC]

I always wondered what she will do with that spire now? I don't like being used!

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The-Shady-Lady [2009-11-27 06:09:38 +0000 UTC]

Very nice, and I like the scene you wrote for it. It's very fitting. :3

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ZerachielAmora In reply to The-Shady-Lady [2009-11-27 06:11:27 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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The-Shady-Lady In reply to ZerachielAmora [2010-01-13 01:00:57 +0000 UTC]

Welcome.

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xXRiderXx [2009-10-27 23:41:10 +0000 UTC]



Holy crap...

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ZerachielAmora In reply to xXRiderXx [2009-10-27 23:45:29 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

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xXRiderXx In reply to ZerachielAmora [2009-10-28 16:44:34 +0000 UTC]

Ya welcome!

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CheeseBallz [2009-10-03 06:06:43 +0000 UTC]

I love this!

Theresa is my fave character.. haha.. i nearly wet myself with excitment when i found out she was in Fable II- even if it doesnt really makes sense yet. haha. OH WELL I LOVE HER ANYWAY!

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ZerachielAmora In reply to CheeseBallz [2009-10-03 15:25:56 +0000 UTC]

Theresa is awesome.

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CheeseBallz In reply to ZerachielAmora [2009-10-04 01:14:55 +0000 UTC]

Indeed!

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Basic-Hedgehog [2009-09-07 12:29:52 +0000 UTC]

This is fantastic. I'm still trying to figure out why she lived so long yet the Hero did not. o.o;

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ZerachielAmora In reply to Basic-Hedgehog [2009-09-07 16:03:36 +0000 UTC]

Well, maybe the Hero did, but we just don't know about it...
Then again, in that book about the Hero of Oakvale, it says he used the Sword of Aeons to defeat Jack, but that meant that the Hero had to kill Theresa to use that sword. Perhaps she survived the hit, and through the sword's power, became immortal?
Just a thought here. XD

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Basic-Hedgehog In reply to ZerachielAmora [2009-09-07 19:55:45 +0000 UTC]

Could be, or perhaps she's a Highlander, only time will tell. XD

Kidding about that, that'd be dumb. XD

But yeah, could be, but they should never have set something like that into stone, kinda kills the aspect of the first game giving you choice of everything if they're going to make evil canon.

Kinda like in KOTOR II Reven's gender and fate are left completely unknown, and the only hints are something you choose to make the character say.

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zero93 [2009-09-03 18:57:12 +0000 UTC]

This iS FRAKKIN' awesome.

that cold,dark atmosphere surrounding her is well made.I like this sort of presence you made.

I like the cards.MAYBE WE SHOULD MAKE A CARD BATTLE GAME OUT OF IT.I want that mystic fire card.GIMME.

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ZerachielAmora In reply to zero93 [2009-09-03 18:59:42 +0000 UTC]

Thanks so much! I had finished it a while ago, but I updated the description so you could read the whole script of that scene. XD

The cards are fun. It would be amusing if there was a game involving it, but I think the cards are mostly for tarot readings and whatnot...

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zero93 In reply to ZerachielAmora [2009-09-04 05:39:52 +0000 UTC]

well Good job anyway!

COLLECTZ THEMZ ALLZ

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Blue-Demon-Hybrid [2009-09-03 04:21:27 +0000 UTC]

so cool

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Miss-Tristie-Enne [2009-08-16 03:01:48 +0000 UTC]

Wicked.

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ZerachielAmora In reply to Miss-Tristie-Enne [2009-08-16 03:02:40 +0000 UTC]

Thanks a lot

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Miss-Tristie-Enne In reply to ZerachielAmora [2009-08-16 03:08:12 +0000 UTC]

No problem. She's awesome!.

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ZerachielAmora In reply to Miss-Tristie-Enne [2009-08-16 03:14:35 +0000 UTC]

She is.

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Miss-Tristie-Enne In reply to ZerachielAmora [2009-08-22 01:47:01 +0000 UTC]

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Miss-Tristie-Enne In reply to ZerachielAmora [2009-08-16 03:07:36 +0000 UTC]

No problem. She's Awesome!.

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scarecrow1031 [2009-08-05 16:31:44 +0000 UTC]

i love this its saddends me they left this cutscene out of the game

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ZerachielAmora In reply to scarecrow1031 [2009-08-05 16:32:46 +0000 UTC]

It would be cool if they did have a scene like this...I should do the comic of the full scene sometime in the near future.

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scarecrow1031 In reply to ZerachielAmora [2009-08-05 16:37:53 +0000 UTC]

well to be honest i think they did but they cut it out

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Calibure [2009-07-26 09:28:32 +0000 UTC]

i always thought teresa had a darker side to her

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ZerachielAmora In reply to Calibure [2009-07-26 15:49:58 +0000 UTC]

I agree.

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Poison-Stripes [2009-07-26 02:48:28 +0000 UTC]

Just wow!

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LockeBlackCloud [2009-07-25 15:39:08 +0000 UTC]

The one thing that draws my eyes most are the cards, they look awesome. And very neat idea you have there with the switch over. XD

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ZerachielAmora In reply to LockeBlackCloud [2009-07-25 15:46:15 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much! X3 I appreciate it.

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DarkJediPrincess [2009-07-24 23:28:03 +0000 UTC]

Nicely done~ And excellent use of the template~ Looks very nice, all around!

...I always kinda wondered why Theresa wanted the Spire >.>

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ZerachielAmora In reply to DarkJediPrincess [2009-07-24 23:33:53 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

I wonder that as well.

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ReleveeMySweet [2009-07-24 20:22:13 +0000 UTC]

Wow...that's very interesting. 8D

Great art and coloring too~

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ZerachielAmora In reply to ReleveeMySweet [2009-07-24 20:29:45 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much!

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TruemyTheWise [2009-07-24 05:37:43 +0000 UTC]

It's amazing to watch you. Your style is getting sooo good!

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ZerachielAmora In reply to TruemyTheWise [2009-07-24 14:23:19 +0000 UTC]

Thanks X3

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TruemyTheWise In reply to ZerachielAmora [2009-07-25 18:54:05 +0000 UTC]

^^

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PianoxLullaby [2009-07-23 22:56:09 +0000 UTC]

This turned out really awesome, Zera! <333

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ZerachielAmora In reply to PianoxLullaby [2009-07-23 23:18:52 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much X33

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riku-cloudloverI3 [2009-07-23 20:44:45 +0000 UTC]

its so crazy how you're art looks like 3D CG D: as if it might move at any moment.

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ZerachielAmora In reply to riku-cloudloverI3 [2009-07-23 22:36:05 +0000 UTC]

I was aiming for that AC look, thank you so much!

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riku-cloudloverI3 In reply to ZerachielAmora [2009-07-24 05:13:12 +0000 UTC]

it totally has that kind of feel x3

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ForensicRockinRisu [2009-07-23 19:04:47 +0000 UTC]

Purday! I love this!!

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